05/25/05
My pen-name's: Polaris Dakota and Mortigana Valliante. I will never tell who I really am but if you want to get my attention or are a good friend call me Polaris!
Polaris Dakota is a name i created for a character in an upcomming story. Polaris is the north star and is full of meaning (read about it!), while Dakota is a wolf name....think HARD.
I am terrible at grammar and spelling and it often takes five or six tries for a chapter to go through when i write!
Usually, and this is no lie, i have ABOUT six people, sometimes more (Usually), helping me correct my stories: Huskers, Diana, Lee, Shay, Kristy, the three vixens and a few others.
I am outstandingly loyal and brave...and boastful. I will defend my friends in an instant without a care for my safty and have a knack for running outside in the rain to rescue ancient lawn orniments from impending doom.
I am also a camp councelor.
I love a good laugh and am always quick to smile. If you dont like my jokes feel free to blame my parents.
I love Harry/Ginny and Hermione/Ron fics. I am also a big fan of Tonks/Lupin but any Lupin fics are cool. I also enjoy Snape/other charry but HATE HATE HATE Hermione/Draco and Hermione/Snape. I think they are disgusting.
I only comment on stories I like...however, if asked to coment then i will...but i will be brutally honest.
I deeply appreciate Crafty Slytherin and anyone who supports my work. This includes Moonymaniac! I love her story so far and I encourage you to read it, she has great potential and is a better writer by FAR than i am.
READ MOMENTS OF BLISS!...damn it.
Also, read Through Time and Space and Harry Potter and the Unlocked Mind. Two of my three favorite stories! My story follows the timelines set up by HUSKERS but gives reference to Snape from Through Time and Space.
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WOOT!!! Told ya didnt I?
Which HP Kid Are You?
As does this!
Thick as Theives.
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I cant believe that my story already has so many reads! I dont really like to yell about reviews so just knowing people read is enough for me.
You are, of course, very welcome to review. The story is already mapped out and I will try to update as often as possible.
Be a love and look into my favorites, wont you?
Moonymaniac is awesome, Moony is great
read her story or i'll turn you into a crate.
Huskers is awesome, Harry is great
if you dont read his story then you're a poodle.
XOXOXO
-The Infamous Dakota
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MOMENTS OF BLISS by moonymaniac
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Remus Lupin is a man with a tragic past, filled with pain, suffering and sorrow. But it is also a past filled with great adventure, true friendship and…love? Even though the odds were against him, Remus found happiness at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. He had the Marauders, he was a prefect and his transformations were less horrible, thanks to his Animagi friends. What more could a teenage werewolf want? And how long could his happiness last? Remus and the Marauders prove that in the saddest of lives and darkest of times, there can still be moments of bliss.
Remus centric but with a lot of the other Marauders. This story is a romance, but has almost as much general Marauder era background and side story as romance.
Pre-HBP and DH, so some things from DH will be disregarded, as the warning indicates, but some Spoilers will be incorporated.
Date: 06/23/05 Title: Chapter 2: A Wish Come True
This chapter made me cry! You are really skilled and I wont review every chapter but 10/10! It takes alot to make my sniffel! but even more to make me cry! I wish you would give me some hints on my story!
Amazing!
Author's Response: Wow! You really made my day. I have to admit to getting a little misty eyed myself when editing this one. Not because of my skill, mind you, but, because Remus is just such a beautifully tragic character. I just love him. I thought you had a great start to your story though I haven' had a chance to go further (company, vacation...) but, I look forward to reading more and don't see that you need any hints, at least from me.
Date: 11/02/08 Title: Chapter 50: Happy Birthday, Remus
great chapter! Yea, I am still kicking around ^_^ saw your update and went nutso! e-mail me xxeclipseangelxx@yahoo.com
Author's Response: O.M.G!!!! Polaris!!! I'm so happy to *see* you! Wow, *introduces first EVER reviewer and cheerleader* I don't know if this story would have made it past 3 chapters without your encouragement. Gosh, that has been a LONG time ago. I'm so glad you are still here! Thank you for letting me know. :D
Date: 07/09/05 Title: Chapter 7: Delectable Dellington
Once again 10/10 ! I knew you would not let me down Moony! Good work. I will try to mention to my friends to read your work- you desirve more reviews!
Author's Response: Ahh, Polaris, I'd be honored. I'm hoping things will pick up after chapter 9 since I feel the story really gets going in chapter 10. Blimey! Who takes 9 chapters to set up a story???
Date: 12/30/05 Title: Chapter 19: Just a Little Hexing Between Friends
Ah, perfection. Behold the genious that is Moony. All should bow down and give her chocolates...The good ones with the little chocolate bows on them and preferably strawberries and raspberries covered in chocolate...like GODIVA! ::nudge nudge wink wink:: Give Moony chocolate and show love for her brilliance.....................................................................oh...a 10 by the way. ^_^
Author's Response: That glow coming from your computer screen is me blushing, Polaris! I think the holidays have you giddy. No bowing please, (though you make me want to take a bow!) but I'll take the chocolate! How did you know strawberries and raspberries were my favorites? Yummy! Thank you for the delicious review! Happy New Year!
