great chappie! I love James but i want it to be Lily and Sirius. but if they are together then there is no Harry Potter! its so ahrd to decide. update soon pleaseeee?
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great chappie! I love James but i want it to be Lily and Sirius. but if they are together then there is no Harry Potter! its so ahrd to decide. update soon pleaseeee?
Author's Response: three… Anyway, I can\'t tell you how it ends! I\'m glad you like Lily/Sirius though. And I guess I should say that this fic is going on a temporary, month-long hiatus, but will be back in February! Check my author\'s page if you want to know why.
awww poor sirius. love this chapter
Author's Response: Thanks!
wow great chapter. i loved it. it was beautiful. i like how you added Sirius kind of getting jealous of James because he thinks Lily is falling for James.
I also like how you put Lily liking things being stable. it is her, somthing i think she would be worried about.
I also loved the letter. it was so beautiful and sweet. it was also sad. poor Sirius.
Its weird but i think that im starting to like Sirius and Lily together instead of James and Lily. lol!
please update soon!!
Author's Response: Yep, Sirius is getting more and more jealous of James the more paranoid he gets. :D One of the main obstacles Sirius does have to go through — besides the whole James thing — is the fact that Lily loves to be safe, but everyone sees Sirius as a reckless sort of guy. Anyway, I\'m pleased everyone seems to like the letter… I was afraid it might come off as pathetic, even though I meant it to be seen as sad and desperate — poor Sirius, he has no one to talk to. I\'m very glad to hear you like Sirius/Lily more than Lily/James (at least in this fic). That\'s become one of my goals in writing this fic! XD I\'ll try to update soon!
excellent chapter. it was realley hilarios. i liked this from Sirius'd point of view you undersatnd more and its more funny. update soon.
Author's Response: Putting something in Sirius\'s POV always makes it better! ^_~
awesome chapter. loved it. Hate that Dermot bloke. he's like another Snape.
Author's Response: No, Snape was good underneath, Dermot isn\'t. He\'s just very, very bitter underneath, but I won\'t say what about. ;) :p
~Evie
Nice chapter. kind of short but still good. One question why's Mickey in Gryffindor? anyways update soon
Author's Response: Same reason Cormac McLaggen is - so that he\'s in close vicinity to the main character and can irratate him as much as possible. ;)
Also, he can actually be quite daring - rather stupidly reckless sometimes. He\'s a bit of an agressive kid though - watch out for him in future chapters. ;)
nice chapter. :)
nice chapter. :)
nice chapter. :)
OMG! I HATE THAT THE DADA TEACHER AND EDITH. they mankie me so mad. poor teddy but im glad that they know what the dada is doing to teddy.
"how could he have cursed Al with a name like Albus Severus? " that mad me laugh. love that line. it is a really bad name though isnt it? lol!
Author's Response: :D Thanks for reviewing!
that was sad but stilla good chapter
Author's Response: thank you
that was an awesome chapter. one question does teddy know that remus was a werewolf?
that was an awesome chapter. one question does teddy know that remus was a werewolf?
ooo this is getting interesting. adding the fact that remus was a werewolf and all the predguduces that come with it. poor teddy.
i like when you added teddy about to write to his greandmother and then harry but thn he starts mistrusting them. i like how he starts to think thet maybe his dad wasnt that great. this will make it very interesting. great job! plz update soon.
I hate Dermont!!!!! he's so mean to Teddy. Also Harry and Teddy's Grandma are making it so frustrating, they need to believe to Teddy. Anyways excellent chapter. Merry Christmas or whatever else u may celebrate and Happy New year!!
Author's Response: You haven\'t seen anything yet!! Happy new year to you too! (It\'s a little late for Merry Christmas. ;) )
~Evie
this chapter was rally well done. update soon.
Author's Response: thnx
great job!! really great idea. after i read your first fic i wondered why said no ot james the first time.
Author's Response: Thanks! The main reason I wrote a sequel was because many people seemed to want to know why Lily would say no.
great job!! really great idea. after i read your first fic i wondered why said no ot james the first time.
Author's Response: Oops... double post.
great job!! really great idea. after i read your first fic i wondered why said no ot james the first time.
Author's Response: I feel so appreciated!