i am 29, from portsmouth, i am a postman and an avid harry potter fan
my favourite music band is kiss
excellent, i just read first two chapters, well i don't usually read historical fics, but i just saw that summray and iwas intrigued well done
wow, this story seems to be a lot more fluid than the last one, loved this chapter but then i am a nostalgia buff, loved harry and ginnys little duel so what memories did ginny put in the pensieve, probably her secret that she's a gold digger (i'm not going away with this nonsense, its your fault your not giving me anything to strongly criticise
Author's Response: Well, it would stand to reason that my writing is better. My first ever creative writing endeavour was, A Promise Kept. My second was,
Author's Response: Well, it would stand to reason that my writing is better. My first ever creative writing endeavour was, A Promise Kept. My second was, Harry Potter and the Blood Traitor. This story is my third.
My friend, who betas for me, also says that my writeng has improved about a 1000 times over the first chapter of Blood traitor, so it is good to get more confirmation of my improvement.
Quit picking on Ginny. The poor girl finally gets the one thing in life she has ever wanted and you accuse her of being a gold digger.
I tell ya, the nerve of some people.
just a short one for me this time, great chapter. it seems with this story you have made the chapters shorter but stronger, not so much fluff which is good, got to say im loving it so far, and once again im finding it hard to give criticisms, so ill just make a silly twist instead, dumbledore was wrong about the black smoke, ginny was just marrying him for his money, lets face it they weren't that close untill she saw his bank balance (tee hee)
Author's Response: No that is just plain mean. Picking on poor Ginny like that. I'm hoping you keep liking what I write. The relationships drive this story and I just hope I evolve them enough to keep peoples interest through to the end.
that was a great fcirst chapter, it was brilliantly timed and not at all long winded i loved it to bits especially hermione drunk, got to say a few things aboput this whole underage drinking thing and that is well done (AARGH AM I IRESPONSIBLE) it makes them real teenagers at least they weren't standing on street corners drinking scrumpy.
love the fact ginny is able to hold her liquer, she is strong willed and this makes sense, of course she is drunk but she isn't gonna tell people, except harry, loved the subtle way you showed there new power by the way, no critcisms at the moment, keep it up
Author's Response: Hey, I was wondering what happened to you. Glad this starts out well for you. You're correct in it making them normal teenagers, and it would be right up Fred and George's alley to do this. Oh yes, Ginny is sloshed, she just happens to be one of those people it does not show very much on. Some people are like that. Kind of neat how Harry and Ginny can suddenly connect like that once they have admitted their feelings to each other, isn't it?
loved it, it was cool, hermione as a peeping tom funny and intriguing
that was cool. twisted but cool
i loved it it seemed like the type of thing you'd expect well done
actually really cool
Author's Response: Thanks!