Name: Cheshlin (Signed) · Date: 05/07/09 19:27 · For: Chapter 1

Wow. That is a very good poem. I really enjoyed reading it. :) Cyns

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 05/09/08 13:03 · For: Chapter 1

Very nice although it doesn't really seem like a dream. It seems like his whole life. Thank you.

Name: Jenn_Weasley (Signed) · Date: 05/09/08 9:24 · For: Chapter 1

Very nice! Poor Severus - I think you captured his pain well.

Name: BookofSecrets (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 20:27 · For: Chapter 1

That was kind of heart-breaking. I did not read the summary before I read the poem, and I like that, even without reading the summary first, I was able to tell that the poem was about Severus. Good characterization!

Name: beaternumber1 (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 18:03 · For: Chapter 1

I'm not sure if i really understand it but i liked it all the same!

Name: Love_Snape (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 17:48 · For: Chapter 1

That was really good poem.