Well hi! My name's Becca, I'm a Gryffindor, and I reside on the forums as twilightHPgirl18. I live in New York, I love the 1940s-'70s almost as much as I love Ashton Kutcher, and I'm actually working on an OF that takes place in 1966, and another in 1976 based on my dad's teenage life :)
My favorite bands are, in no particular order: The Beatles, The Rolling Stones, The Kinks, Bruce Springsteen, The Doors, and Pink Floyd.
I love the TV shows The Big Bang Theory, Gilmore Girls, Happy Days, Glee, Saturday Night Live (I love Jimmy Fallon and Will Ferrell), and Survivor.
My favorite movie at the moment is Pirate Radio (which I love oh so much), but I'm also very fond of Tommy Boy, Across the Universe, 21, The Breakfast Club, The Blues Brothers, and Grease.
My dream is to live in New York City, London, or New Haven, Connecticut. I'm just that cool ;)
Becca:D
Wow. Nice dream in the autors note at the beginning. It's gotta be more amusing than my Idol Gives Back Meets Potter's Pentagon dream.
“I feel like the inspirational score and the slow-motion action sequence will begin any minute.”
^^It's like me and Vlad share the same mind or something!
“But there are so many things that could go right! Come on, cheer up! Have some fun, enjoy the… ECHIDNAS! COOL!”
^^*dies from laughing* *falls off desk chair* *plop* *comes back from the dead* I think that summed it all up.
Ack! Cliffie!!! Thats gotta be the first time I have ever used that word in my life... putting aside strange grammar coming from me, I am completely horrible at drawing, so I am abstaining from the Schmergo Reader Art Challange. And y the way, was that Tyrone_Jrdan+tiger costume+canoe a real entry????? Any way, a kajilliondiesty and 5 for the amazing chapter!!!!! {Becca}
Author's Response: I can\'t even remember what dream I mentioned in the author\'s note ,because I submitted this like a month ago. This sounds really weird, but for some reason, I think Vlad is a really cute sounding nickname. I like the fact that when you \'died\' you went *plop*, much like ol\' Sirius Black in my Phantom spoof. Now, now, you\'d think you\'d have learned by now that nearly all chapters of this story are cliffhangers! Oh, and no one entered that weird canoe picture-- only two people have entered so far, Tim the Enchanter and Yellow Viper.
Emma got to her feet. “You know what?” she stated. “Not only will I keep going, Tyrone Jonathan Thomas—“
“My middle name is Vincent.”
^^hhahahaha!! I just had the best day ever going out to lunch with my friends and this made me laugh so much this is officially the best day ever!!!!!!!
“We’re thinking of writing one about what just happened,” insisted Emma. “Tyrone was playing Tancred Apple, and I was playing his… er… grandma.”
^^Oh, good old Emma. Me and my friend always use excuses like this.
This Aurors-meet-kids-including-werewolf-and-unconcious-villain-in-dark-forest scene seems really familiar. What exactly did happen here?”
^^Where have I heard this? It does seem familiar...
The Shlurpee thing was really awesome!!!!! And by the way, I have no idea why people wouldn't wanna be friends with Giorgi cos she seems really cool!!!!!!! About the coolest thing that ever happened to me was... going to a hockey game where Richard Zednik got his throat cut. I assume that you heard about that as well, granted it was all over the news that February, i believe. Anyhow, A Gajilliondyzizzelion/10. {BeccA}
Author's Response: The getting-the-name-wrong thing pops up again several more times in the series, so I\'m glad you liked that! It was inspired by the Eddie Dickens Trilogy, where \"Jonathan\" is the pet name that Eddie\'s mum uses when she can\'t remember his real name. Today\'s a good day for me, too, because I\'m going to my Thespian Honor Society Award Banquet, so that should be fun. I like food and awards and fancy clothes. ^_^ The Aurors-meet-kids-including-werewolf-and-unconcious-villain-in-dark-forest scene was the conclusion of the previous Potter\'s Pentagon book-- the Aurors came after Malfoy\'s soul got sucked out, and the kids were all there, including Ted, who was in wolf form.
Oh yea!!! *facepalm* I normally have an excellent memory, so why can't I remember the conclusion of, like, the best thing Mugglenet has seen?? (Your other books all tie for second)!!!!!!!!!!! By the way, congrats on your Honour-Society-thingy........... yea, congrats!
Author's Response: Fwahahaha, that\'s okay. I was just reminding you. As for the honour society, I\'ve already been in it for a year, so it\'s not my induction, but I get to see everyone else inducted and I get food and there\'s cool skits and stuff. Though Nevilles_Girl (author of \"A Day At The Spa\" on this site) is being inducted today... cheers for her!
