Name: weekup (Signed) ·
Date: 08/04/17 3:41 ·
For: Chapter 1 - The Squib's Journal
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Name: weekup (Signed) ·
Date: 06/12/17 7:29 ·
For: Chapter 1 - The Squib's Journal
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Name: flyen (Signed) ·
Date: 05/05/17 9:45 ·
For: Chapter 6-Homecoming
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Name: flyen (Signed) ·
Date: 05/05/17 9:44 ·
For: Chapter 4-Directions
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Name: flyen (Signed) ·
Date: 05/05/17 9:44 ·
For: Chapter 3-Disillusoined
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Name: flyen (Signed) ·
Date: 05/05/17 9:43 ·
For: Chapter 2-Warrior
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Name: flyen (Signed) ·
Date: 05/05/17 9:42 ·
For: Chapter 1 - The Squib's Journal
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Name: flyen (Signed) ·
Date: 05/05/17 9:42 ·
For: Chapter 1 - The Squib's Journal
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Name: ILikeToRead (Signed) ·
Date: 07/16/15 12:30 ·
For: Chapter 7-Family
What a wonderful story. I laughed and cried through the entire reading. Thanks so much for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!!
Name: Kerichi (Signed) ·
Date: 07/13/15 16:00 ·
For: Chapter 7-Family
Bit disappointed that Jeffrey married Clay's old girlfriend instead of Skeeter, but in the end I'm glad because now I don't think he's too much of an ass for preferring memories of a past love to a love that could grow and deepen past the first flush of romance. The ending with the family reunion beyond the veil and the reunion with Sarah was touching. I'm already thinking of someone to hit up to nominate this story for a Dark/Angsty QSQ (General cat is filled, sadly, but not too much, since this is great angst).
I saw another reviewer's comment that she knew you would finish the story because that was...I thought the phrase was "your wont" (lovely old fashioned term that fits this story) but went back and found out it was your "custom". It's a good one. I finish every story, too, because when we start posting, there's an implied promise to readers to make the story worth the reading and to finish what we started. I know real life gets in the way of doing that sometimes, but that just makes me appreciate writers who keep their promises to readers even more. :)
Author's Response: I agree, The only stories I now read are one shots or one's that show complete. I've been sucked into too many that have never been finished.
Name: Kerichi (Signed) ·
Date: 07/13/15 12:18 ·
For: Chapter 6-Homecoming
There is so much to like about this chapter, how hard Jeffrey is studying, his "hearing" Clay and Sarah, and Jeffrey returning to Godric's Hollow like a non party-hardy prodigal son. I'm glad Jeffrey's still alive and Harry gets to meet him.
My one slight nit pick is your characterization of Ginny. Do you really think she didn't "realize" that university requires a terrific amount of work when both Harry and Hermione in your story attended Muggle universities? All the many nights Harry spent working on papers or revising for exams, she never noticed because she was reading romance novels or going to bed early to be fresh for Quidditch practice? You made Ginny sound thick and Harry and Hermione deserving of Bat Bogey Hexes for patronizing. Maybe the Ginny dreamt of in your philosophy is thick as well as a bit of a slag with those numerous affairs Harry wondered about in an earlier chapter(idly, now that I think of it, not even concerned or upset at the idea that someone could have forced himself on her).
OK, enough of that, I'm getting a bit tetchy. It's good when readers have strong reactions, right? ;) And it's your story, you're free to characterize her and everyone else anyway you like.
Author's Response: Dear Kerichi - My turn to nit-pick (chuckle). Ginny isn't around until almost the end of Harry's college days - my take on Harry's post Hogwarts life in my first story. I see Ginny as a very independent and adventurous. I do give her a bad cast of PTSD from her time in the Chamber of Secrets.Poetic License.
Name: Kerichi (Signed) ·
Date: 07/13/15 11:55 ·
For: Chapter 5-Sarah
Harry thought about the first time he kissed Ginny, and how he hadn't fallen in love with her, he had grown to love her.
Your impressions of Harry during HBP and in general differ from mine, so I just say, "Have a cup of shut the heck up, Harry, I'm reading this for your uncle, not you," when moments like this happen and go back to reading. :D
So sad about Sarah. Have you ever read Herman Wouk's The Winds of War (it was also a miniseries). Sarah and Jeffrey remind me of Byron and Natalie, although Natalie was American and didn't go to Israel until War and Remembrance. I had a nice mental image of the couple.
Name: Kerichi (Signed) ·
Date: 07/13/15 11:48 ·
For: Chapter 4-Directions
That paragraph about Harry wondering if Ginny ever had someone force himself on her during her "numerous affairs" when they were apart and him still thinking fondly of his affair with Luna was the one WTF? moment in this chapter, but since this story's canon reflects your previous stories that readers (like me) may not know, I got over it. Every writer has his or her own head canon.
I'm liking the Jeffrey will eventually hook up with Skeeter, like uncle, like nephew vibe.
Came back and copied, then deleted review so I could resubmit it with a final thought: If Harry had a romance with Luna (or even a friends with benefits relationship), then naming his daughter Lily Luna seems crass, unless you imagine a wizarding version of the show Coupling where everyone slept with everyone else and they were all still friends (and it's still crass, but amusing).
Name: Kerichi (Signed) ·
Date: 07/13/15 9:34 ·
For: Chapter 3-Disillusoined
Worrying about grades and tests isn't exciting reading like war injuries and travel and family drama. There's a reason why fiction is said to be like real life without the boring parts. ; ) Harry isn't being insensitive as much as a typical reader, and you were a sensitive author to summarize the boring bits, heh.
Name: Kerichi (Signed) ·
Date: 07/13/15 9:12 ·
For: Chapter 2-Warrior
The jungle must be like the Forbidden Forest, only many times worse.
You do an excellent job of showing that Harry is still naive about war in some ways.
I'm beginning to think I'll be needing to beg someone with nominations left (they limit them to five this year!) to nominate this story for a Best Dark/Angsty QSQ.
I'm sad Clay was a Bubba Gump and not Lt. Dan.
Name: Kerichi (Signed) ·
Date: 07/13/15 8:56 ·
For: Chapter 1 - The Squib's Journal
Hello! I've almost started reading your story several times and I'm glad I finally did! If they allowed multiple categories, I think you could have put this in Dark/Angsty too. There's angst in the premise of learning about your squib uncle through a journal in a memory box, and Uncle Jeffrey's entries have angst, sometimes openly, sometimes a subtle undercurrent.
Love Clay and the Forrest Gump homage to Greenbow Ala-bama!
Name: Oregonian (Signed) ·
Date: 05/02/15 1:44 ·
For: Chapter 5-Sarah
Hi, Ken. I’m so glad you got this chapter posted, sad though it is. Poor Jeffery, he loses everyone who is important to him, his family whom he had to leave behind in England, then his Army buddy Clay, then the woman he loves. He must be wondering what is the point of going on.
I am looking forward to your next chapter, and so is my daughter, who said she hoped you intended to finish the story, but I am sure you will, because that is your custom.
Vicki
Name: Dad (Signed) ·
Date: 05/01/15 14:11 ·
For: Chapter 5-Sarah
Tears rolling down my cheeks.
Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) ·
Date: 02/13/15 12:43 ·
For: Chapter 3-Disillusoined
enjoyable read.
Name: Dad (Signed) ·
Date: 01/31/15 13:33 ·
For: Chapter 3-Disillusoined
I have got to the stage when I wonder what Jeffery will do with the rest of his life.