Name: laceymoibella (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 13:22 · For: Ghosts of Memories Hidden

You did a splendid job with this story. It is beautiful and touching. One in which we see both the ghosts in a new light.

~Lacey

Name: Striped Candycane (Signed) · Date: 12/14/07 14:46 · For: Ghosts of Memories Hidden

This is a truly brilliant piece. It is written in such an elegant style, one that lingers in the reader’s mind. The Grey Lady is wonderfully portrayed: we get a very clear picture of her haughty past and remorseful present. The little touches of an almost-romance are also very well done. You don’t try to drown the reader in them, but rather immerse them slowly, so that they are completely mesmerised.

But it is the theme of redemption that truly brings another dimension into the piece. The Grey Lady’s struggles to forgive and therefore be forgiven really make the reader think, and the final removing of the chains is wonderfully poignant and symbolic. Great work!

- The Order of Ravenclaw House Elves

Name: theawesomeness (Signed) · Date: 10/27/07 15:09 · For: Ghosts of Memories Hidden

sweet! 10 out of 10

Name: Marie Granger (Signed) · Date: 10/26/07 21:37 · For: Ghosts of Memories Hidden

Very interesting to see someone take the point of view of the Bloody Baron and the Grey Lady. It was saddening to hear how all it happened. Good job.

Name: nikkiolapotter (Signed) · Date: 10/26/07 20:01 · For: Ghosts of Memories Hidden

Oh. My. Stars.

That was bloody fantastic! I even turned up my music so that nothing would distract me from this beautiful story! The descriptions were fantastics, and I couldn't stop my eyes from scrolling down the page. I could imagine every single aspect of it, and it was very very very very enchanting.

I only had one nitpick-

How he had longed to be in her good graces for so long, and it was finally here.

For some reason, I would've liked something other than 'it', but it was still a gorgous fic. You are truly talented!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your encouragement! Thank you also for pointing out the awkward sentence...I fixed it so it makes more sense. ;)