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12/14/07




I'm fun to talk to, although I'm not the kinda girl that starts up the conversation I try to do my best! I like people to be honest no matter if it hurts,people with good sense of humor and energy. I'm very reliable and trust worthy. And I like Harry Potter and the Twins (both in the books and real life), I don't care if people tease me about that, I think they are the best. I don't talk behind people's back; that's too low. I love to eat meat especially beef and pork, I love all sort of candy, chocolate the most. I enjoy hanging out with my friends, though I have just a few... I think there is a time and place for everything and things happen for a reason, we just don't know that reason.


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It's Witchcraft by Nicole_Riddle

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: When Draco Malfoy finds himself falling for the Gryffindor know-it-all, he convinces himself that it’s merely witchcraft. But when they both finally come to terms with the truth, nothing can stop them from being together. This is a tale of forbidden love and dangerous passion weaved into the Half-Blood Prince, where circumstances beyond their control might tear Draco and Hermione apart forever… Check out the long awaited sequal Fatum Amoris...The Fate of Love about Medea Malfoy and Patrick Potter now appearing in the other pairings section.






Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 12/29/10 Title: Chapter 1: With One Look

It has been one of those stories that hooked you up from the very beginning. Forbidden love!!

I’ve always been fan of HG/DM getting together and I love to read FF about it because I think this is one that JK should’ve considered, not only because it would have been the strongest type of love but because( just an opinion) I think Ron is not a match for Hermione’s personality.


The feelings and emotions that you conveyed through the whole story captured the essence of what should this relation be about.



Kissing Harry by Kerichi

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:


A kiss is not just a kiss. After a disastrous Valentine's date with Cho, Harry finds himself alone with Luna and discovers what a kiss should be. Humour and Romance in a story that started with canon and went What If?

 


Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 12/23/10 Title: Chapter 1: Kissing Harry

I know it's been a while since you wrote this one, but I was wandering around and I found this piece. To be honest I’ve always love reading your stories – mind you I’m not as a frequent reader as I was some time ago… still. For what is worth you are a terrific writer who happens to hook up the reader with such easiness, it’s hardly found in anyone else!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for wandering around and finding this story! I've been gearing up to do what I didn't last year (limit HP writing to short stories and finish my original fiction/fantasy novel), and I'm going to print your review to help keep me motivated. :)

I hope you're having a wonderful holiday, and thanks again for finding the story. Your review was worth--and means--a lot. 

 



A Child's Gift by WinkeeJR

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Draco wanted to get away. He needed to get away from all the things that reminded him everyday of the mistakes he had made and the one he had lost. He found the perfect spot too, a small town in Wyoming, USA, a place called Nowhere. A perfect name as far as he was concerned. Magic, fate has a way of finding you no matter where you go though.
Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 01/21/11 Title: Chapter 1: Nowhere

It was a terrific story!! The built up during the story was fantastic, and I loved how you played with the mystery around it. Abby is the perfect Hermione’s baby girl altogether having her own temper and wits!! Draco could be the perfect loving family guy if he acknowledged the fact that he is who he is not who he used to be!! And the ending… OMG!! I couldn’t believe what was happening and actually had to read it twice!! Can I ask you something though….?? Was it really Hermione at the end or was it Justice?? And last but not least… they had a big family with Sidra and Lucian!!! First I thougt one of them was Ginny’s baby… LOL, anyhow… Great story!!



Some Kind of Miracle by annie

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Draco is determined to live the last nine months of his life with no regrets. But when a series of unfortunate events exposes a list of his innermost wishes, ambitions, and desires to Harry Potter’s eyes, he might find that facing his imminent death is not so easy after all. H/D, post-war, rated for later chapters.

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08/23/08: Chapter 22 up.
Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: A Whim

WOW!! great great chapter, the way you outlined both the plot and the characters is amazing!! Off to the next chapter :0P



Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: An Encounter

I love your writting style!! This is one of my favorites stories so far. I loved how Ginny is standing by Harry's side even if he is a pain in the rear to her sometimes!!
All the feelings lying underneath it all!! lol great chapter!!



Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 01/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: A Conversation

*sighs* a lot to say and I dont find the words to describe it!! great chapter I loved how their relationship is changing, subtle but you can still sense it. I liked the way their conversation went, full of hatred and still like they wanted to be there with each other all the way!! lol I love the way you wrote it, really it goes naturally



Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 01/07/08 Title: Chapter 5: A Suspicion

omg!! great chapter, I wonder what Draco might be planning... I guess I have to keep reading :^P



Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 01/07/08 Title: Chapter 6: A Word

Draco KISSED Harry!!! lol, I think that he could try the things he would never do before but that!! marvelous!! I wonder if he'd liked it lol



Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 01/07/08 Title: Chapter 7: A List

“Six: Kiss my worst enemy. Done.” lol great thought!! I can see now what he meant with this all hidden thing!!

"Shit.
The word echoed in Draco’s head over and over again, pounding a dull rhythm against his skull, as he watched Potter pick up the list — his list — and turn it over to read it.
Shit. Shit. Shit. Shi—"
I can't imagine Draco's feelings here, if he really wanted that list to remain secret!!, poor him and having to run into Harry all the time!
Great chapter!!



It Takes a Thief by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

It takes a thief to catch a thief, but when Auror Ginny Weasley goes beyond the call of duty to catch Draco Malfoy red-handed, he catches her off guard, professionally and romantically.

 


Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 12/30/10 Title: Chapter 1: It Takes a Thief

I have to confess here… I’ve been having some time off in my office you know, because of the holidays, and if anyone showed up in my “cubicle” during this time, I’d be charged of not doing anything “productive” (and yes! I’d be declared guilty!).
So what am I to do? READ!! And since I’m addict to FF, where to find a good story?? The answer’s too easy: yours!!

I’ve been always reluctant to follow the canon ships due to the fact that as I have said in some other reviews, they are a little to fluffy and I don’t think the pairings mesh well, so I love and have always been a fan of Draco/Ginny and Draco/Hermione ships, and I started reading this kinds of stories thanks to you!! A tale of Two Matchmakers!! Yes!! I’m not sure if I ever reviewed that one, probably not, but I did read it and I loved it!! And so I was stubborn enough in my head to find some other stories just as good as that one, and guess what!! I found another: This one!!

There are a lot to things that I liked about it: Draco still thinks about his father’s impositions and he can’t let go of the prejudices Malfoy Senior had…and still he takes care of his mother and he is being like a “family guy” to her, showing that he cares about her the way his father probably wouldn’t. I like Ginny’s strength on taking Draco on her own even though no one in their right mind would believe he was up to something and she was totally positive ( and totally obsessed) then the way the three of them (Tonks/Remus/Ginny) solved the puzzle to face Draco!! Wow!!! The mystery about who was behind the burglaries was awesome!! Really I didn’t see it coming… at first I’d thought maybe Harry or Severus was behind them, but then the Minister!! Magical!! And of course!! They ended up together!! The sexual/romantic tension during the whole story was as great as it could be portrayed!!

Thanks again for amazing stories like this one; I’ve to pick up the courage and start reading your Tonks/Remus ones!! I know for sure they’ll be awesome!!

Author's Response:

AHHH! MNFF ate my reply! Son of a witch! I can't remember everything I wrote, but I'm sure it was lyrical and sparkly, heh.

I LOVE the idea of time off in an office. Don't the Japanese have power naps? Why not power reads? Something to lift your spirits before you return to work, work, work all the time. :D

Thank you so much for spending some of your in-office holiday reading this story and telling me what you liked. If they didn't end up together, that would be too sad. It's bad enough the pairing isn't canon; the least I can do is give them a happy ending in an alternate dimension of the Potterverse! 

Whatever you read will make my day. :)



For Bitter or for Worse by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

All is not well.

