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Reviews For Hesperides' Apple

Name: SeekerRain5375 (Signed) · Date: 11/23/13 3:54 · For: 31. From Violetta to Hathor
Very very very very descripted,perfect dialoge,and you got their personalitys right. You must right more fanfictions to get practice then make up your own story in the little world in your head.


Name: DiaFlower (Signed) · Date: 02/10/13 10:59 · For: 31. From Violetta to Hathor
Your story was really good. You have a knack for writing. I think you should write your own stories, you know, to get practice.


Name: baby54boomer (Signed) · Date: 02/01/13 16:15 · For: 31. From Violetta to Hathor
The wait was well worth it. Such a descriptive narrative; well constructed and easy to read. The images are grand, complimentary to Draco's persona. You have created an atmosphere of resolution in this final chapter: Draco and Ginny putting their past in the past and setting their joined hearts and minds towards a future for their boys that would be full of expressive love. Well done.


Name: Luna_Fae (Signed) · Date: 01/27/13 17:02 · For: 30. Malfoy Manor
Really disappointed. I really really loved this story, but its been over a year since you updated and I've just lost interest.


Name: cuna molfoy (Signed) · Date: 05/06/12 15:56 · For: 10. Preparing Halloween
Sorry i haven't comented in awhile but this is totally wicked this story is awesome
lily ragen


Name: cuna molfoy (Signed) · Date: 05/06/12 12:13 · For: 1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished
Holy shiz that was sweet


Name: sirius pink (Signed) · Date: 03/14/12 13:25 · For: 30. Malfoy Manor
Nicee, cant wait for the next chapter


Name: Ami RIvers (Signed) · Date: 02/28/12 17:08 · For: 1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished
i LOVE this story i check everyday for the next chapter


Name: deathlyhallowsgirl (Signed) · Date: 02/08/12 4:20 · For: 17. The Weasley lineage
that battle part was very intresting i know this sounds crazy but did u not cry just a little while writing that


Name: deathlyhallowsgirl (Signed) · Date: 02/04/12 5:41 · For: 15. Christmas secrets
i new ginny was pregnant


Name: deathlyhallowsgirl (Signed) · Date: 02/04/12 5:13 · For: 14. Escalating tensions and subsequent blows
well draco sure showed cyrus


Name: deathlyhallowsgirl (Signed) · Date: 01/30/12 2:44 · For: 12. Treading on dangerous grounds
It sounds like ginerva is pregant


Name: deathlyhallowsgirl (Signed) · Date: 01/27/12 23:15 · For: 9. Of ice and Wood
when is ginny gonna tell draco who she really is ???????


Name: deathlyhallowsgirl (Signed) · Date: 01/26/12 23:11 · For: 6. Until death do us part
the hermione part didint make sense


Name: deathlyhallowsgirl (Signed) · Date: 01/26/12 23:10 · For: 6. Until death do us part
the hermione part didint make sense


Name: deathlyhallowsgirl (Signed) · Date: 01/26/12 23:10 · For: 6. Until death do us part
the hermione part didint make sense


Name: Ami RIvers (Signed) · Date: 01/20/12 20:32 · For: 30. Malfoy Manor
Good chapter! ready for the next one!!


Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 01/17/12 18:57 · For: 30. Malfoy Manor
Very good!


Name: Hermione-who-loves-Draco (Signed) · Date: 01/17/12 12:29 · For: 8. Kindling suspicion
Hey Ogygiasylph, the story has been very intriguing and interesting so far. But, the mention of Dhaka completely won my heart. I'm from there, you see.

Very well written. :)


Name: sirius pink (Signed) · Date: 12/28/11 23:31 · For: 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort
Finally you update! I had feared you had forgotten about us. Keep Writing!


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