Name: foolondahill17 (Signed) · Date: 10/04/14 16:33 · For: Dumbledore's detention

You have a pleasant writing style and I'm intrigued with the characterization of Beatrice: she promises to tell an interesting tale.

Author's Response: Thanks; hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/06/13 14:50 · For: Dumbledore's detention

I started reading this story again. I forgot I was reading it and liked it although I must have written it down in my notes somewhere.

Author's Response: You're a champion reviewer, Fynnsmom; your review count puts most of us to shame.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 07/20/13 18:21 · For: Dumbledore's detention

I'm always interested in new stories about Voldemort. This was very well written. I'm wondering why Bernard has to tell Tom Riddle. And, I'm wondering who the mysterious author is. Maybe Rita Skeeter? She doesn't look that old though. And she's an Animagus so you'd think she'd be better at Transfiguration.I shouldn't guess. I never know anything.

Author's Response: The narrator is Beatrice Avery and her cousin is Bernard Avery -- he's the Avery mentioned in canon, a Death Eater-in-bud. Their names are mentioned only obliquely in the first chapter. (Sorry. My beta told me off for that; I should have listened to her.) Rita Skeeter is yet to be born (at least for the purposes of this story), but she and Beatrice both had long careers as journalists -- so look out for her later on.

Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 07/09/13 19:46 · For: Dumbledore's detention

This was great! Cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. There are more chapters coming (but they'll need to get past my excellent beta first).

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 07/07/13 20:08 · For: Dumbledore's detention

I hope you update quickly. Good beginning

Author's Response: Updates will hopefully be frequent, as I have a lot written in advance.