05/25/05
My pen-name's: Polaris Dakota and Mortigana Valliante. I will never tell who I really am but if you want to get my attention or are a good friend call me Polaris!
Polaris Dakota is a name i created for a character in an upcomming story. Polaris is the north star and is full of meaning (read about it!), while Dakota is a wolf name....think HARD.
I am terrible at grammar and spelling and it often takes five or six tries for a chapter to go through when i write!
Usually, and this is no lie, i have ABOUT six people, sometimes more (Usually), helping me correct my stories: Huskers, Diana, Lee, Shay, Kristy, the three vixens and a few others.
I am outstandingly loyal and brave...and boastful. I will defend my friends in an instant without a care for my safty and have a knack for running outside in the rain to rescue ancient lawn orniments from impending doom.
I am also a camp councelor.
I love a good laugh and am always quick to smile. If you dont like my jokes feel free to blame my parents.
I love Harry/Ginny and Hermione/Ron fics. I am also a big fan of Tonks/Lupin but any Lupin fics are cool. I also enjoy Snape/other charry but HATE HATE HATE Hermione/Draco and Hermione/Snape. I think they are disgusting.
I only comment on stories I like...however, if asked to coment then i will...but i will be brutally honest.
I deeply appreciate Crafty Slytherin and anyone who supports my work. This includes Moonymaniac! I love her story so far and I encourage you to read it, she has great potential and is a better writer by FAR than i am.
READ MOMENTS OF BLISS!...damn it.
Also, read Through Time and Space and Harry Potter and the Unlocked Mind. Two of my three favorite stories! My story follows the timelines set up by HUSKERS but gives reference to Snape from Through Time and Space.
be sorted @ nimbo.net
WOOT!!! Told ya didnt I?
Which HP Kid Are You?
As does this!
Thick as Theives.
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I cant believe that my story already has so many reads! I dont really like to yell about reviews so just knowing people read is enough for me.
You are, of course, very welcome to review. The story is already mapped out and I will try to update as often as possible.
Be a love and look into my favorites, wont you?
Moonymaniac is awesome, Moony is great
read her story or i'll turn you into a crate.
Huskers is awesome, Harry is great
if you dont read his story then you're a poodle.
XOXOXO
-The Infamous Dakota
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Date: 05/26/05 Title: None
I have been reading your story and hoping for an update forever. You and a few other authors are my reason for this acount, just so i could R and R. Hope to see your posts soon!
Highly Improbable by Vocalion
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: COMPLETE. A woman visits Hogwarts expressly to meet Severus Snape. Her eccentric aunt led her to believe that he was the kindest, handsomest man to ever grace the earth. What will she do when she discovers the awful truth - let a few minor imperfections stand in the way of romance? Highly Improbable has been recognized by the Multifaceted Awards as Winner in the Laughter Category and Runner-Up in the Identity Category (Best Original Character), and also by MNFF's first annual Quicksilver Quills Awards. Thanks, MuggleNet!
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Date: 08/01/05 Title: Chapter 33: Blame it on the Bossa Nova
Rock! I finally get to review one of your chapters FIRST! and i finally get to review because of that log in glitch! Snape was hillarious; "I am not a spy!" you deserve your awards, and although that may not mean alot comming from someone who cannot spell...i thought i'de say it. Love your imagery by the way!
Date: 06/07/05 Title: Chapter 31: Murder, She Says!
10/10 most excelent! I had been hoping that you would post soon!
Author's Response: Thank you. Some chapters take longer to write than others, so I appreciate everyone's patience. Thanks for reviewing!
River Styx by Wintermute
Rated: •Summary: Remus Lupin and Severus Snape, framed for murder and sharing a cell at recently overcrowded Azkaban. Will the dysfunctional pair make it out of their cell before the wolf comes out during the next full moon? ::set in a hypothetical sixth year where Dumbledore has vanished and Regulus Black, who returned mysteriously from the dead weaves a dangerous intrigue::
Date: 06/09/05 Title: Chapter 1: Twenty-one Days
Eat the barmy old codger, Remus. Its no less than the arse desirves.
April Rain by Kimberley
Rated: Professors •Summary: ***COMPLETED!***Five years ago, half way through her third year at Hogwarts, Regan Jayden was expelled for reasons only she and a very select few know. But now that she's been allowed to return-- under certain terms-- in what would have been her graduating year, will she be able to regain the trust of her fellow Hogwarts students, and of herself?
Excerpt from story: Merlin, he was going soft, Draco thought as he tried not to grimace. He'd start spouting off poetry in a minute if he wasn't careful. This whole love thing was sending him round the twist.
Date: 06/19/05 Title: Chapter 4: Fire and Ice
we're staying together for the kids-AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA 10/10 and added to my favs! :)
Author's Response: Hehehe... yay, a new reader! Welcome to my lovely review board, where fudge and much love is handed out on a regular, often daily basis (depending on whether or not my computer is being disagreeable). I am honoured to be on your faves list and thank you très muchly for the review! Hope you'll be back to see me soon! ~Kim~
A Promise Kept by Huskers
Rated: •Summary: Harry just coming to terms with the death of Sirius on the train ride home, can't deal with the new attacks on his friends. Ginny, bound by her love won't give up on him.
