Okay, I said that you were good before...well your a good writer with sadistic tendencies toward cliffhangers! And don't pull a JKR! Don't get me wrong she's the tops but now Remus...ooo I just hope that you are right now in that bunker, with plenty of supplies and plot bunnies! Let's just hold a vigil for Remus in the meantime. Perhaps Snape just might wake up and brew a potion (he said he can bottle death, so what about life?). I have to know something, okay Kane can't move but is he REALLY dead? You said you had loads more chapters, I would REALLY like a hint.
OOHHH! I'm the first review! how exciting! Chapter was good, got to build even more suspense.I'm glad that the bunker was safe for you! I hope you have 31 in the queue (SP?). I still think your a sadistic writer (evil cliffies).
Oh your good...G.O.O.D! I loved the fact that you used Cain(Kane)and Abel. But why the CLIFFY? I am so into this and now I'm waiting with the mob for you to update! I only hope that your a fan of happy endings...please tell me that YOUR A FAN OF HAPPY ENDINGS! Other than that great story. BTW am so happy that you did that trick with the Marauders Map, brings back fond memories of James and Sirius (why oh why did you kill him JK?) ;)
I'm glad that the story has lightened up a tad. Can't wait to see what Kane has been doing at the Ministry though. Reynard is such a good character, no wonder he and Moony are such good friends;) Skeeter's appearance was straight canon (nice going with that one) and the article was just as it should be. Keep up the good work!
First off like how you portrayed Lily, being a fellow red-head she is among my top fav characters. Another thingI especially liked how you used names USUALLY reserved for guys to name the friends! I thought I was the only one who liked the idea enough to include it in a story. Good Job!
Author's Response: Thanks. For some reason I just love guy names for girls.
I just started getting into the SS/HG relationship thing. Your story made me really actually like the idea, like you wrote 'he might be a bastard but he was her bastard.' I mean why can't even the most unlovable character in the Canon find some happiness. Makes me think about what JKR has planned for our favorite Potions Master...10/10. But when are you going to get the last chapter up? What have that pesky duo been doing!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my stories. I feel the same way. Snape is a very complex person and you have to wonder what his life must have been like to have made him turn to be a Death Eater. Hopefully we will find out soon. And yes, in my stories he deserves some happiness. I actually just sent the last chapter of this to my beta. So as soon as she sends it back to me I'll post it and you'll find out what those two trouble makers have been doing. Thank you again for reading my work, I'm glad you enjoy it.
This story is one of my favorite humors right up there with Weasleys’ Wizarding Wheezes Gone Bad!!! Can't wait to see if Voldy with succum to the marshmallows. Waiting for the update!
Author's Response: yay, thank you! Yeah, WWWGB is a great story, I haven't had the chance to check up on it in a while. If you're reading, sorry animagirlphoenix!
So Lucius is afraid of Baby Dumbledore (I'm only assuming that's where you got the inspiration from) and not the hunderds of clowns/dementors on the grounds? I think you should have those freaky clowns (CLOWN HATER BIG TIME!) have the same powers as they do in their dementor form. Imagine a stupid red-nosed thing coming to suck out your soul, Lucius would probably say "Awww, aren't you the cutest soul-sucking....wait my soul is being sucked out by a clown!" Imagine all the possiblities! HEHEHE! I was actually crying b/c I laughed so hard! Can't wait for another chapter and contest! Make us laugh!
I read this after I read the stories about Lilly's Marauders 1& 2. You have a talent about humor, so far your writing about Tragedy is up to the standard! Just an idea-use some humor for the more serious scenes in HG/LM relationship and their Romeo+Juliet parallel. Can't wait for an update!
I love this story! I have one question though, how long is it going to be? Don't get me wrong I LOVE what you have done so far, Snape (with HG or oc only) and Lupin (preferbaly with OC, Tonks is good) ships are my favs so to kill two birds with one stone is GREAT! Keep up the good work.
I was fascinated by the pensive the first time J.K. ever wrote it. We all know that it will be an important instrument not only in book 6 but the last one...but the question is how in depth can it go? Will his experience this time in the pensive be different than before? I guess you're going to make it able for Harry to talk to those he meets. Keep going with it!
Author's Response: i guess its kinda obvious--you guessed right
I read this on your other name, is it just me or did you change some of it? I thought that the note scene was longer and in Herbology? I also like the name Elizabeth Wenham, you must be a LOTR fan, I am too. I can't wait to hear her and what you do with her!
Author's Response: I might have changed some, but only to revise. The note scene wasn't changed at all; if you re-read the two they're exactly alike. I really like the name Elisabeth Wenham. I think it's a really good OC name, and I love how the first and last names flow so smoothly. Yes, if not just because of the Wenham bit, I am a LotR fan at heart. Also, you caught my old username, no? I'm glad you reviewed. Thanks!
Interesing, the first time I read it I found it to be a little too like your Bella story, but now I really think that you have something going with Luna. Once again well, done. Do you think you coud perhaps write a humor? How about something with Bella and Severus? Just an idea.
Author's Response: Hmm... I have several plot ideas in my head, which have been evading rent for several months. One is an ironic, sarcastic humor, which I have been told I'm good at writing. And you are right on target with the Bellatrix/Severus story. I started one a month and a half ago! And you make me remember that there are people who would be interested with that, so I think I'll finish the first chapter shortly. Thanks for reviewing!
I was waiting for this story to come...I was thrilled when you said you were writing it! Well done!
Also, I have to give you credit, you're the one who gave me the courage to write a story about Bellatrix. If you would be so kind to review I would love to hear your thoughts, it called 'Passages of Bellatrix'. It begins where book 5 ended. I love how you make Bella really human, not just a manicial crazed witch so many would go to. Once again well done!
Author's Response: I gave you courage? Does that mean you read this, then wrote your story, then reviewed? I'm a bit curious. I will review your story. Thanks very much for all your compliments!
First, I just got done reading your review and you are one in a long line of others who like my writing but not my grammar. I also really appreciate your critism and was actually sort of happy that someone took the time and pointed out the mistakes, beta searching as I type. Second, in response to the question, I was fitting Bellatrix into another fic (Lupin/OC with Lilly and the Marauders) but as I got to working on her and idea came up and I wrote the first chapter to 'Passages'. When I saw that you were also writing about Bella I decided to submit 'Passages' so you gave me the courage to SUBMIT it you could say. Can't wait to see your humor piece!
Author's Response: I gave you courage *ego bubbles over* OK, seriously, I wrote Bellatrix partly because there were barely any stories about her, and I'm flattered that you'd follow my lead! And I am glad to help you make your fiction better!