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11/13/07




Hi there! I have fourteen stories up, and my favorites are Ripping at the Seams, At the Bus Stop, and Worms for Teeth. Thanks for stopping by!



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A Twin Thing by Miss Muggle

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Fred and George's Hogwarts years, from their very first trip to Diagon Alley to their infamous final flight from Hogwarts.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 12/21/07 Title: Chapter 2: Pranks

Good!
Just for the record, Bill's name isn't Billius (that's Ron's middle name), it's William-- I just reread DH and the priest when he's marrying Bill and Fleur says William.



Ultimatum by Marauder

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Sirius has loved Remus for a couple of years, and James is sick of watching his best friend suffer. So he gives him an ultimatum: Sirius has a few hours to tell Remus, or else James will. Fic also includes Peter, McGonagall, Andromeda, Tonks as a little kid, Regulus, and cameos from Filch and Lily.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Ultimatum

Oh...this was just so wonderful! Loved it! So very cute and sweet! Right on the favourites!



To Sever the Lining from a Cloud by Textualsphinx

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: This tale of the teacher whom everyone loathes,
Accounts for his anger and elegant clothes.
It dripped through my mind when, too scantily cloaked,
I got caught in a rainstorm and throughly soaked.













WARNING: Despite the glints of humour, you will need a handkerchief.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: One shot

Wow that is very good! Good writing and very unique story line. I can't believe you guessed at the Snape-Lily relationship (unrequitted love), even before Order of the Phoenix, let alone Book 7! Nice.



Wanton by painterchica

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: James tries to play matchmaker to the feuding canines. Remus/Sirius. Fun, fluffy ficlet.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 02/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Wanton

LOL!!!!! OMG this was hilarious!!! I was just laughing my head off. Sirius"ly sexy"-- the last line, everything. *grins* "He wasn't just my manly sex slave!" lmao!!



Kiss Me by painterchica

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: It's Lily and James' wedding, and Sirius is going to show them how it's really done...R/S with a bit of L/J on the side. One-shot.

Sequel is "Mind Game"
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 02/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Kiss Me

LOL! Very cute!!! Loved it!!! Hahaha! Did this really happen at your aunt's wedding?? Lol!



Love is Where You Find It by lostunicorn

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Hermione is tired of waiting around for Ron. Ginny isn't too happy with boys herself. It's time for a girls' day out in Hogsmeade, and what the two find there isn't just butterbeer. Seamus and Dean suggested also.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 02/23/08 Title: Chapter 6: A Merry Christmas Afterall

The end?! Oh, so sad, it's over! This was good. Only the second Hermione/Ginny I've ever read (not surprising, considering there are only 15 femmeslashes total on MNFF), and I've definitely warmed up to the ship. They make a pretty cute couple, I have to say. Poor Ron! But at least he gets it now.



Cigarettes & Strangers by MillieMop

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Kind of peculiar, isn't it? How a conversation with a complete stranger can make you feel so much better when the people who call themselves your friends can only make you feel worse.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 02/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Above it all

Yay!! That was excellent.



Could You ever Forgive Me? by phaedra

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: One day after class, he suddenly notices himself watching Harry in the quiety of his classroom. Will he get the courage to confront his feelings to Harry? Slash. One Shot
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 02/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Stalker

Ooh...that was good! Lots of restless tension...nice! One little thing: at the very end, I didn't think the shift in PoV to Harry was very clear until when he said "Oliver", and then I was like, huh? And I had to reread it and then I got it. But that was totally it; otherwise, I loved it.



Mind Games by painterchica

Rated:
Summary: Companion piece to "Kiss Me". Wherein rumors are started, Sirius is manipulative, and Remus is not a coward...
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 02/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Mind Games

"Love muffin" !!!! LOL!!! I love your hilarious slashes. Nice!!!!!! Sirius is frickin' hilarious!!!



My Magnificent Plan by Wintermute

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Summary: The final battle against the Dark Lord has come. Harry is just about to take revenge on Peter Pettigrew, when suddenly Dumbledore reminds him of the big plan - the magnificent plan! ::all Harry Potter conspiracy theories ever compromised in one hilarious story!::
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: -

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was great!!! I can't stop laughing!



Snapshots of an Unremembered Life by Seren

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Partially AU. Eleven year old Harry Potter is in Flourish and Blotts, looking for his Potions text, when he meets ten year old Hermione Granger. They become instant friends, and join the Weasley twins and Lee in a series of adventures at Hogwarts. Based off the books, most canon events take place, but are altered to fit a world where there is no Trio. And no, Ron's not a jerk, he's just not important. Minute OOCness - Hermione is still a bookworm and bright, just slightly more fun loving, and Harry's a bit more bookish. Some canon scenes cut, and new scenes added. Eventual H/Hr.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 05/25/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Ooh, I loved it! I can count the number of AUs I've read on one hand, but this was great! I'd really love to see more--are you ever going to update? I liked Hermione's character and I thought it was cute how Fred, George and Lee sort of babied her. I like the idea of F.G. and L. being friends with Harry and Hermione. And, though I'm fundamentally against H/Hr, I think a very cute pairing could arise from this story. Please update!!!



