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Name: BrokenPromise (Signed) · Date: 05/28/15 18:17 · For: Chapter 1
Aww this story is so sweet! I'm afraid I haven't read The Game but I'll go and do that now! I like the way you characterise James and Lily as far more balanced than their obvious caricatures often are. I loved James' general 'nervousness' in particular. I also really liked your Sirius - it's so obvious that he deeply cares about both his friends and wants them to be happy, no matter how much of a pain he himself often can be! Thank you for writing such a lovely story. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!


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