I've got up to chapter 6 and I love it so far. I think JK Rowling might have some big competition here
Yaayyy *cheering*
I actually have some constructive criticism for you. The paragraph where Bellatrix is describing to Hermione the progress of how the Cruciatus curse causes a person to lose their mind....it seemed too scientific for her. Too lengthy and detailed. I don't see her like that. That's just my interpretation of her though.
I love the direction of the plot! Man, I particularly enjoy the complexity of emotions going on inside of Draco.
It's all so suspenseful! I'm loving this story!
Whoa! So intense!
I enjoyed how you briefly described little excerpts of each of the character's holiday. :)
I enjoyed how you briefly described little excerpts of each of the character's holiday. :)
Such great writing! I love it so far.
I love how true-to-character this is! For everyone.
Oo la la! Is all I have to say. :)
Oo la la! Is all I have to say. :)
Oo la la! Is all I have to say. :)
Amazing chapter! My question though, why did Draco have to throw the pieces away? Why didn't Lucius just use magic to repair the vase?
pleaseee put the squeal up soon! I've really loved this story and would love to her what happens next
pleaseee put the squeal up soon! I've really loved this story and would love to her what happens next
This is the best chapter yet. It's exciting to see Draco's compassion and the way his mind struggles between right and wrong. Great job!
This is the best chapter yet. It's exciting to see Draco's compassion and the way his mind struggles between right and wrong. Great job!
This is the best chapter yet. It's exciting to see Draco's compassion and the way his mind struggles between right and wrong. Great job!
This is the best chapter yet. It's exciting to see Draco's compassion and the way his mind struggles between right and wrong. Great job!