Name: Oregonian (Signed) · Date: 05/04/15 23:53 · For: Prologue - The Battle

Hi, AM,

This is Vicki of Slytherin House, and I am so glad to read in your bio that you have decided to try writing fanfiction of your own, after reading and enjoying stories written by others for so many years.

I thoroughly enjoyed this little introduction to your story, and I am looking forward to being greatly entertained by your promised series of newspaper and magazine articles and announcements to tell the story of the recovery from the war, as seen through the not-always-objective-or-unbiased eyes of news reporters.

You have captured the style and tone of news reporting well, including the editorial comments, the innuendos, and the little mistakes of fact that creep into what is supposed to be objective journalism. The result is gently humorous and fun to read. A good start to your fanfiction writing career!

Thank you for writing.

Vicki