Eww people! My theory (save for the main ships) was soooo off!!! Hehehehe I'll be the first to admit it! I loved every page of DH though, I hope you did as well! Go Molly Weasley!!!
I'll update this bio soon~ I'll also be updating Adversity with a new chappie! Oh yes, the reviews~ I'll get right on top of answering those! Hope everyone in fandom is doing well! Big shout out to Heather ... Sarah ... and Juli!!! Missed ya girls! Sana you too! Talk to you soon!!!!
You are amazing ... this story ... HILARIOUS!!! I must say I saw pandafan's recommendation to read this and thought to myself, why not? I am sooooo glad I did! What a fun, light-hearted comedy! Coconut Cream! Brilliant!!! I’ve Got A Lovely Bunch Of Coconuts! HAHAHAHA! Ok you are so on the fav's list. I love your SIRIUS club, what an original idea! I would be happy to post it on my bio if you'd let me! You have a very good style of writing...I will definately keep up with this fic!!! 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review! I'm going to finish my other story first, then I will continue working on this one. The plot bunnies have been off foraging, but they'll be back after Christmas! Glad to welcome you into SIRIUS!
To my fans I would like to say that I am back to writing, and I have now updated many of the chapters! Some changes are just grammer edits, but there are many adds and changes to chapters. Some based on your reviews or small things I felt needed to be added. Please take a look at the changes and let me know what you think. I am looking forward to hearing what you have to say about the changes and up comeing chapters.
Well this is where I left off so lets get reviewing shall we? First off, dang but Ginny is cooollllddddd in your story! I bet you she would have felt at least a little bad about somebody dying SORN!!!! Oh and poor Neville, to tell the truth he's kind of a lacky in the background. I'm glad Harry is going to get him a broom though. Neville needs to start feeling like he belongs. I wonder why Petunia and Dudders needed to be knocked out ;) but nice touch! As for Harry taking off with Neville, lets see what he's up to!
Author's Response: Well first off it is nice to see your reviews. Perhaps Ginny is cold, but I don\'t really careing about Vernons death. I am not saying she was happy about. I am working on bringing Neville in to the group. As for his back ground I think JKR has provded that. As to knocking out Patunia and Dudley it was the best way to make sure who they were. Thanks for reviewing, I enjoy getting reviews that question the story.
Harry was wayyyyy tooooo cool delivering Pettigrew to the Minister!!! He should have been much more heated about it Sorn!!! Look how heated I am and I'm not even Harry! Why that slimey rat...why I oughta! Oh and poor Dobby, right place, wrong time! I wonder if the memory could have happened the way you wrote it? Didn't Sirius say in the 3rd book that he had assumed Lupin to be the traitor and Lupin said he assumed Sirius was? But Sirius did concur with James that Pettigrew would be the perfect bluff so I guess he must have known that the Potter's were going into hiding! *holds head* That's the thing about writing a fanfic, you have to keep so many things straight! Well done! Also, have we added a new Phoenix? AWESOME! Ignis...such a great name! Nice way to give Harry a new wand...it's going to be very interesting to see where you take this!
Author's Response: Yay!!! I love the opening of your review! Your right Harry should be up set, but as we know Harry tends to hold things back until he explodes, and that is what happens. That will become even more clear as we discover how Ignis came into existance.
Ginny is just plain mean! She gets so mad over nothing! Sorry I'm not loving her in this story! Why can't she be more thoughtful and sensative like Harry (or heck even Neville!) As for poor Dobby, that's hilarious that he wants to be enslaved again! I bet Hermione will have a fit over this!
Author's Response: Well I don\'t think Ginny got mad over nothing. How mad would you be if your love just came back from a dangours task and didn\'t come back with everyone eles, then he walks past her not saying a word. I hope the chapter I am writing right now may help you not loving her. If I do write the wedding as a one shot I will cover Hermione\'s reaction I don\'t plan to go in to it in this story.
Oh this is good. No 9/10 for you this is 10/10 material! I have to say I loved your description of Ginny's emotions when Harry kissed her. I also like that when you are in Harry's point of view, you stay very true to JK's style of writing (how very canon of you). I really like that Harry left that note for the Dursleys...I suspect we will be seeing more of them, correct? Onto the next chappie!
Author's Response: I am so glad you took the bate to read my story. I always love when good writers review my works. I must say my ego is far healther after reading this review. Thank you. As far as the Dursleys go, I am really not sure. When I started it was highly likely but now it's fifty fifty at best. The story is leading me away from that, but I am not counting that out. Thank you for Reviewing.
