Keen Eyes by DorkDax
Summary: My pondering of the Mind arts, Legilimency and Occlumency.
Categories: Poetry Characters: None
Warnings: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 122 Read: 1606 Published: 11/22/07 Updated: 11/22/07

1. Chapter 1 by DorkDax

Chapter 1 by DorkDax
Disclaimer: I'm new so I'm sticking it here, I don't own Harry Potter.


Keen Eyes

Bright as Sirius,
Shining,
Oh so blinding.

Seeking uncertain truth,
Staring,
Standing and daring.

Privacy is breached,
Thieves,
So dignity leaves.

Piercing deceitful minds,
Lies,
Accursed keen eyes.



Guarded Eyes

Shielded from all,
Hidden,
Lost and forbidden.

Buried so deeply,
Entrenched,
Memories are benched.

Lost with time,
Misted,
Distorted and twisted.

Hard and apathetic,
Shies,
Those guarded eyes.


A/N: As you can tell, I’m rather new to the idea of posting, what I think at least, is queer poetry; you could call it a mutated haiku. PLEASE REVIEW, I want to know just how horrible I am or if you think this style is weird. ;)
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