05/23/05
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Hello! I'm an Indian, Hufflepuff, HP-obsessed fanfiction reader and writer, beta-reader, member of the Susan Bones Book Club, member of the Society for Promotion of Better Evaluation of Writers (by Readers), Sirius fangirl, Harry/Luna shipper and a geek.
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The Draught of Prospicio by Burrowbrat
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: *Last Chapter up!!! It's been awesome everyone!!! Over 4000 reads and 300 reviews!!! You guys are amazing!!!* It is summer before sixth year and everyone has gotten together to celebrate Harry's Birthday when something goes terribly wrong for Ron and Hermione. How will everyone handle this terrible event and how will everything turn out?! *~*this fic is written pre HBP (see a/n on my pro for more info)*~*
Date: 08/11/05 Title: Chapter 14: Incantations and Sleeping Draughts
Oh! Suspense again! *nods her head dejectedly* Well, it was so good and I really want to know who Ginny saw dead. Please let it not be Ron. Pleeeeez!!
10/10
Author's Response: lol, i really do wonder who people think will die in the real series, everyone has different ideas of who it will be...who do you think will die...thanks for the review=)
Date: 08/06/05 Title: Chapter 13: The Draught
Oh! I really hope nothing bad happens to Ginny. But nice chapter. I'm sorry that it's coming to an end..
Author's Response: i'm sad to see it end to, but unfortunately everything must come to an end eventually, thanks for the review=)
Date: 07/02/05 Title: Chapter 11: Special Gift
OMG!! The chapter had everything from romance to humour. LOVED IT! I'll go read chapter 12 now. bye!
Author's Response: k...im glad you loved it, lol...thanks for the review =)
Date: 07/02/05 Title: Chapter 12: Battle Tactics
Argh! Another cliff! I hate it when you do this. Ok, I'll try being a bit patient till next chapter. 10/10
Author's Response: i'm glad you're working on your patience, lol...it's something we all need more of *grinning mischievously* thanks for reviewing again =)
Date: 08/28/05 Title: Chapter 15: Endings and New Beginnings
SEQUEL!!! Please!!!! I loved the ending. Just great!! Do write some more!!! 10/10
Author's Response: it's slow going at the moment, thanks though=)
Date: 06/13/05 Title: Chapter 10: Nods of Consent
great chapter. Congrats on getting over the writer's block. Can't wait until next chapter. UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'll try =)
Year Seven: Harry Potter & The Blood Debt by GringottsVault711
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry, heavy with the summer's grief and his future's burden, begins his final year at Hogwarts. He will hide something from his two best friends, but he isn't the only one keeping secrets; there's a mysterious organization on the rise, and Hogwarts is under fire from the public. The truth about the past will be revealed, while secrets of the present are hidden, and Harry must struggle to find his own sense of morality, all while knowing that his destiny is to kill. SEQUEL to Harry's Sixth Year. This story is PRE-HBP
Date: 04/15/06 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
Oh, Jenna, you said this chapter would make relationships clear?! Maybe I'm dumb, but it's anything but clear. Anyway... great chapter. The aftermath of the attack was nicely done. I'm so glad Alex got Deputy Headmistress, though there are people more um...experienced than her. Harry's reactions to what happened was almost expected, but I liked it that you focused on Quidditch and his friends rather than anything else. And loved this line: “Oh, and I expect after you run off and kill Voldemort, you can sit back and live a hero’s life while I go to work every day?” Clever way of making Harry go back to school. :) Oh, and funny Siobhan addresses Harry as Potter but calls Ron, Hermione and even Katie by their first names. If Harry and Katie had decided to go to the Library rather than to the grounds, would they have seen Hermione and Liam snogging? Mighty chance there... but I s'pose she's still in love with Ron? And I understand Harry's frustration on seeing Siobhan snogging Ron, but the reasons for it? Poor boy... has his heart in the right place, but there's always the What if?s that make life bad. And she's in love with some one else?! Goodness... the suspense is killing me. And the stuff about her past. More to it that what we saw in the earlier chapters, I believe. Anyway, I've rambled long enough, and I would love an update soon, dear. Oh, just one more thing. I'm rooting for HMS Tiramisu all the way! (yeah, I began reading Sins of the Father recently) Harry/Siobhan just doesn't appeal to me a lot. Anyways, update!