Ok a few corrections first:
“I would like you and join me, Ron, and Hermione here in my home until the war is over." *not entirely sure what you're trying to say here. I know you want the Weasley's to stay with Harry, Ron & Hermione in the house but than you go on to say they would miss their youngest son?* "along with instructions on what Harry should done once he found it" *Replace done with do* Seriously, you're doing a very good job of sucking me into your fanfic. Ron's a bit too dim in this chappie. Remember, at the end of the last book Harry shows the note from R.A.B. to Ron before anyone else...so he already knows about the horcrux being a fake. Hmmm, when I was first reading this chapter with Harry and Hermione apparating to the MoM and Ron seeing them...I thought (God forbid) that this might be a Harry/Hermione thing...than we learned about Ron & Hermione getting together and I breathed a sigh of relief. I have to say you and I imagine things differently. I'm writing a prequel to my contest entry and it's covering the same time you are currently writing about (we are the two ends of the spectrum I believe). But I'm thrilled to see this is the new order and I'm curious to see what will happen.Heck yes Ron is hungry! Very nice moment to break the tense atmosphere. I laughed out loud when I saw you were using parlimentary procedure...very nice!!! And Harry is new head of the Order? Interesting...so many places you can go with that...how about I go to the next chappie?
Author's Response: The thing I take the most pride in is that I can make people laugh. Thank you. You're right there are many places I could go, I can't wait to see were that is.
One quick correction, you spelled "Author's" instead of "Arthur" when referring to Ron's dad. Your imagination and your fic are taking on a life unlike anything I've read before. I really like that you have Harry learning a lot before going after Voldie, and him working in the potions lab was very cool! I want him to take advantage of Snape's knowledge...I wonder will Snape be good or evil in this story? And will we see Bill and Fleur's wedding? We are going to see the quidditch game, right? What the heck am I asking all these questions for? Next chappie!
Author's Response: I want you to know that reading your reviews are half as good as reading your story. Which means I am dieing to read you next review.
1. is snape evil? not sure yet.
2.Bill and Fleur's wedding? Yes. chapter 12 or 13 mayby 14
3.Quidditch game? Maybe a pick up game. I have thought long and hard about Quidditch and I have found something else I am going to use and Quidditch is the insperation.
4.Questions? I don't know!
I very much liked the teabag quote. I did want to point out that its not possible for Ginny to have more than ten OWLS (to take more than 10 classes requires a time turner)...isn't payback a *#$&@! Hehe ok, here's another correction:
He did not know that she was on the other side of the door listing for him. *Listening in place of listing* Other than that this was a nice chapter...I also didn't expect that the trio would go back to school. I'm curious to see if Harry worked the potion correctly. It's a good thing Hermione asked Harry how he would feel if TOM killed Ginny...Harry, that's what I've been saying all along! Ron is a bit too out the picture for me...Put him back in! I don't know about everyone calling Voldie, Tom...I think that the editor of the paper may end up murdered if that's printed!What I realized was that if Riddle took you and tried to use you against m,;
*you meant to write "me" instead of "m," at the end* Hermione had be the mastermind behind the last few days *Instead of "had be" you mean "had to be"* Ok now for the review...I loved it when Ron knocked Hermione down on her bum! I absoluetly adored when Ron beat the snot out of Harry for breaking his sister's heart. Pandafan also gave Ginny a kitten for her b-day present! Great minds think alike :D Hermione is with Harry (minus Ron) much too often for my liking. They're the trio...Ron shouldn't be left out *Gives you a stern glare* But how can that be Ginny's gift? (going off on a tangent) Harry said that the Order was going to have to offer them protection? Well...I'll just have to see now won't I? :P"but Fred stopped saying" *should be "but Fred stopped him saying"
I loved it when Fred and George were going after Harry. I am curious what Ginny said to them...you hinted that it was about him helping them to start the joke shop...was there more? She's a tricky girl! That Neville is joining them for home-schooling is GREAT! I wonder if you will be adding Luna to the mix? Good thing you gave them a big home to live in. I am wondering, are you going to mention things about Harry's past (like what his parents did for a living ~ of course the big goobs of gold were inherited but what else did they do?)It's sad that Neville's Grandma had to go...but there have to be death's in war. So Neville severed Bela's arm? Too bad he didn't finish her off. Neville has quite a bit of ability *glares at you* now Ron is just as smart as NEVILLE don't you think! In regards to the chapter :(( it just had to happen.
Author's Response: I am sorry I have neglected Ron, if I had your review sooner I could have fixed them sooner. Ron is as smart as Neville, but you have to admit he is a bit thick.