Date: 06/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: A Promise Kept
10/10
You are so brilliant, it makes me jelous! Ginny is amazing and i absolutely adore how you portray her! I can not wait till you finish both of your fictions! If your year seven fiction is as good as your year six then i will be on my tip toes waiting for posts the whole time!
love always! -Mortigana
Author's Response: Thank you. I rally see Ginny as being strong and coragous. Thanks for posting a review on this story.
Harry Potter and the Blood Traitor by Huskers
Rated: •Summary: Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, a blond Weasley. It's Harry's sixth year. Voldemort is back, yet strangely quiet. A second prophecy. This is my version of what happens next. The whole book is written, along with all of year seven. I will post as fast as I can get the chapters past the moderators.
Story is now complete. Look for the sequel, I will be posting the first chapter tonight 6-2-05, and it usually takes 4-5 days for the mods to approve it. The title of the sequel is, Harry Potter and the Unlocked Mind.
Date: 12/21/05 Title: Chapter 18: Discovery
10! I just realised I've never reviewed this chapter and it is my FAVORITE! It has such wonderful imagery and the tone is just so earth shaking! It is great to see Harry show up some ministry officials and I just love the twist with the mirror. I swoon everytime! I've read this chapter 60 times and I still love it! BRaAAavo!
Author's Response: You've read it 60 times?? I haven't even done that, not even with all the rewrites and everything else. You are amazing.
Date: 06/10/05 Title: Chapter 21: Marked by the Dark Lord
If i could i would leave a review for EVERY chapter, but I cant...I will with year seven though! 10/10 brilliant work as always-Check your e-mail~ Ta!
Author's Response: Thanks again, and I am checking my e-mail on a regular basis.
Date: 06/26/05 Title: Chapter 18: Discovery
10/10
I love this chapter and i cant stop reading it! It is so well written. Excellent diction and the imagery was absolute perfection!
Author's Response: Thanks again.
Date: 06/05/05 Title: Chapter 9: Tryouts
I will give YOU green hair if Ron and Hermione don't get together ::twirls wand in fingertips menicingly:: 10/10
Author's Response: If you were Ginny, I'd be scared. Since you are likely a Muggle and that is a fake wand, I'm not. Glad you like the story, and please keep posting reviews.
Date: 06/18/05 Title: None
Creative introduction! It kept me interested and i look foreward to your future chapters. I am no great shakes at writing (or getting things past the moderators) but i can tell a good story when i see one. Good luck-and remember to thank your Beta!
Great Plans by LariLee
Rated: •Summary: During a Seventh Year Potions class, Severus Snape begins thinking on and making plans for his future.
Date: 06/07/05 Title: Chapter 1: Great Plans
I am not normally a great fan of the HG/SS stories but because you are such a wonderful writer i think you may have me converted!
By the way, i reviewed yours, how about you review mine?! i wont advertise here but Hey!
10/10 wonderful writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Polaris Dakota! To be honest, this was my first attempt to write the good ship Granger-Snape. I had to wrap my mind around Snape's character in order to make it work. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
~Lisa
Date: 06/07/05 Title: Chapter 5: Serving Two Masters
::feeds plot bunnies lettus, carrots, condoms, tomatoes and chocolate:: ^-^ keep up the good work!
Use a condom kids!
Author's Response: Thank you, Polaris Dakota! But if the bunnies start practicing safe sex, where will the little bunnies come from? :-)
~Lisa
Date: 06/09/05 Title: None
It feels rather odd to be the only one reviewing, 10/10 again! So funny the way poor Remus was subjected to tourture...Amber seemed to cope quite nicely. Soul mates! AWWwWwww! I really can not wait for your next chapter-pleeeeease tell me what alexis' animagus form is?
Date: 05/27/05 Title: None
Yay for me i get first dibs on the review! TAKE THAT PATHO-whosits! This chapter was very sentimental...in the way that snape gets bitten! I found it funny and most entertaining-What will Remus think when he finds out Amber is pregnant?! AGHHH! TENSION!!!
Date: 06/19/05 Title: None
10/10 I am still a bit eager to learn what Alexis' animagus form is! I really love your writing please update soon i've been waiting forever!
Date: 05/26/05 Title: None
You have become my idol in all things sensual. I omitted to having an acount just to comment on your story. I am a loyal fan.
Date: 06/06/05 Title: None
10/10 Once again you have made a great chapter! When is she going to practice her animagus! OOOooh I cant wait to see what it is ? ::taps fingers against head:: OH! is it a kitty?
Date: 06/08/05 Title: None
10/10 I am intr...intrig...intriq...Well im interested! and it seems rather awesome! XOXOX and good luck, i will be checking in to see how you come along in your chapters! Be a love and drop in to look at mine and give me some constructive criticism.