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Born the Day You Kissed Me by CLee
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: I was born the day you kissed me...I died inside the night you left me...But oh how I lived while you loved me. . . .
The sequel Agapanthus is up!
Date: 09/08/05 Title: Chapter 1: Home for the Holidays
A loooong time ago, before i actually became a member, I had started to read this but couldn't review it cause I wasn't a member. Well, now, I've nearly forgotten the story, so I 'm reading it all over again, and giving it the reviews that it deserves :-) Oh, another thing, I've noticed that you don't reply back to your reviews, and I'd ask you to atleast review sometimes, or show somehow that you do actually read your reviews (sorry, i'm just picky). Really good story though- great start.
Author's Response: Nothing wrong with being picky, I am as well. Just FYI though, my reviews are what keep me writing. I read them all the time and appreciate every single one of them. Didn't know it was in the repitoir for Author's to always comment, but thanks for the tip, i'll try to do it more often...like right now:)
Date: 11/01/05 Title: Chapter 2: Loss of Memory
Hmmm... he's already thinking of her "beautiful brown eyes..." and she's debating which color his are... very interesting. Keep on writing!
Harry Potter and the Punishment for Immaturity by Obliviate
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Mere weeks after OOTP's end, we find Harry in his room. He is unwilling to do anything but lie in bed, demoralized by the loss of Sirius. That is until he receives a letter. This is an AU fiction with some anghst and pairings of Hermione/Ron and Ginny/Harry. Humor is my primary focus however. Story complete. There is a sequel: "The Deepest, Most-Desired Wish." You can find it in the Dark/ Angsty section.
Date: 09/05/05 Title: Chapter 25: Detention and Desire
All in all, this was a good fan fic. There were some places where it seemed kind of OOC, and there were some placc es where it oculd have been better. But the story and your style of writing it made up for that. Can't wait to read the sequel. Good job!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you like my sequel too.
Date: 05/17/05 Title: Chapter 17: Slipping, Sliding, Falling Backward
Well, there was good plot development and foreshadowing of later chapters. Tonks didn't seem to be acting like herself, but I really don't blame her, seeing as how Harry is now only five years old. This one wasn't too capturing, but it was a good chapter all the same.
Date: 05/17/05 Title: Chapter 17: Slipping, Sliding, Falling Backward
Oh yeah, one more thing. Was Harry really reffering to Mrs. Weasley as "Mommy?" Or did he mean his own mother? Just wondering.
Author's Response: You have to focus on his frame of mind. He woke up scared, and thought he was alone. Any five-year-old would ask for a maternal figure. He just wanted comfort. And Mrs. Weasley was fulfilling the job of a mother. So, he did mean her, but not necesarily meaning to say mommy.
Date: 05/17/05 Title: Chapter 18: Hogwarts Letters
I am soooooooooo sorry- the reviews by Hermiones_Secrets were actually mine- somehow it ended up under her name.
Author's Response: Don't worry about it. I'm just glad you like my story and are willing to review. Thank you for all your praise and feedback.
Date: 05/14/05 Title: Chapter 16: Faking Sick
I've been reading this story all along and even added it to my fave stories list, but I just now figured out how to review! (I'm such an idiot). This is an awesome story, and to tell you the truth, I wouldn't pick either of them, though (A) would obviously be the closest. I think he will be able to go back, but not at once- He will have to miss some of the school year. Am I right?
Author's Response: I'm glad you consider my story a favorite. I hope you will continue to review now. Don't feel bad though, it took me a while to learn some things on this site, plus the login issue makes it hard to review anyway. As for your question; read on, and you shall see.
Date: 05/27/05 Title: Chapter 24: Harry “Trouble” Potter
Hi, it's me again. This is a really awesome story, I hope you know that, and this chapter was among the best. True, it's not as funny as most of them but it's tying up loose ends and showing us that everything is back to normal. Rock on!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I appreciate what you said.
The Unseemly Proposal by sparx
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)
Date: 10/28/05 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- The New Rule
jinx is absolutely hilarious, don't you think? I love her!!! I wonder what will happen when they have to partrol hogsmeade alone... all by themselves... you know, something interesting...
Author's Response: She is, isn't she? Absolutely hilarious! I love her. Yup, Hogsmeade trip, all alone, no friends, no PANSY, no RON, let's see what will happen!
Date: 09/04/05 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Pansy’s Outburst
I LOVE the way your story is developing, and the way that Draco, especially, is going through some serious *mind* issues. Lol. Ummm, I do want to read the deleted conversation, but is it ok if i just send u a msg? I don't know if I should put my email address here for everyone to see. Good, no, GREAT job, though. :-)
Author's Response: Heehee, thank you for that! “…the way that Draco, especially, is going through some serious *mind* issues.” --> that’s a good way to put it! It’s no problem, you can send me a message if you're not comfortable placing your email address here. Thanks once again!
Date: 11/08/05 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Patrolling Hogsmeade
oops, i thought that i had already reviewed this.... turns out i hadn't. well, towards the end, i was on the edge of my seat, and that last scene was just sooooooooooooo awesome!!! I luved it!!! I cannot believe that Draco was being so obvious... and is it possible that Hermione didn't notice?
Author's Response: Haha... It's OK, better late than never. Really? I kept you on the edge of your seat? Good to hear that! And thanks!! I guess it is very possible that Hermione did not notice. Or maybe, she noticed, but didn't want to say anything about it... =D
Date: 11/08/05 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- For a Change
Hmmm, i like where this is going. Your fic is getting really interesting (as are the attitudes of both Draco and Hermione). Not to rush you, but update as soon as you can please!!!
Author's Response: Good to hear that! I do hope it gets more interesting as it progresses. Hahah, yup, I will update as soon as I possibly can!
Date: 06/24/05 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Meeting At Midnight
Lol, that was hilarious! This is getting better and better . . . wonder how long it'll take until they both fall in love.
Author's Response: Thanks! They will fall in love...eventually. How and when...Well, you'll just have to read to find out!
Date: 05/27/05 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- Of Popped Buttons and Wrong Accusations
Ha! Hilarious! I wonder what everyone's going to think when word gets out that . . . you know what (lol).
Author's Response: LOL...You'll just to read the next chapter to find out! =D
Date: 09/07/05 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Confrontations and Clarifications
Lol. I'm glad you're having a bit of mercy on them. And I'm sure I know EXACTLY what Dumbledore's up to...
Author's Response: Well, I couldn't be too hard on them, could I? Especially since I have loads of other enthics up my sleeves... *evil grin*
Sweet Misery by Croyez
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: ‘I hate you’ she would say, ‘I can’t stop thinking about you, and I blame you, obviously, for that. I’m not sane anymore; I can’t breathe freely thanks to you. What have you done to me? Why am I so obsessed with what I am not to have? With someone that, clearly, doesn’t feel anything close to this…this misery?’ One-Shot
Date: 05/27/05 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
Wow, this is awesome! I'm not really a draco/ginny or a harry/hermione person, but this was really good, I admit it. I can in an impossible to explain way relate to it. 9/10. Great job!