It was a normal summer day in the Potter household. There was a werewolf at the kitchen table, owls were flying in and out of the windows, several people were zooming around on broomsticks in the backyard, and a man suddenly turned into a large canary after eating a biscuit. Not many other families could say that this was, in fact, normal, but whatever Orville might argue, the Potters weren’t exactly a normal family.
^^haha. I'm gonna review this story as well, cause ur such an amazing author, i need 2 tell u that alot! I dont read much by people with as much extraordinary as you.
The girl’s jaw dropped and her eyes grew as wide as saucers, making her look like more of a cartoon character than ever. “How do you spell that?” she demanded.
“T-H-A-T,” spelled Jordan flatly.
“No, you twit, I meant your name!” the girl exclaimed, sounding exasperated.
^^Haha nice. I've done that to my friends before and have gotten the same reaction.
“I’m known as sgtjpepper online,” he said.
^^Oh my gosh! Why didn't I think of that when I was getting a new email? *facepalm* you truly are brilliant.
1000/10
~Beckee~
Author's Response: Wow, I am so glad that you like this story! I absolutely love getting so many reviews in one day. You have no idea how much of my real life ends up as dialogue or character quirks in these stories! ^_^
“I bet she got a pedicure and a hairdo done at a fancy salon for the occasion. And I bet her family’s got buckets of money, and they buy her anything she wants, because they never have time for her, and they feel guilty about it. Oh, yeah-- and she probably puts caviar on everything instead of salt and pepper,” Emma whispered, as the hat bellowed “RAVENCLAW!”
^^I am like Emma and 100% proud of it! I am the first to judge people when I see them, and I'd like to change that.
Ted smiled warmly. “It’s okay. By the way, he is a werewolf, and I’m one, too. But we don’t bite people. I mean, seriously, which do you think tastes better, this awesome chocolate éclair, or some person?” He raised his eyebrows, paused dramatically, and took a big bite out of his éclair.
^^Ted just doesnt stop being so cute! I luv him!
“What a pansy,” commented Ron as he walked past on his way back from the coffee machine.
“Must you always insult the plants?” tutted Harry.
“Well, his name is Apple,” Ron pointed out.
“True.”
^^Poor plants.
Author's Response: Hehehehe, I think it\'s kind of cool that you\'re like Emma, actually. I\'ve always wanted to meet an Emma-type person. I think I\'m a little bit like her, but I\'m more like a mixture of Haley and Jordan. And... I really like Ted. ^_^ Maybe a little too much, seeing as he\'s a fictional character I created.
\r\nNo plants were harmed in the making of this story.
he was wearing with his rich furs a wristband that read “What Would John Lennon Do?”
^^Oh my gosh! Do you know where I can get one? jkjk, but really, how do you come up w/ these things?
When he arrived in the Common Room, Haley exclaimed, “TEDWARD!”
The boy blinked. “Because that was normal,” he said.
^^I am so like this! 'Because that was normal' is one of my, well, i guess you could call them 'catchphrases'.
Oh my gawsh YAY EMMA!!! I would enter too, which i wouldn't be afraid of losing. Dying, yes, maybe I'd be afraid of that, but not losing... although I am rather a sore loser... i threw my hockey stick across the gym floor when my team lost... hmm...
“Yes, EMMMMMM-A’s the CHAMMMP-ION, my FRIEEE-ENDS!” she sang loudly.
^^I loved this. But how would a pureblood witch know Muggle songs?
Question: Is the Lee that Haley's writing to Lee Jordan? It seems like it,when he talks about the pranksters he knew at school, and how he was a Gryffindor...
Author's Response: I would love to have a wristband like that. I have no idea where I got that idea; it just popped into my head. But my insane gym teacher from elementary school used to have one that said \"WHAT WOULD CHUCK NORRIS DO,\" so maybe that\'s it. Ooh, you play hockey? That\'s kind of cool. And I think you\'re the only person who said YAY EMMA! I\'m pretty sure everyone else said, \"What? Why wasn\'t it Jordan?\" or \"What? Why wasn\'t it Haley?\"
\r\nAs for Emma being the champion, well, I put SOOO many Muggle stuff references, and I\'m surprised the mods are so nice to me... the third book is even more so. And we all know Jordan loves the Beatles. (Though technically, Haley and Jordan aren\'t pureblood-- they\'re 3/4ths blood, because Harry is half-blood.) A lot of my pop culture references that I put in, I did to show that the wizard world and Muggle world are getting closer, because that\'s, like, a theme of the thing. Or something.
