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The Long Wait by ancientgirl

Rated: Professors •
Summary: This story has been posted on several sites dedicated to the pairing of Hermione and Severus Snape. She is 22 in this story, and there was no relationship between the two while she was a student. If this pairing bothers you, please don't read.
Reviewer: ancientgirl Signed
Date: 12/09/04 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Just testing something.



Finally by Mary

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "You need to knock, and you need to turn and run. You need a million things, but most of all, you need him." Last in the 'Final Goodbye' Trilogy, HGSS, Post Hogwarts, COMPLETE
Reviewer: ancientgirl Signed
Date: 11/24/04 Title: Chapter 1: Finally

I didn't review the first two, because I thought I'd just wait and do all of them at once. I'm glad you ended it with them together. This was very romantic.



She Wasn't Alone by Soulful

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Summary: Hermione Granger, fresh out of a Dublin Witchcraft University is owled by Professor Dumbledore to come and talk to him about a job opening. Setting all her fears aside about being face to face with the Potion Master she fell in love with in her 7th year, she goes back to Hogwarts. HG/SS
Reviewer: ancientgirl Signed
Date: 12/01/04 Title: Chapter 2: Face-To-Face

Oh you are a wicked evil wench! You have to update quickly. Is he going to be nasty to her, is she going to cower? More questions. I am forever plaguing you with questions.

Author's Response: :) I love the power! HaHa Just kidding. I'm really glad your enjoying this! I don't mind the questions I just hope you don't think I'm going to answer them! I guess you must read on to find out the answers!



Reviewer: ancientgirl Signed
Date: 12/07/04 Title: Chapter 3: Spoken Minds, Sunken Hearts

Hmm, good stuff. Just like a man, too cowardly to tell her what he is really feeling. Can't wait for more.



Reviewer: ancientgirl Signed
Date: 11/28/04 Title: Chapter 1: Extremely Proud

I finally got to sit down and read your story. I've been moving and you can imagine what a pain that is. Anyway, I really like how you have started this. So many questions! Did they leave on a bad note? How come they haven't communicated in 5 years? Does he still love her? I'll be waiting for your next chapter. While, I'm guilty of leaving cliffhangers, I am also human, and hate when others do it LOL.

Author's Response: Wow...the questions! Yes, I am a cliffhanger kind of person, sorry to say and I too am like you, I hate them. HaHaHa. I'm going to type up the next chapter now. So I hope you enjoy the next chapter (s)! Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: ancientgirl Signed
Date: 01/22/05 Title: Chapter 5: What to do? What to do?

I'm so glad you updated this. I love Lupin. Next to Snape he's got to be my favorite character. He's always so understanding and softspoken. I'm glad Hermione talked to him. Don't keep us waiting too long for another chapter, or I'll have to send Crabbe and Goyle after you.

Author's Response: Hehehe, I love Lupin, too, after Severus of course! I'm currently suffering from writer's block...I know it's horrible! So don't send in the goones just yet. Funny, I thought you'd send Osiris and Crooks after me in stead. :-D



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Reviewer: ancientgirl Signed
Date: 12/30/04 Title: None

Hey, I'm very impressed with this story. I really like it. Dudley is such a twat. I swear I can't stand the Dursleys. I'm really wondering what JKR will do to them in the end. I mean after what they have put Harry through, I hope she doesn't make Harry forgive them. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please email me when you have it posted!



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Reviewer: ancientgirl Signed
Date: 12/20/04 Title: None

Okay, so since you've put this in the SS/HG section I'm keeping my fingers crossed its going to turn out okay. I'm wondering what lead Hermione to wed Ron. Is she angry at Severus? Does she think he abandoned her? Please another chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for reveiwing... yay, my favourite author reveiw MY story! I need to work out how to change the rating to R because of langauge, tho.

Author's Response: I wanted to give a more thorough reponse to your reveiw. Whilst I can only give small hints, I can safely say that Hermione is a little confused and unsure by the third chapter. After Seven Chapters are completed, I will decide wether or not a sequel is needed. I won't give too much away. Alot is gonna happen that will leave alot of sadness, and a fair bit of joy.



Reviewer: ancientgirl Signed
Date: 12/29/04 Title: None

Holy cow, what the hell has gotten into Ron? He's insane! I hope they go after him and put him in Azkaban! I'm not sure I understand why Hermione doesn't remember loving Severus before. Also, why did Ron blackmail her to marry him. What did he know? Did he know her and Severus were in love? But then he must have Oblivated her. Please update soon. I'm curious to find out more. Just a question though, this isn't going to be too angsty is it? I try to stay away from angst. Great job with this chapter btw.

Author's Response: Oh no, it's totaly staying a romance fanfic, but things are... kinda upsetting in it. I have often wondered what led me to make Ron lose it, and make Hermione have amnesia. BUt it'll come clearer in the fourth chapter, which is the second last chapter.



In the Most Unlikely of Places by RachelW

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hermione Granger finds a treasure she had lost years earlier, and then misplaces it again. Where has this treasure been, and what does it mean now?
Reviewer: ancientgirl Signed
Date: 03/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

I've read this before and can't remember if I left a review where I originally found it. I loved this story. It works well as a one-shot, leaving the reader to assume they will indeed "research" together. It also works great as a start to a short story. wonderful work.



February by Iolanthe

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is a one-shot, Remus and a Gryffindor girl. Please R+R, my first fic, etc, etc. My editor, Kait, checked this over for me in IT lessson today. Thanks Kait!
Reviewer: ancientgirl Signed
Date: 01/22/05 Title: Chapter 1: February

After Snape, Remus is my favorite HP character. I liked the image of them walking along a path in the snow together. Very sweet. You might consider doing a few follow ups to this.

Author's Response: I might just write a follow-up... thanks for reviewing!



Love at First Sip by Love_Me_Not_6964

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Summary: Snape and Hermione begin to experience confusion and, after a few drinks, (ok, a few bottles) Snape does something Hermione nver expected. Unfinished, of course.
Reviewer: ancientgirl Signed
Date: 01/23/05 Title: Chapter 2: In debt

Just got a moment to read this. I like how he's trying to talk himself out of being attracted to her. Very nice.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, as an elder, it is kind of expected of him to deny his feelings. Plus the fact that he's Snape.



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Reviewer: ancientgirl Signed
Date: 03/17/05 Title: None

Wonderful. I love Remus. After Snape and Lucius he's my favorite character. You did a wonderful job with his chacracter.

Author's Response: This is such a great compliment from my fave writer on Mugglenet, ansd fellow Snape fan :-) Thank you thank you!