Overall a nice little story, although the short chapters make it very choppy. I would highly recommend you spend a bit of time rereading and doing a through spell and grammar check. In the early chapters there are frequent occasions of missing or misused words that make for a rocky read. Common misspellings are 'allright' (should be either 'all right' or 'alright' and 'definately' (definitely). All in all, I am enjoying the story. It could just be made even better with a judicious going over by a rigorous beta whose opinion isn't prejudiced by love. ;D
So all that going on about misspellings, and I miss spell 'thorough'. *eyes roll* How embarrassing!
His fears? Flying...his own wand...fitting in...sticking out! His best friends? A passionate fire-breathing cousin, and a cool, aloof Death Eater's son. His destiny? Anything but ordinary!
Join Albus as he experiances his first year at Hogwarts and begins the journey out from under his father's collosal shadow, if he can survive it of course!
Meet the new Tenacious Trio, Albus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, and Rose Weasley
This looks cute! I shall be checking for updates.
Author's Response:
Add it to your favorites it will inform you of my updates...see you at the next one!
SLy