Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/29/16 16:41 · For: Chapter 6

Whizoo was a cute nickname for the Who's Who book:D I loved your last line--I wish you wouldn't smile when nothing is funny. I'll have to remember that. I don't think I've ever read a story that had the main character be Obliviated and then struggle to figure out what happened. That was interesting. In the past it seems like such a happy occurrence to forget things--I mean, people who are Obliviated don't know what's happened and don't seem to worry about it. You've made it seem more realistic.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 02/15/16 18:42 · For: Chapter 6

Twists and turns, but still a good story.