Comments: Wunderbar! I loved the story. She is by far my favorite character, can not tell why. I so wanted to see her seventh year in the movies, alas... Very nicely written, excellent use of language. I only saw one typo somewhere in there, but excellent, again. I liked your story line, though the transition to the night of the incident felt a little harsh and it took me a minute to figure out where we were. I really liked you descriptive narrative and excellent dialogue.