Author's Response: Oh, well >.> When I said clear, I meant it would be revealed how complicated everything is. *cough* And, not exactly, but yes on the Hermione/Liam bit. And yes, she\'s still in love with Ron, after all he ended it, she didn\'t. As to Siobhan being in love, the identity of the man she loves won\'t be revealed in BD, because she never tells Harry. [But there\'s a one-shot companion under this penname called One Last Tender Lie that\'s Siobhan\'s PoV that will clear that up for you... though, I think you might be able to guess who it is] Oh, and I\'ll be sure to tell Anna that HMS Tiramisu has a new sailor [she\'s the captain]. Oh, and I gave the position to Alex, because... well... she was more qualified. I couldn\'t even imagine Flitwick or Sprout as Deputy Heads. It\'s not so much about teaching experience as it is about administrative ability.
Date: 04/10/06 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Bloodshed
Wow. Just one word. I simply loved the way you've written it. Though I didn't read Year Six yet, Year Seven was not difficult to follow. I loved the whole Harry/Katie thing and that's definitely high praise coming from me, a firm Harry/Luna shipper. Katie was simply great, and Harry's love for her amazes me.
And Siobhan. One of the best written OCs I've ever read. I simply loved the way you've characterised her. The reason she's a Slyth makes perfect sense even though she's against Death Eaters and Voldemort. Her kissing Harry at the Ball threw me off guard, does she still have a crush on him or is she over with it? Even after reading carefully, I'm unable to figure that out. It was surprising that she was able to control Harry after Ron and Hermione could not. Though, she's been with Harry a lot more than Ron and Hermione were with him, what with the break up and all.
And the war scene. Typical Harry to try and save the world, and the AMPs are a cool idea. Great job. (Though I find it hard believing that Voldemort would want to use 'Muggle' ways knowing his dislike for Muggles). Dumbledore dying was expected, but Lupin, I almost thought he had died. Thank God he didn't. I would have broken down, I think. Enough of my ramblings, all in all this was simply an excellent fic and I don't think I can say anything else in praise.
Author's Response: Thanks, love :)
It might be hard to believe that Voldemort would use \'Muggle Ways\', but it was all medieval weaponry, anyway -- besides, Voldemort\'s father is Muggle, yet he insults Harry \'filthy Muggle mother\'. *grumbles stupid voldemort*
Siobhan will always *like* Harry. But, she doesn\'t daydream about him or anything... I think Chapter 37 clears up most of the relationships. A bit. >.> Siobhan\'s heart belongs to someone who\'s not Harry, anyway.
Thanks for reading :) I hope you continue to read these last few chapters... on their way!
Date: 08/12/06 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: An Act of Mercy
I'm gonna sound like a broken record but wow, simply wow Jenna! It's amazing! Firstly, the location of the showdown was great! In most of the Year-Seven fics I've read, it's usually the DoM or hogwarts which is cliched and Godric's Hollow is just so unique! And there are usually the DA or at least Ron and Hermione with Harry but Harry taking on Voldemort single-handedly is great and fits in well with the prophecy. My favourite part of the whole chapter was this:
Harry could smell death in the air, despite the horrors having long since occurred. His stomach churned, not from sickness, but from anger.
Harry could smell death in the air. Wow, I'm speechless!
And once again, your witty dialogue makes the chappie all the more intriguing. This one especially was so Voldemort-ish, but one teensy typo: it seems you've put two quotes for Crucio.
“You don’t possess mercy,” Harry spat.
“Then perhaps you should be more concerned,” Voldemort said sinisterly. ““Crucio!”