This is an extra review just to make a comment...I just realized you're responding to my reviews as I am writing them! Hahahaha that's brilliant! Ok so I'll stop needling you about Ron (but I retain the right to keep the needle...just in case you get back out of line!) Oh I have to say I throughly enjoyed your responses! If I see an error I always point it out, author's have a difficult time catching their own errors because they only see what they meant to write! I also appreciated when you did that for me!!! I'm very happy to know that I will see Bill & Fleur's wedding from your perspective...mine's the only one I've ever bothered reading (ur the first post-HBP writing that I've looked at). And to tell you the truth, I always had the intention of going over your story...the description is so simple that it is intriguing. Right so you're saying to yourself why is she still writing...I'm going to the next chappie!!!
Author's Response: LOL, I guess you did not read my resonse were I point our timing yet.
Ok this was absolutely TEN/TEN!!! material! I love that Umbridge and Fudge got what was coming to them. Oh right quick correction:
"but as far the respect you deserve" *should be "but as far as the respect you deserve* "Fudge is too full of his own ego to remove his head form his arse" *Instead of "form" it should be "from"* To this chapter...truly excellent job. It was nice how you set up the Minister's advisors as being the old crew...and than took them down. Ron going after Percy...BLOODY BRILLIANT! Seriously, it's about dang time that someone knocked that git right on his arse! In regards to Malfoy...I'm assuming it's Lucius and not Draco? Because of the he won't have as much info reference from Lupin. I agree Narcissa would be the most helpful...I really want to know what's been happening (in your mind) with Draco and Snape. Hmmm, ok I do get one chapter before I can start harping on you to update! And why isn't this on my fav's list yet? I'll take care of that right away!AHHH the next chapter title has me wanting more! Ok ok first a few errors:
“I can’t allow that, Kingsley will have to stay,” the Ministers stated. *You mean "Minister" not the plural "Ministers"* Kingsley stepped into the room, and moving into the corner to lean against the wall. *after "moving into the corner" either you need to say "leaned" in place of "to lean" or in place of "moving" you can just say "moved"* Kingsley was able to calm him, and informed him that they need to talk with the Minister. *Instead of "need" it should be "needed"* Ok just WOW. I love the whole interrogation...bluff...spoof the Malfoy's into spilling the dirt thing that you pulled of. How excellent! Will the Ministry find Malfoy with anyone in particular? Like Snape? And what on Earth does the next chapter title mean? A lunch, a dinner and a proposal? Is Percy going to get back w/ the family? Mrs. Weasley would flip if that happened! What has Percy been up to since his rift with the family? ok ok I won't take too much of your time up, but I want to see that next chappie up soon!!!O......M........G...........AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok SORN you've earned every point of this 10/10!!!! First I love Molly's patronus (how cute!) Than I loved Ron's reaction to a marriage announcement...MOST OF ALL that letter from Petunia and the news about Vernon was INSPIRED! Finally I understand what that chapter title meant!!! Seriously there are soooo many possibilities open you now that Aunt Petunia needs Harry's help! (we know he's a good boy and will help of course!) Ok...AHHH...Get the next chappie out ASAP!!!
Author's Response: *Happy dance* I am getting the reviews I had hoped for. Nobody saw it comming, I love it. I will tell you that there is a big hint in this chapter that will send many of my readers over the moon. I won't say what it is but my beta was the only one who picked up on it. We will be visiting number 4 next chapter. thanks for the review
very cute, i liked your first line especially.
awwwwwwwwwwww tooo cutesy!!!!! I'm so anti any Draco-Hermione or Ginny so I will just assume we are talking about Pansy ;)
Author's Response: hehehe yeah if you don\'t like DM / HM or GW, then let\'s just say it\'s Pansy and Draco :P glad you liked it though! :D:D
Wow! Your first chapter was awesome! I would have freaked out if I was in that situation but go figure! Keep writing...I bet he wakes up tomorrow and still finds no one!
Author's Response: ... you'll see...
Sirius is Sirius (PUN!)! What can I say?
You made me get tears in my eyes! What an awesome synopsis of Harry's life, dreams and goals! I hate the thought of him being killed!!!
Now for the constructive criticism (although its not really criticism at all!) For the line:
And now I set of to find them
You mean to say *off* not *of*
Other than that everything seemed perfect to be. ~Applause~ 10/10!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. The idea was mainly Harry worrying that maybe he wouldn't make it through, he might die. Also, thanks for the grammer correction. I'm glad you liked it!