Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 08/18/15 18:07 · For: To the North

I think you did a wonderful job on Daisy's accent, although I don't know anything about that:D. I just sounded good. I loved this chapter. It was good to see Dudley and Harry getting along so well. I really had to laugh that Daisy thinks she's a witch because she learned how at a local "witch store." Dudley looked horrified but Harry did give advice on not telling the elder Dursleys.

Author's Response: Daisy’s accent is mine. Although I try to moderate it, I know from experience that if I taak ower quick (talk too quickly) no one outside can understand me. Years of reading novels helped with my writing, but I sometimes wonder if some northern expressions creep in. You’ll see more of Dud ‘n Daze later.

Name: sejackson91 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/14 21:56 · For: To the North

Hmm... Millie Flynn huh? Sure that's not Millie Flint? I think I know where this is at some point going. Well done as usual.

Author's Response: Certain! Anyway, who is Millie Flint? :-D -N-

Name: MoMagic (Signed) · Date: 02/12/14 23:36 · For: To the North

Can't wait for Dudley's 20th!

Author's Response: Thanks.
There's a long way to go before you'll see Dudley's party.
-N-

Name: fi103r (Signed) · Date: 01/29/14 23:10 · For: To the North

Dudley grows up who would have imagined? It must have taken maximum restraint to avoiid asking Dudlley's 'witch' what house she was in at Hogwarts. Excellent, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Dudley started growing up in OotP, I think. Harry just managed to stop Ginny from asking that very awkward question. -N-

Name: bigtimer (Signed) · Date: 01/29/14 19:07 · For: To the North

i just love how you've made dudders a bit better then he was but not completely different like in other stories

Author's Response: Thanks, he carries a lot of Vernon's genes, so I couldn't change him completely. -N-

Name: minervassister (Signed) · Date: 01/29/14 12:34 · For: To the North

Like the way you have made Dudley believable. He has grown up and become much nicer but he isn't perfect.
Looking forward to the party and the "foes".

Author's Response: Thanks. Dudley has been molded by Vernon and I hope that some of his opinions reflect that.
Next, we visit The Burrow, then it's off to Belgravia.
-N-

Name: Lady Aliena (Signed) · Date: 01/28/14 23:12 · For: To the North

A witchcraft shop owned by Millie Flint and her husband...now why does that sound a bit suspicious?

I'm thoroughly enjoying all your stories. You've created wonderful cannon-compliant additions/extensions to the Potterverse.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
The surname is Flynn, not Flint, but I'll say no more.
I try to keep all of my stories canon-compliant, I hope I succeed.
-N-