04/23/05
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My name is Caitlin. I'm sixteen years old, and a sophomore in high school. I play tennis and badminton. I'm a very girly girl, but also sporty too. I like to dress up at the mall with my friends and see movies and hang out. I also really like to write stories, and I hear I'm a pretty good writer. But, that choice is up to all of you.
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Date: 05/01/05 Title: None
Hi, I love your story outline and plot, they are really good. But, your formating and paragraghs are all wrong, and sort of confusing. I suggest that you hire yourself a beta, so that it won't be as confusing. Please update soon.
Harry's our WHAT??? by Kelsid
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: *Last chapter is up!* Due to a mishap in Charms class, James and Lily are taken away to Harry's time, only to meet Ron and Hermione. Kept hidden away from Harry by his two best friends, Ron lets something slip about Harry, James and Lily's relationship. Will James and Lily find out about their son, or at least before Remus, Sirius and Peter in the Marauder era figure out a way to bring them back? Includes people turning into ducks, Monty Python quotes and lots of Marauder goodness. PLEASE R & R- Hint, this does not mean read and run!
Date: 05/01/05 Title: Chapter 12: Frank the Duck and Other Odd Tales
I like your stroy and it was a good idea, but it is kind of confusing.
Date: 05/04/05 Title: None
Hey, great chapter!!! I can't wait to read more!!! I absolutly love to Haunted Mansion; when I was little, I was scared to death of that ride, and I never went on it, but then a few years ago, I finally went on it for the first time and I loved it!!! Next, you should have them go on Splash Mountain or Space Mountain, that would be cool!! Or pirates.... I hope that Hermione doesn't truly think that she was possessed. lol. Please update soon, like I said, I love your story!! It's on my "favorites" list on my account.
Date: 05/02/05 Title: None
Hey!! I LOVE your story!! This was a great idea for a fanfic!! So, next they are going to the Haunted Mansion huh?? That is one of my favorite rides at Disneyland!! Please update soon, because this is a REALLY GOOD FANFIC!!!
Date: 05/02/05 Title: None
Hi, I love your story so far!! In future chapters, you should have them wander over to California Adventure, and go on the Tower of Terror ride, that would be cool!! So next they're going onto the Haunted Mansion, huh?? That is one of my favorite rides!! I also think that you should make them go on Splash Mountain or Star Wars, that would be sweet!! Please UPDATE SOON!! I love this story, I can't wait untilthe next chapters!! PLease hurry and update!!
Date: 05/02/05 Title: None
Also, this was a great idea!! I can follow the trio directly to where ever they go, since I know my way around Disneyland and California Adventure well enough, so it's good that you picked a topic where like everyone can relate!! I can't wait until you have them meet Mickey and/or Minnie!! Please update soon!!! Perfect 10/10!!!
The Strongest Bond of Love by dark arts master
Rated: •Summary:
A story about how the love between two people can turn out to be more than just love, but a life saving experiance. Plenty of suspense and twists and turns! Please Review: tell me you love it, hate it, want to change this or that, hell, tell me all about the secret conversation you and your cat had last night! Just review!
The Sequal is up! Look for Love Fulfilled in the Dark/Angst section by me! the dark arts master! So go read it, now! It's even better than the first one!
Date: 06/01/05 Title: Chapter 15: Fighting Voldemort
Hey Christine! It's Caity! I read this chapter and I really like it! It was really good! Well, on to the last chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you like it!!! Read on my friend, read on!!!
Date: 06/01/05 Title: Chapter 16: The strongest Bond of Love
Hey Christine, it's Caity! I really liked your story, I thought that it was really good actually! It of course, is one o my favorites on here. WE haven't talked in a while so, I just wanted to say 'hi' and tell you how much I enjoyed reading your story!
Author's Response: Thanks!! Hi back!!! My sequal is officially on the site!!! Love Fulfilled in the Dark/Angst section!! Check it out!!!
Date: 04/30/05 Title: Chapter 12: Finding Hermione
I was totally confused, at first I thought that it was Marietta, then I thought that it was Cho, but then i thought, well this person needs to be 18 or older and they are only what, 16 in this story? Then I thought that it was Amanda, but then I read chapter 11, and I got all confused, it was a big surprise to me that it was Penelope.
Your story is really good, and I really love it, but chapter 12 wasn't as good as I thought it would be, it was to short. So you need to bring up the other chapters soon, because this one of my favorite stories and, oh please everyone, hurry up, I want the next chapters up!!
