Haha, love the Draco/Ginnyness of it all! Kind of disturbing, though, in a cool kinda way...Haha, keep writing!
~Aya Braxton~
Hm. I'm quite confused. Let me get this straight: Ginny Weasley cuts, she's a punk-rock ass, some sketchy 16 year old who's in fucking love with Draco Malfoy. He's staring at her and he saves her ass twice; she didn't want to be with him but now they're together; Harry isn't with Ginny? Malfoy's in love with the biggest blood-traitor family's youngest child. Did I cover everything in this riveting story?
Shudder. What the fuck? what the FUCK Just happened? In assumption, Ginny just slit her wrist to a vein, I assume? And Arthur assumes Draco killed her? Hmm....I'm...confused. Yeah, that works. With the whole plot to this glorious wonder of a fanfiction.
Tell him what? Marriage? Pregnancy? *reads on quickly*
Say what? Hot damn! I'll take four. Sorry. Anyways, Harry's a fuck-ass. *slaps* And I lovles Draco. *huggles* He's soooo hott *giggles drunkenly*
What the douche-ing FUCK? She cuts and he--and the she?--but they--and GINNY?!
*reading hastily with looove*
Who the fuck was that? At first I thought Draco, re-read the part about 'dead', thought Harry, listened to the 'own flesh and blood' crap, and finally...Lucius?
Draco? I assume. I hope HE rapes her. Except it wouldn't be rape; she wouldn't mind.
Gag. That was GAY. In a fucking amazing kind of way. However, I was busting a fucking gut. Oh my fucking god, he has the best thoughts in the whole entire world. I was coughing from laughing too hard. XD
It is ambitious Lily Evans' 7th and final year at Hogwarts. She is very excited about being one step closer to becoming an Auror and thrilled about being back to school altogether.
But there is one little annoyance: the Marauders. Specificially arrogant James Potter. He has been pestering her to go out with him, but she has coldly denied his wishes. She thinks this year will be no different to the past six school years.
But life is full of mistakes.
..::~!~::.."Just one minute.” Lily noticed footsteps heading in her direction. She saw a hand reach from between the screens and drop a flower onto her bedside table.
“Mr. Potter! Return to your dormitory immediately!”
“Alright, alright…” The hand disappeared.
Once Lily was sure that no one was in the wing, he lifted her head and saw what flower Potter had dropped.
Lily stuffed her head in her pillow and screamed a muffled scream that no one could hear.
I just re-read the entire thing (it took me an hour) because I haven't read it in FOREVER! I just remembered the existence of my account. Anyways, I'm slightly annoyed that I last read this about half a year to a year ago, and still nothing has changed. No chapter has been added. Don't get me wrong, this is a.m.a.z.i.n.g. as hell and I love it to death!!!
Awww!!!! That was awesome! I loved how....how it followed the only piece of how Lily and James got together that JK Rowling gave us, and yet...it was totally different than any other fan-fiction. She wasn't head over heels for him, her friends weren't involved....She wasn't the first to make a move like in most of the others...She wasn't indecisive and changed in between...Wow. That was...amazing.
I loved it. However, in your Author's Note, your "txt tlk" bothered me. Anyways, it was a fantastic story.
Oh GOD. Stupid memo!!! And that damned baby! Grrr....You're plot's amaaazing blondebouncingferret, and I assume you'll be just the same. ;D *hums tunelessly as I click on*
OH SHIT! OHHHH SHIT! *cracks up* This is working out FABULOUSLY! HAHAHAH! GET BITCHED, EVERYONE, AHAHAHAHA!
Sorry. I know I'm insane. ;D Fantabulous twist!
Oh god everyone's so fucked!
Nooo!!!!!!! He has a girlfriend for three months and just found out he's got a fifteen month old baby you WHORE!
Ugh. These people are all MORONS. Jackasses. You certainly bring them to life quite well--and that wasn't sarcastic.
Sounds like something I would do!! YAY FOR SABOTAGING MISS LUCKY CHARMS!!! HORRAY!
I love watching jealous women argue :D
Hells yes! Too right I would!
you're doing great! I hate Miranda, but that only shows how amazing you are; passionate feeling towards characters...yeah. Anyway.
Yeah, I know. What a bitch, why doesn't Hermione say "and that slut of a girlfriend had about five men down her pants yesterday, kept shooting me filthy glares and was saying Hannah's the next Hogwart's Hoe." Not to mention all the other shit I don't feel like typing. My God, how soft that Hermione is! MAN UP BITCH!