Hormones by blondebouncingferret

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Draco and Ron both have detention for the same night, what happens with teenage lust meets these two young wizards? DMRW SLASH.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 05/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Hormones

Hahhaha! The ending was great! This was well written and exceedingly entertaining. The first Ron/Draco I have ever truly enjoyed! :) Nice job!



The Power Of Suggestion by FriendsOfSnape

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "Be careful what you wish for," the old adage goes. So what happens when Hogwarts is under a spell where what you say is what you get?


Chappie 14 is UP! And while it is the end, let us not be sad, but instead read the insanity that has driven so many to review and nearly wet themsleves with delight.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 11: The Safety Inspector

Miss Shunn = Mission!

Author's Response: You know, I totally DIDN\'T intend for that to be the pun. It was originally Violet Shunn = Mission. But so many people guessed Miss Shunn = Mission, that I guess that works too.



Harry Loves Draco! by Louisa Chocolatecake

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It might interest you to know that this originally started out in the "Humor" section. It was going to wind up being a (backfired) spell that caused Harry to suddenly fall in "love" with Draco... I ended up moving it to slash because people started yelling at me *laughs*. So, I would call this slash at its lightest and most sarcastic.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 05/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hahaha! This was nice and lighthearted. I laughed out loud at the line "couldn't Ron see he was busy?" One thing: the ending felt rather abrupt, and the fact that a backfired spell was the cause of this sudden bout of lovesickness was not explained except in your Author Note. Oh well. Nice!



A Most Toad-Spotted Traitor by GryffindorGoddess

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Peter Pettigrew is a rat - a rat who betrayed his friends while looking for acceptance.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 12/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Most Toad-Spotted Traitor

I think this is an excellent study of P.P. I like how you don't sugarcoat it to make us pity Peter (I find him despicable and don't think any pathos-laden prose could inspire me otherwise, anyway). Also, I thought it was interesting how Peter refers to James in his mind as "Potter"-- he tries to distance himself from memories of friendship? That was my take, anyway... Love your writing, as always! :)
~Rhi

P.S. Whatever happened to In Storm and Sunshine and like, half your fics? :( *sobs quietly*



A Matter of Malevolence by trinsan

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Sometimes, perspective is everything.



From day one at Hogwarts, Severus Snape had problems, half of his own making, half not; how one interprets those problems depends entirely on one's point of view.



At least with Severus, one principle is always consistent: he gives just as good as he gets.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 02/23/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

YAY!! First let me register my extreme pleasure at an update!! I love this so much, and this chapter did not disappoint! There are some very funny parts to this, and dark ones as well. Excellent! Hmm...is it just me, or is Lucius into Severus as more than just a friend?...probably I've just read too much slash recently. But there's definitely something odd about Lucius. I like him, though. And I really want to find out what happens to Severus as far as getting the grimoire and the equally difficult task of fitting in with his own age group!



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 02/17/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Again, I wanted to say how much I enjoyed this. But just two tiny, picky things: 1. Fortescue wasn't the Potions master during Snape's time--Slughorn was. 2. This was written post DH, but there wasn't any Snape-Lily interaction; he calls her "Evans." Did you decide to ignore DH? Otherwise, I really loved this story and hope to see much more of it.



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 02/16/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Oh, this is so good!!! Right on to the favorites list!!!!! I've had to read it in chunks, though, because when I'm reading the Snape PoV I'm getting SO PISSED *clenches fists* at the Marauders!!!!! UGGGHHH!!! I feel like I need to kill something!!!! So, obviously since I'm getting so worked up you did an excellent job at writing from PoV. It was so strong even the James PoV thing didn't make me happier; I still feel sad for Snape and pissed at how the Marauders are making his life hell. Even though Snape shouldn't have cursed Remus.



Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 02/16/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

POOR SNAPE!!!!!!!!!!!! Please, please, give me more!!! That was so excellent!!! Love the long chapters, btw. Never wanted them to end!



He Made the Stars Fall by cor_leonis

Rated:
Summary: Petunia reflects back on the first time she met James Potter. Their introduction was quite different than she'd expected it to be, and not exactly what she'd hoped for.
Reviewer: Rhi for HP Signed
Date: 10/25/08 Title: Chapter 1: He Made the Stars Fall

*gasp* Wow!!!!! This is so...PERFECT! It's so poignant and sweet and sad... The writing is gorgeous and, honestly, flawless, as are the characterisations. I like, too, that you took something from canon--a small detail that I never even noticed-- and crafted a beautiful story around it. You did a wonderful job of Petunia comparing her love of Vernon to Lily and James' love--it was very touching and sad. I can really imagine that special sight of all the falling stars; wonderful imagery on your part! Definitely one of my favorites.