Author's Response: Dun dun dun! Congratulations! You are my tenth reviewer! YAY!!! Every one should give this muggle named Caity a really big hug, because now you get 13!!! Sorry that it was so short. I really wanted to end the Chapter with the reader realizing that it was Penelope, and I couldn't think of anything else to put in the Chapter! But it was my hope all along that you would suspect it was ALL of those people! I wanted everyone to be confused! But! If you go back an dread Chapter 2 you would remember that Cho couldn't possibly be the heir!
Date: 05/02/05 Title: Chapter 13: Hate and Torture
Hey!! I love this chapter, it was much better then the last one, it has more stuff in it. BTW, I love the story plot and outline, you said that you already put chapter 14 into gear right?? Hopefully, it will show up soon!! 10/10
Author's Response: 14 is written, I shall upload it tomorrow!!! glad you love it! 14 is going to be a crazy chapter!!!
Date: 05/01/05 Title: None
Hey!! I like your story so far, it's pretty good!! At first, when I was reading the summary, I thought that you killed off Harry and Ron, I was so glad that you didn't, but that scared me for a second. I hope that you put up the next chapter soon, I can't wait to read the next one.
Date: 04/29/05 Title: None
I like your story so far, but why is Hermione all of the sudden...Heavy??
Date: 05/10/05 Title: None
Everyone: In chapter 7, when she left the little note saying "read at your own risk", she wasn't kidding. But, still good chapter.
Date: 08/09/05 Title: None
Hey!! They did the same thing with my story. It had a certein issue in it that the mod didn't like, so she rejected it and won't take it unless I take it out, which would alter the entire story. So, I have my stories on Portkey as well, everyone ann deverything is So much better there! Also, I've been readin your third story, The Lost Worlds (The Ultimate Force), and I love it! I can't wait until you update it!! Love, a muggle named Caity GO PORTKEY!
Date: 05/19/05 Title: None
Hello, I definately liked this chapter better than the last one. This one was very good and I think that you are an excellent writer, hope you update soon!!
Date: 05/02/05 Title: None
Hi!! I really like your story so far, it is really good and has a good plot. I hope that you update soon, because like I said, I really like your story. 10/10!!
Date: 05/10/05 Title: None
Ok, so this is how it's going: Tonks transformed into Harry to live at the Dursley's? Ok, and that bit of info that you gave us about Goyle an next, Crabbe, was injoyment or just plain nastiness? But, however, i still really like your story and that you will get the chapter up soon.
A Thousand Words by annie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: For the rest of the Ministry, the interdepartmental challenge was merely a failed attempt to restore trust between workers. But for Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger, it was the catalyst for an unexpected relationship built on passionate letters, concealed identities, and secret meetings – and the beginning of an end that neither of them could ever have imagined possible, not even in their wildest dreams.
Post-war. Based somewhat on the story of the Phantom of the Opera. Also contains R/Hr, so don't read if you can't stomach that ship.
Status: Complete. Thanks for reading, everyone!
Date: 05/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: To My Pen Pal
Hey!! I love your story so far!!! This was a great idea!!! Please UPDATE SOON!!!
A Deep, But Dazzling Darkness by CrystalClear
Rated: •Summary: Death does not destroy everything. You may give up hope, you may feel helpless, you may feel as if you're being crushed by the darkness. But love outlasts death, surviving in the deep, but dazzling darkness of despair. Follow Hermione's journey when a sudden death hits her life. How does she deal with it? Will her love outlast death? The answer is found in Henry Vaughan's poem "The World". She will find "A great ring of pure and endless light."
Date: 04/29/05 Title: Chapter 1: A Deep, But Dazzling Darkness
CrystalClear, That was a great story!! I loved the way you interpreted the poem into it, and you told it greatly. I was sad that Harry died, but it was an overall great story, and I truly loved it!! And that was one of my favorite poems by the way.
Author's Response: YEAH! I know, isn't it a wonderful poem? sigh...I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Still one review for almost 150 reads? Come on, review ppl!
Author's Response: Reviews would be gladly appreciated! I have one review for over 650 reads! That's pathetic, people!
Harry Potter and the Auburn Summer by ProfessorMeliflua
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry and Hermione spend most of the summer after fifth year together, but the circumstances aren't quite as fluffy as you might think. AU after OotP (thank God!). Due to what I must assume are censorship issues, this story will not be continued on mugglenet. If you wish to finish reading it, I will be posting it on fanfiction.net.
Date: 05/10/05 Title: Chapter 6: OWLs Without Hats
Hello! I really like your story so far, but hopefully it will pick up a little more in later chapters. Also, will the fact that Harry and Hermione are going to get together happen soon? 10/10 so far, great job!! Oh, yeah, please update really soon!!