I Saw by BrokenPromise
Summary:

Helena Ravenclaw has seen many things as a ghost and as a girl.

This poem placed third in the Negotioting with the Dead challenge over at Poetry Anyone, for which it was originally written.

A big thank you to Natalie/hestiajones for giving me feedback in PA and made this poem what it is now!


Categories: Poetry Characters: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 215 Read: 1183 Published: 07/20/12 Updated: 08/02/12

1. I saw by BrokenPromise

I saw by BrokenPromise
I saw, one day, my mother
and her companions found
a school of magic.
I saw students learning, growing.
I saw myself among them,
and them in me.

I saw, still young, love:
a fervent chase, a man
who would do anything for me.
I saw my life in his arms, miserable.
I saw his persistent proposals
and my repeated refusals.

I saw my mother grow sick and dim;
A sapphire round;
The darkness of forests.
I saw, once again, my admirer.
I saw his knife dart in anger, and my life
drain away, red against white.

I saw nothing in death,
but in returning, a penance.
As I returned to her school,
I saw my mother wipe her eyes.
I saw the Baron enchained to the earth
by his true love, devotion and resilience.

I saw, in my eternity, many men rise and fall.
People searched for my mother’s diadem,
but only twice did they suceed.
I saw my mother’s castle in ruins.
I saw jubilation etched on every face, yet
indescribable pain clear in their eyes.

I saw too much in my lifetimes,
whether I wanted it or not,
or did me any good.
I saw though, nevertheless:
I saw, and I will keep seeing
until I can see no longer.
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