The little Hufflepuff boy read it to himself. “Professor Zabini should…” he read, then his voice trailed off and his eyes widened. He mouthed the next several words before finishing, “…and a potato?”
^^OMG I REMEMBER THIS!!! ITS 1 OF THE ONLY THINGS I'VE EVER REMEMBERED!!!! I CANT EVEN REMEMBER HOMEWORK HALF THE TIME!!! The last time they did this was April Fools Day in the first installment, right?
“Promise me one thing,” he asked his son seriously. “If you ever see a Harry Potter action figure in a shop… please don’t make a bonfire and invite all your friends for a ritual burning.”
^^I did this once... although it was on the last day of school, and we burned homework... nonetheless, it was strangely familiar.
“Stacked on top of each other?” Haley dissolved into giggles. “You,” she proclaimed, “Have the strangest sense of humour of anyone I’ve ever known.”
It was at that moment that Emma raced into the room, hollered, “I’M AN OSTRICH!” and catapulted onto the sofa.
Ted raised his eyebrows. “Interesting timing there.”
^^OMG. How weird is Emma? I luv her, tho.
Anyway, Tyrone went, ‘Crunch-a-tize me, Cap’n!’ which I personally thought was funny
^^How do you do this? You're hilarious!
Author's Response: CONGRATULATIONS DUDE! You\'ve remembered the potato joke! Which is good because... because it comes back a lot of times. And I burned my homework on the last day of school, toooo! Binders look cool when they burn. I blushed a little at being called hilarious, but to be honest, I don\'t really think about most of these things... I just kind of write what I think the different characters would do in different situations.
You look like an Archibald,” Emma said out loud. “I will call him Archibald, and he will be mine, and he will be my Archibald.
^^I love Findong Nemo. I think Archibald is a better name to use than Squishy, though.
Ron blinked, seeming to realize that he had just insulted himself. “With friends like these…” he muttered, then trailed off. “I’m going to go drown my sorrows in coffee.”
^^Ron, I was thinking exactly the same thing. I'm serious. I love coffee!
Author's Response: Yay! Yay for you catching the Nemo reference! Weirdly enough, I cannot stand coffee... not even coffee=flavoured ice cream or mocha cake. I just hate it... I think it tastes bitter and awful. Whenever I go out to like Starbucks with friends, I end up getting one of those strawberries-n-creme things with absolutely no coffee in them.
I think you underestimate people!” Ted told her, alarmed. “Nobody’s going to chase you with pitchforks—believe me, everyone knows about me, and even though it was a big deal at first, they got used to it, just like I did. I guess few little kids are scared of me at first, first years and stuff, but still, they get over it, especially since I’m a Prefect. You know, in the public eye and all.” He laughed. “I mean, so you transform and you suddenly get hairy and bloodthirsty… that’s not so bad. It happens to everyone…it’s called puberty.”
^^I dont gdet it! How is Ted so adorable!
‘sphygmomanometer'
^^OK, is this a real thing... or person...
The Hogwarts champion stared at her. “WHO THE [CENSORED] IS THOMAS EDISON?” she roared, and stormed away.
^^Emma, Emma, Emma. How does she do it? I'll admit, even I wouldn't go this far.
Again, grrrrreat job! 100000/10 ~Beckee~
Author's Response: Sphygmomanometer is a blood-pressure gauge! It\'s always been one of my favourite words, and I try to use it every time I go to the doctor. I had to spell it in a spelling thing in sixth grade... As for Emma, I\'m not really sure what the \'censored\' word was-- it might not have been something seriously bad, it could have just been the \'h word,\' but because it\'s censored we may neeever know. ^_^
“Aye-aye, Cap’n!” yelled Tyrone, pounding Jordan’s back.
^^Tyrone is so funny! I'm glad someone can successfully mock Cap'n Crunch, because believe me, I've tried, and *shudders* darkest months of my life.
“Ladies, gentlemen, and Slytherins!” came a high, clear voice from the commentators’ box. “Just kidding, you know I had to make my biased joke of the day. No more after this, I promise. Anyway, this is the final match of the Hogwarts Quidditch cup, between the Gryffindor Germs and the Slytherin Slimeballs. See, equal-opportunity insults there! Anyway, I’m your commentator, the lovely, loquacious Haley Potter, and I’m the twin sister of the snotty jerk down there captaining the Gryffindor team.”
^^Haley is so cool. I heard 'loquacious' somewhere, but I didn't know what it meant. Thank you for (unintentionally) clearing that up.
