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Name: xukaimin (Signed) · Date: 04/17/17 3:42 · For: Lovers' Quarrel
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Name: shadowkat678 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/15 20:16 · For: Lovers' Quarrel
It's pretty good, and entertaining...although in some places you could work on wording and making it smoother. Try not to use the same describing word more then once in the same few sentences. I noticed this most at the beginning.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It's early days, so always room for improvement. Also, thanks for the constructive criticism. Always need feedback :)


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