Name: crbluvsravenclaw (Signed) · Date: 06/21/12 2:36 · For: Lost Souls

That was so beautiful!(:

Name: MaddieTheWizard (Signed) · Date: 07/02/11 5:53 · For: Lost Souls

Wow. That must be true. I will not be going to Azkaban if my life depends on it.

Name: olapepsicola (Signed) · Date: 05/18/11 14:44 · For: Lost Souls

i know its short but its soooo kool

Name: ElmandPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 12:03 · For: Lost Souls

awesome!

Name: QSnape (Signed) · Date: 03/13/11 19:22 · For: Lost Souls

I come to this tanka poem via the "Top Ten" search. I was looking for the top ten shortest stories, as I'm obsessed with short forms. This is wonderful. You did a great job capturing the feeling of hopelessness. The entire poem is lovely and descriptive. My two favorite lines are lines three and four. And the last line sums it all up beautifully. Thank you for posting this.

Name: AccioPotter7 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/11 12:49 · For: Lost Souls

Wow, great work. You should be proud! I really got the "prisoner's take" on Azkaban. Thanks for making my HP day!

Name: lunathewerewolf (Signed) · Date: 12/28/10 23:49 · For: Lost Souls

this is awesome!

Name: KyraLIkesPie (Signed) · Date: 10/16/10 18:47 · For: Lost Souls

U M you missused rapt.....it should be wrapped.
Congrats on being the shortest story.
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Name: OtterMoone (Signed) · Date: 07/25/10 23:38 · For: Lost Souls

Wow... Very nice :) ! I would say "epic", but I think that might ruin the mood...

Name: anait1 (Signed) · Date: 07/20/10 6:01 · For: Lost Souls

wow...this is really quite touching....i love how "the biting wind howls, echoing the forgotten" and "souls are lost in Azkaban" Quite haunting, i don't think i'll forget it for a while... really good though!

Name: TheQuibler (Signed) · Date: 04/11/10 6:54 · For: Lost Souls

Sad...

Name: ech1811 (Signed) · Date: 04/10/10 19:45 · For: Lost Souls

wow! That may be short, but it was great! Like the people sometimes say, "It was short but not-very-sweet." By the way, I do not mean this rudely, I am just trying to make a joke because I am bored and it's about evil stuff.

Name: SLyThEriNShiP__x (Signed) · Date: 09/10/09 3:19 · For: Lost Souls

not good, brilliant! :)

Name: Ava Marie (Signed) · Date: 09/04/09 20:46 · For: Lost Souls

Funniest thing EVER when I saw Love Letter's comment. I thought she was speaking another language. That was mean. But I do like your poem a lot. This gets the point across very sharply.

Name: ron lover (Signed) · Date: 07/05/09 23:06 · For: Lost Souls

Very true.

Name: 19826harryp (Signed) · Date: 07/02/09 10:58 · For: Lost Souls

Awesome poem! This has an interesting view I wouldn't think of. 5/5 stars from me!

Name: LB22 (Signed) · Date: 04/14/09 5:47 · For: Lost Souls

Wow, I never thought such emotion could be found in so few words! Congrats at being the shortest fix ever!

Name: you_know_who_m (Signed) · Date: 02/21/09 15:25 · For: Lost Souls

beautiful.

Name: Magic Marauder (Signed) · Date: 02/14/09 16:27 · For: Lost Souls

that was deep, really deep

Name: beatlemanial (Signed) · Date: 01/10/09 21:37 · For: Lost Souls

beautiful.