The Sun Sets in Paradise by Nagini Riddle
Summary: On a bright night enriched with the full moon, a young boy races across the meadows, only to meet his dreadful fate.

Written for the Birthday Challenge in the Great Hall.
Categories: Poetry Characters: None
Warnings: Violence
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 116 Read: 776 Published: 10/31/12 Updated: 11/01/12

1. Chapter 1 by Nagini Riddle

Chapter 1 by Nagini Riddle
The Sun Sets in Paradise

The dark sky above
Was spattered with
Pretty stars,
Lit up by the angelic
Pure white moon,
And the cold air
Smelled faintly of
Entrancing pleasures.
The spiky grass
Glowing with dreams
As the little boy
Chased away fireflies,
Sandy hair flopping
In front of his eyes.
A laugh escaped as
He ran, wild and free,
Innocence dwelling
In his small heart,
Not a worry in the world.
A high-pitched whine
Filled his ears...
Doggy!
Searching among
The fields,
The tiniest hand
Held out.
A red gleam appeared
In the night-
The toddler screamed-
A flash of teeth and
An ugly snarl
Are all the boy witnessed
Before blackness
Overshadowed him...
End Notes:
Remus, Remus, Remus. I felt so bad for him when I learned his story! Hope you have enjoyed this little tribute.
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