George uses work and Firewhisky to cope with Fred's death until a drink with a friend leads to something that dulls pain better than alcohol. Emotionally torn by grief, he struggles to allow Alicia into his life...and then comes baby....

*Winner of the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Dark/Angsty Story*


Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 02/09/08 Title: Chapter 26: In the Cards

Holly cow!! I didn't get the updates for this one, and I've been so caught up at work, I must confess I couldn't look for them anyway! I'm sorry :0(
Well, but better later then never right?
It's a nice chapter everyone seems to be having a good time, even Percy (Does that make sense at all?) I can't wait for the mods to fix the site so you'll be able to update!!

Author's Response: From your keyboard to mods\' eyes, lol. I\'m happy you finally had time to read. Hopefully that means work has eased off and life is good to you!

I think Percy would feel awkward trying to fit back into the family, so games would help and that made perfect sense. :)



Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 12/23/07 Title: Chapter 22: Home for the Holidays

WOW!! ok, I'm new to this site, and to be honest I just sign up to comment on this story! I love it so far, the way you have outlined every character and the situation regrading Alicia and George's relation is wonderful. I have to say that I'll look forward to read what happens next... :0) Happy Holidays!!

Author's Response: Thank you for signing up to review! ^_^ I hope you find many more stories to read (not just mine, lol) and have a very Merry Christmas!



Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 01/17/08 Title: Chapter 24: Christmas Eve

WOW! a lot of things to say I don't know where to start...
Well, first Damn hackers they have nothing better else to do? I'll give them something to do then!! but Thanks for sending me the alerts! otherwise I would've missed the update!! lol, and second this chapter had me squealing and screaming, laughing and crying all at once, beatifully written!!

Fleur seems more at ease when she is pregnant doesn't she?? a little less annoying I would say, the hormones are driving her crazy!!

("It's a hot water bottle," said George. "He's committing suicide." When she laughed, he grinned. "I'm to blame for that one.") *lol* hilaiuos, I loved how you played with Calvin an Hobbes like that, amazing!

I think Percy opens up better when he's drunk! and that's just because all the alcohol's making him loosen up a bit more than he is when he's sober
And last but not least, the way George's proposing to Alicia is wonderful, very creative and romantic too!!
I loved this chapter, it was full of feelings and events that are making the story far the best one ever! way to go girl!! Hopefully the next update will work better than this time

Author's Response: Your review is beautifully written! Thank you for that, and loving Calvin. I really do think he and Fred had a lot in common. :D

Thank you again for making my day!



Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 03/20/08 Title: Chapter 27: Interlude

Sure it's been a while, but you know what? I gave me time to read it over and over again!! Oh Sweetie you don't know how much I appreciate your alerts this time XD
As for the chapter what can I say? lol
this is what I expected to be and then some more, Alicia is doing great and George's finally becoming more "likable" and "lovable" ( i don't even know if that word exists) but anyhoo, I loved it loved it loved it, and they are considering marrying in April... gezz o-O

Author's Response:

Actually, the date is March 20th, but that won't come out until ch 32, lol. George will have his angsty moments, but love does make a man more loveable!

Thank you for re-reading the story! I've felt so down about it sinking lower and lower because of a glitch that didn't register updates, so it cheers me up to know you found it to read!



Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 01/23/08 Title: Chapter 25: Christmas

What a wonderful chapter!! what an incredible story!!

"So you like it?"

She looked into his eyes. "Do you mean it?"

He kissed her gently. "Yes." George took the ring out of the base of the nesting doll. "Will you marry me?"

Alicia held out her left hand. It trembled only slightly. "Yes."
*sniffs* up until this point you had me in a frantic state!! Thank you for making her say yes!!
"I am the epitome of cool." He is beyond epitome!! I can picture how cool that dragon coat might look on him.... and he thought about her welfare and the baby's too! he's becoming more caring and alive, so to speak
And he's finally getting over Fred's dead, I mean, he's accepting it better and leting himself go a bit further but at the same time he's still thinking of him but not in that same way, I don't know if you get my meaning lol. It must be hard for him not to have Fred to share those moments! All the family together for christmas, such a beautiful time to spend with them.... I hope George doesn't get to upset with Anne, she wants the best for her daughter after all ;0)
I'm very loooking forward to see what's going to happen!!

