Name: jordankots (Signed) · Date: 07/18/15 9:00 · For: scars on his heart

This is so beautiful!

Name: Kerichi (Signed) · Date: 06/14/15 18:14 · For: scars on his heart

Shangri-la in the everyday, in being fully present in the now. My first thought: wow, this totally different than I thought it would be. Second thought: Luna could teach Zen masters a thing or two.

I enjoyed the way the rhythm of the poem and phrasing of "well, death" evoked the character so well that I could have read "She forgets" and known it was Luna's pov by the end of the first stanza. The contrast of physical and emotional scars was poignant. The only concrit I have is the use of "I" in the last line jarred me a bit. I can see why you wouldn't want to use "you", but since she's being universal, for some reason I expected her to say, "than one would have guessed."

So glad I went looking for something to read today!