Name: Kerowyn6 (Signed) ·
Date: 12/30/13 16:09 ·
For: Chapter 2: The Magical World
I like this a lot! It's nice that you made Tatiana black, that's something that irked me about HP: no black characters.
Name: Dad (Signed) ·
Date: 11/12/13 13:52 ·
For: Chapter 2: The Magical World
It is too much like the original plot. Try to get some more varied stuff in here. Well written,
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! The next chapter is probably the last that will closely resemble the original plot, and after that the story will go in a different direction. In general, I'm keeping these things the same: the whole Horcruxes thing, and the leaving school to go hunt Horcruxes in year seven. Otherwise, I'll be sure to change it up!
Name: majoko da witch (Signed) ·
Date: 09/14/13 16:01 ·
For: Chapter 1: So Magic Really Does Exist
post more!
Name: majoko da witch (Signed) ·
Date: 09/14/13 15:02 ·
For: Chapter 1: So Magic Really Does Exist
best story ever! i
Author's Response: Thanks for the positive feedback. Is there anything specific you liked?
Name: Dad (Signed) ·
Date: 09/09/13 12:59 ·
For: Chapter 1: So Magic Really Does Exist
Interesting characterisation. I hope you can keep a fairly original story line and don't just repeat the books.