And the concluding line: “Go back to your friends, Harry. Voldemort has been vanquished.”
So Dumbledore-ish. What can I say!
I can't believe it's over, boy I could read on and on about Harry/Katie forever. Anyway, waiting eagerly for the epilogue!
Harry Potter and the Girl Who Lived by mrsgeorgeweasley
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: It’s Harry’s sixth year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and once again there is a new Defence Against the Dark Arts Teacher, and Snape likes her almost as much as he likes The Boy Who Lived, but why is the new professor so interested in Harry? What dark secrets is she hiding? Is Harry the only survivor of Lord Voldemort’s wrath? Will things ever be simple for our beloved Trio? It’s going to be another interesting year for Harry and his friends, and he’s going to realise that he might not be as alone as he thought and in more ways than one..
This story is newly edited as of 25/3/2009!!
The sequel to this fic has been posted, it is titled Harry Potter and the Unspeakable Power. The spin off stories One Life Owed and The Night That Started It All are also available.
This was written in the aftermath of OOTP. Events of HBP and DH not included.
Date: 08/13/05 Title: Chapter 29: A Lesson In Life
Loved it! Charlie & Ellie! When is their marriage? Hope it happens soon! One more thing: I read your story "The night that started it all"? (I'm not too sure about the title, sorry) The story has 3 chapters, right? But only 2 are up but it says that it's completed. Check it! 10/10
Author's Response: Ellie and Charlie will be getting married in chp 5 of the sequel, which will go up as soon as this is finished, but i'm assured that you'll enjoy chapter 6 much better. TNTSIA does have 3 chps, i'm not sure what's going on with it at the moment and i'm looking in to it.
Date: 06/26/05 Title: Chapter 23: When Severus Met Elizabeth
OMG!! I love your story. I want the sequel sooooooon.
Author's Response: The sequel will be submitted the second that the last chapter of this gets validated. I've got roughly another 14 chapters to go so i would imagine in would be inn the next month or so that it gets put up. I'm delighted that you like the story, makes writing really worth it!
Date: 10/15/05 Title: Chapter 38: Defiance
Time to partay! Ellie lives! *coming out from the party mood, so that I can review* Well, I was pretty much sure that you wouldn't kill Ellie off, because she's too good to die! Trust the Wizengamot to come up with a stupid judgement like that! Honestly, Malfoy deserves to be boiled in frog-spawn. And then the cliff-hanger, do you have to leave such evil cliffies? I'm annoyed! Anyway, I'm addicted (better join the Girl who Lived Addicted Anonymous) and look forward to your sequel!
Author's Response: Malfoy boiled in frog spawn, hmm? That's an interesting idea. You're right, i tried, i really did but i couldn't kill her. There was just too much mileage left in the character.
Date: 10/15/05 Title: Chapter 39: The Unknown Feeling
*tear* It's over! I can't believe it. And you still haven't explained the Snape mystery! So, about the chapter, it was so enjoyable. The fight with Malfoy was the best. And, the surprise at the end! She could've atleast told him, so that he would've enjoyed the train ride a bit more. I request for a one-shot on Charlie and Ellie's mariage, or is that going into the sequel? Whichever it is, I'm looking forward to it. Good job, Nat and you deserve more than 10/10!
Author's Response: I can't believe that it's over either. I will explain the Snape thing, don't worry i'll let you know when the story goes up. Ellie and Charlie's marriage is in the sequel, so don't worry, you'll get to see it. Thank you for your wonderful support!
Date: 09/20/05 Title: Chapter 33: Let's Talk About Tom
The chapter was great. Percy's death and funeral were really touching and very well written. Though I can't imagine Percy being all that loyal to his family, but that's just me. Ellie's class was great! The only thing with her is that she praises the Trio too much which I feel is not good for a teacher. Anyway, great story. Update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you made that criticism of Ellie because you're right. She shows far too much favouritism as far as they're concerned and that's not professional. I'll update as soon as i can.
