Name: Ithinkrabis2people (Signed) · Date: 09/11/11 1:45 · For: Chapter 1: A Scribbled Note

I really, really liked this. I do feel that Kingsley gets a little over-looked sometimes, and the issue of people who were recruited but didn't want to join the Order almost never comes up. I also love that Sirius is such a big reason for Kingsley's decision to stay - I think he probably would have felt quite a bit of personal guilt, and I love how you portrayed that. :)

Name: Ithinkrabis2people (Signed) · Date: 09/11/11 1:44 · For: Chapter 1: A Scribbled Note

I really, really liked this. I do feel that Kingsley gets a little over-looked sometimes, and the issue of people who were recruited but didn't want to join the Order almost never comes up. I also love that Sirius is such a big reason for Kingsley's decision to stay - I think he probably would have felt quite a bit of personal guilt, and I love how you portrayed that. :)