Date: 06/26/05 Title: None
I like your poem, though it is a bit too obvious what its meaning is. meeeh...ok i will give you a 10-but only because your writing is wonderful. love the imagery.
Author's Response: *cringe* I know, the prophecy is absolutely dreadful. It will probably go through a couple revisions, don't worry. I had absolutely no idea what to do, so I just spewed out some stuff and hoped no one would notice. I mean, the prophecy in Book 5 isn't actually terribly hard to figure out either, but mine is...ugh. *shudders* I'm glad you like the story though. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Harry Potter & the Year of the Dragon by CraftySlytherin
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: They say that true love conquers all. Harry and Ginny, and Ron and Hermione will be able to put this to the test during the new term to come. With a deranged killer on the loose, new friends, a new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher, and Voldemort planning his final attack, it will be a year of trials and tribulations. And what exactly is the Year of the Dragon? You'll just have to read to find out!
CHAPTER 14 IS UP! CHAPTER 15 IS IN QUEUE!
Date: 08/06/05 Title: Chapter 8: Morgan's Tale
Mortigana is awesome...wait a tic...THATS MY NAME! Rock! i love this chapter not only because it is well written, but because the winner shares my name and because this Morgan character has my name! ^_^ DUuuuuude!
Author's Response: HA! How cool! So glad you liked it!
Date: 07/09/05 Title: Chapter 2: Draco Malfoy?!
splendid! 10/10 Your brilliance is astounding!
Author's Response: :) Thank you so much!! I'm blushing!!!
Date: 07/09/05 Title: Chapter 4: Happy Birthday, Harry
fred and george are awesome-my favs! You portray them so well too! Rock. (or if you are american "Rocking" or "awesome" or something like that...Wait...im american...) AHEM-10/10~!
Author's Response: Aren't they the best??? :) Thanks for saying I portray them well!! :) Yes, I'm American too!! Rocking awesome!!
Date: 06/26/05 Title: None
Interesting, Original and quaint. It could be a bit longer and perhaps even a little more envolved. I would honestly like it better if you described the surroundings more accurately and more in depth. Imagery is important in writing, just as much as diction.
Broken by Huskers
Rated: •Summary: Nine years has passed since Harry defeated Voldemort. Nine years that he spent in a coma. He wakes, to find that life has passed him by. How do you go on, and can love be found after it has been destoryed?
This story was written pre HBP and takes none of that new cannon into account. Also, it might be better defined as a series of one shots than an ongoing story.
Date: 11/14/05 Title: Chapter 12: July 2020
A ten as always! MY only regret is that I can not comment on every chapter. I would If I had the time, But I have finally made time to review instead of just reading and running.
I loved the imagery in this chapter! It was absolutely superb. If only I had your talent, I'de have more reviewers too! You're awesome, Please do not stop this story. I, honestly, think you would make an awesome story out of the kids in their years at Hogwarts buuuuut thats entirely up to you.
Ta!
Author's Response: Thanks, for stopping by when you do. As to a story about Harry and Ginny's kids when they are at Hogwarts, all I can say is, "Sorry, not gonna happen."
Date: 10/13/05 Title: Chapter 7: October 2017 Continued
Wow! long time since I've been able to get on here! AWESOME so far! I hope you really go far into this story and make it long...I want to know what happens with Harry and Ginny in the future....see the fight you described in the epilogue and etc. TA for now! (my third chapter finally went through, thank goodness )
Author's Response: Glad your back and you got your third chapter posted. This story is going to be 13-14 chapters. I think. It keeps growing on me. The fight describe in the epilogue of, Unlocked Mind, is not part of this world, and you have gotten all the description of it you're going to. Sorry about that.
Imperius by Pallas
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: “Imperius… Werewolves…You-Know-Who…” The last words of a dying man force Remus Lupin into a dangerous investigation at the infamous Feral Institute. Sequel to Oblivious; pre-reading would be useful but it isn’t vital.
Date: 07/19/06 Title: Chapter 14: Hidden Meanings
Refreshing. I rarely review but I thought I must.
After the last chapter I thought there may be only one death eater on the premis, but after careful consideration I think that there could be two. At least, you hint at it.
It was ever so irksome when you left that cliffhanger!
Any how, I believe that Felisha and the quiet desk girl-Cymone I think her name was-are the two death eaters.
Why? Well, I don't want to be a spoil sport, and you are writing this interesting story, so I'll not ruin it for the other readers if I happen to be right.
And if I am wrong? Then at least I am having fun!
Brilliant Chapter!