Date: 08/06/05 Title: Chapter 26: Things That Could Have Been
I love the chapter. Definetely made me warm & fuzzy. Eagerly awaiting your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Fingers crossed the next chapter will go up soon, my beta was out of town last week which is why it's taking a little time to get this one up. I eagerly await your next review. Thanks for coming back!
Date: 10/10/05 Title: Chapter 34: The Attack
Great chapter, there! I'm pretty sure Ellie isn't dead, because after the Avada Kedavra spell is cast, one can't speak, right? Please don't prove me wrong, I love Ellie!
There was a lot of house unity shown, like Ron helping a Slytherin and Cho helping Harry. It is a good sign for the present situation they're in.
Ellie seems exactly like her cousin, in saying that her father wasn't arrogant (reminded me of the part with Snape in PoA)
And I loved this quote :"Why have the Queen when you can take the King?”
It was so good.
Finally, one correction, it's Sonorus, not Sonorous. I loved your chapter, keep writing more, and I hope Ellie isn't dead. Please...
Author's Response: That was a lovely review there, thank you. I'm not saying anything more about the AK, sure you can't speak normally when you're hit with it but she was hit with a slightly different version, so who knows? There was a lot of house unity and it's something that i'm going to try and keep up. I'm glad that the part where Ellie insisted her father wasn't arrogant reminded you of PoA, it was supposed to. I'm not really sure where the Queen/King line came from, i think i was re-reading PS at the time and came across the scene with the chessboard. I'll correct the Sonorus thing, thanks for pointing it out. I've written loads and all i have to do is post.
Date: 08/28/05 Title: Chapter 30: The First Protection
I loved the chapter! The title was intriguing, though. First Protection? Write more about it! I can't wait for Percy's Demise... 10/10
Author's Response: You'll realize why this was called The First Protection in chp 37, so you shouldn't have too long to wait!
Date: 10/14/05 Title: Chapter 37: The Second Prophecy
Aww, I love this. Great as usual. Loved this line: “But you still stole my family.” Pretty much angst on Harry's side, expressing his grief and all very well. And then the Prophecy, so well written, sounded exactly like the real one. So, Ellie's going to protect him three more times, and Harry's got to repay her. How? I guess I'll just have to keep reading and hope Ellie wakes up atleast in the next chapter. Please.
Author's Response: I think the 'you stole my family' line pretty much sums up Harry's situation. The wording of the prophecy was quite difficult, i was trying to make sure that i got it just right and i'm glad that you think i did. Stay tuned for the answers to your questions!
Date: 10/12/05 Title: Chapter 35: Fallen
First of all, my hearty congrats on becoming a mod. You deserve it! Now onto the chapter. Great chapter as usual. The Snape line made me wonder, when did he turn the other side? And the agony of all of them being hurt. Poor Harry and Charlie. It was so emoitional. Great work and I loved the line "One Malfoy down, one to go," It was so nice. All in all, it was great and once again congrats on becoming a new mod!!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you. *blushes Weasley red* You're so nice *tear*, I've got such lovely readers *sniff*. I've got an explanation of the Snape thing, planned for another one of my famous spin-offs. Maybe i'll stick it up soon.
The Power Of Suggestion by FriendsOfSnape
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: "Be careful what you wish for," the old adage goes. So what happens when Hogwarts is under a spell where what you say is what you get?
Chappie 14 is UP! And while it is the end, let us not be sad, but instead read the insanity that has driven so many to review and nearly wet themsleves with delight.
Date: 07/04/05 Title: Chapter 3: Repetitive noise is a form of torture
OMG!! I love the randomness in the story. Can you make poor Hermione alright? I love her. After I finish rating I'm gonna add you to my favourites. 10/10
Author's Response: Well, I'm dreadfully sorry, but poor Hermione won't be alright for a little while now. Part of the plot, you see. Besides, if I fixed her problem, then I'd have to fix everyone's problems, and I just don't have time for that. ;)