Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 07/24/15 23:16 · For: Chapter 1

I'm trying to figure out what would be so bad that I would want to travel around with Greyback. Not only is he a werewolf but he's a cranky werewolf. Was there a story before this one that explained how our two characters got to Orlando? Funny story!

Author's Response: There was a story before this - Fear and Loathing in Florida (Mostly Loathing). But Scabior is with you in wondering why he puts up with Greyback, haha.

Name: Kerichi (Signed) · Date: 07/03/15 17:55 · For: Chapter 1

I just found your story, and as someone who hasn't read the Fear and Loathing original, I think you did a great job of making this one stand alone while making me want to go back and read the first adventure. You have me wondering how many mini golf places are in Orlando and why Scabior would be able to Apparate to them. Does he like playing mini golf? :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Also, there are a lot of mini golf places in the Orlando area. I wanna say, looking at Google maps, there's nearly twenty, but it's a large area. Personally, it was a thing I noticed while in Orlando at one point, so I reckoned maybe Scabior had noticed as well in his time there - maybe they were landmarks for him. (I very much doubt Scabior and Greyback would choose to play mini golf, though thinking on it I can fully imagine Scabior (unhappily) taking a job at a seedier course at some point in their Florida travels). Anyway, thanks so much for reading and reviewing, and making me think a little!

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 10/16/14 9:43 · For: Chapter 1

I do mot know whether to giggle silently or laugh out loud.

Author's Response: ...Apparently I never responded to this. Thank you for reading and reviewing, and surely it depends on whether there are people about.