Author's Response: Thank you for being frantic! ^_^ Alicia just needed George to give her a reason to say yes, and now that she has, they get the fun of \'have you set a date\'? :D



Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 01/23/08 Title: Chapter 25: Christmas

What a wonderful chapter!! what an incredible story!!

"So you like it?"

She looked into his eyes. "Do you mean it?"

He kissed her gently. "Yes." George took the ring out of the base of the nesting doll. "Will you marry me?"

Alicia held out her left hand. It trembled only slightly. "Yes."
*sniffs* up until this point you had me in a frantic state!! Thank you for making her say yes!!

"I am the epitome of cool." He is beyond epitome!! I can picture how cool that dragon coat might look on him.... and he thought about her welfare and the baby's too! he's becoming more caring and alive, so to speak

And he's finally getting over Fred's dead, I mean, he's accepting it better and leting himself go a bit further but at the same time he's still thinking of him but not in that same way, I don't know if you get my meaning lol. It must be hard for him not to have Fred to share those moments!

All the family together for christmas, such a beautiful time to spend with them.... I hope George doesn't get to upset with Anne, she wants the best for her daughter after all ;0)

I'm very loooking forward to see what's going to happen!!

Author's Response: Yay! You liked the coat! Every man from gunslingers to science fiction heroes looks good in a long black coat! :D

Oh, yes, George is starting to heal, making his memories of Fred part of him in a good way instead of destructive.

He\'ll tell Anne what he thinks...but it might not be in the way he first thinks, heh.



Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 01/15/08 Title: Chapter 23: It's Beginning to Look a Lot Like Christmas

What an amazing chapter!! I've been so caught up in my things I didn't have the time to read it until today and it was a treat after everything I'm going through... Thanks for cheering me up you dont even imagine how this story keeps me on the move!!

Author's Response: I\'m sorry to hear that life is running you ragged but glad that you found time to read! If the darned hackers hadn\'t messed up whatever the heck they messed up, I\'d have another chapter posted. Cross your fingers that I\'ll be able to get it submitted soon! :)



Phases of Learning by Pondering

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: After Fred's death in the Battle of Hogwarts, George has to learn to laugh, live, and love again.






Written by Pondering of Ravenclaw
Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 01/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: To Laugh

*Sighs* Wow!! I loved it!! honestly it has been one of the best chapters I have read here! It was so sad to read at first, but then it takes you to George's heart indeed. It must have been so hard to deal with Fred's death

"He couldn’t even look at himself in the mirror, because the image staring back at him wasn’t his own face, but Fred’s."
I can't imagine what he might have felt... it must be awful to have to deal with the fact that your own face will remind you the one you love's forever:'0(

"He had felt so lost and in his grieving, he had almost forgotten who he was without his twin standing right next to him." I loved this part, because when you think of it, he could have sunk into his grief and no one could have saved him but himself!!

Great chapter all along!... Now I'm off to the second :0)



Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 01/04/08 Title: Chapter 2: To Live

I don't know why but reading this chapter made me sniff a little too much... it's so sad yet so real to have to start living again when you are used to be with someone your entire life, but then again at the end of the chapter George seems to be more enthusiastic about everything!!
Way to go girl! I can't wait to read what's going to happen next ...lol :oP



Between Heaven and Earth by BlackClaude

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Fred and George find themselves between worlds in this retelling of the Castor and Pollux myth.

Written for Nan for the SPEW Halloween Exchange

Reviewer: secretpal1505 Signed
Date: 01/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Between Heaven and Earth

Great story, it's really sad when you come to think about what a twin could do for the other, being a twin myself I could sympathise with George's... but I understan Fred's reaction too! ;oP