Longing... by AstroFire
Summary: A little poem Ron wrote in one of his History of Magic classes while Professor Beans recited with monotone voice. To who it was addressed? To Hermione, of course!
Categories: Poetry Characters: None
Warnings: None
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Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 340 Read: 1469 Published: 06/06/06 Updated: 06/07/06

1. Longing... by AstroFire

Longing... by AstroFire
Author's Notes:
This is my first poem in MNFF. I know there are several rules and parameters for poetry, but I write them for myself, so you will find this poem follows none. This poem was firstly written in spanish, so that could be a reason why there's not too much rhyme :)
Disclaimer: I own nothing of this. I’m just having fun using JKR’s characters and my imagination. I’m not making any money out of it, and no copyright violation intended.

Dedicatory: To my muse of this poem.







"Longing..."





I love you
in a way I cannot explain,
in a way it can only be felt and lived.

Your eyes captivate me,
and your beautiful smile shakes me.
My hands are your hands,
and your heart makes my blood run.

If to have you for a second
I’d have to give everything I am,
then I would think that the sacrifice
is not worth of the reward.

Your laughter is already carved in my heart.
Your hair sliding down your shoulders,
surrounding your face,
will forever occupy my senses

Your face is… resplendent.
I have no other way to describe you
but by the love
I profess towards you.

I wish you could know how much I love you,
but I find that the paper is not enough,
because however long the parchment is,
it cannot contain the fire of my longing.

I desire you beyond the physical.
I desire your flesh without the lust.
I desire your lips without the morbidity.
I simply desire your soul completely.

To hold you between my arms is my wish.
Your smile is my dream.
Your hands are my thinking.
Your love… is my reason.

Your voice will always make me smile,
and your eyes will always destroy my fears.
But your love is the thing that will redeem me
because you are my salvation
and my doom…





The End






A/N: Ah, well, I really hope you liked it. I must admit that it somehow sounds different in english (I did some changes to improve it a tad).

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Thanks for reading!
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