“Merlin’s beard! Merlin’s toenail clippings! Merlin’s… er…excess earwax!” she screamed in delight. “This has never, ever, ever happened before! Jordan Potter, my baby brother—although we’re twins and he’s taller, I’m three point three minutes older—has caught the Snitch! It’s, like, ten seconds into the game! That’s just… insanely awesome!” She was getting teary-eyed, and her increasingly incoherent shrieks were still amplified so that the entire stadium could hear. “JORDAN!” she wailed, “you’re the best brother ever, and I love you! I love you and your amazing Quidditch skills!”
^^Is that a new record? Cos even Harry didnt manage that.
At some point--it was all a blur--they were dismissed from the stadium, and Emma found herself in the Common Room. Her mother had sobbed sentimental motherly things at her about how proud she was. Conversely, she and her father had done the elaborate secret handshake that they’d invented when she was five, and he told her in an unsentimental fatherly manner that since she’d already busted some bad guys at her tender age, she would kick some serious backside as an Auror. Only Ron didn’t actually say ‘backside.’
^^Ron, Ron, Ron. I know what he said, and I love it. I'm so proud. *sniffles*
Author's Response: Ohhh, come on, I\'m sure your Cap\'n Crunch joke wasn\'t that bad! I mean, when I saw Veggie Tales for the first time at the age of five-ish, the Pirates Who Don\'t Do Anything were arguing about how one of them looked like Captain Crunch in his hat, and I just thought it was hilarious...
\r\nFANFIC IS EDUCATIONAL! YOU CAN LEARN VOCAB! As for Jordan catching it, it was sheer dumb luck. He just happened to be where the Snitch was. It\'s all pretty much luck, where the Snitch is released-- what takes skill is racing the other Seeker to it, but Jordan didn\'t even have to do that. So Harry\'s still a better Seeker, but Jordan won the game in a faster time.
“What do you mean?” the boy responded smoothly. “So, uh, what’s up?”
“The sun,” Emma replied flatly.
^^Awww. Emma and her sarcasm, which is so much like mine. I really love her! And I think this story says 'Completed:no', so is it???
Lily Elizabeth Evans?? Oh! I expected Lee to be Lee Jordan! But I love that Haley can keep the diary. Is Harry gonna write in it as well??
So unaware, in fact, that they did not notice a line figure standing in the hall, a sneer of cynical amusement contorting his lips. “So,” drawled Professor Zabini. “This would be the ‘love’ part of your little love-hate relationship, I gather?”
Emma pulled herself away from Tyrone and held herself in a straight, dignified manner. “And you would be the ‘hate’ part,” she answered calmly.
“What did you say?” hissed Zabini.
“I think you heard me, Mr. Potato Head,” she said. “Oh, I’m sorry, I meant Professor Potato Head.” And with that, she stalked away, hair swaying emphatically in her wake.
Once again, Tyrone whistled through his teeth, though for an entirely different reason this time.
^^This.was.bloody.BRILLIANT! Emma is awesome! I just got yelled @ by one of my teachers today, and I have to admit, I was rather sarcastic during it.
Now, for the request:
Favorite OC: VLAAAADISLAAAAAV. or Giorgi. I can't decide.
Least Favorite OC: Sadly, shy, sensitive Arden
1 I can relate to most: A combo of deep Vlad, Giorgi's originality, determined Emma, and cocky Tyrone.
Now: THIS WAS AWESOME!!! I really liked it. Arden's drawing was awesome, and Vlad was so awesome (Haley/Vladislav ship comes to mind. *nudges* huh? huh?) and I loved how Emma was so calm with Zabini. I am so like her, and therefore, she is my favorite.Not that I don't like the others, as I like Giorgi and Ted as well. (I actually made my mom take me shopping for a pair of plaid Converse high tops like Giorgi's yesterday.) And so, this is the sad part: The ending made me cry. For some strange reason that remains unknown, I got very emotional when I got up to the Lily Elizabeth Evans part, and it boiled over once I got to 'When at last their waving subsided', I cried. Your ending was so powerful. I can't wait for The Past to come up, and it sounds really good. Also, I can't draw to save my life. Unless it's a coffee mug. I rock at coffee mugs. So, my last review for The Truth comes to an end, with a zzzeliontasticaliciousastic/10. Schmergo, you have outdone yourself. You are a legend!!! {BeccA} P.S. That guy in Love a Duck named Erasmus, I just read about him in history!!! *i am so easily amused*
Author's Response: It says it\'s complete now. ^_^ Sorry to disappoint!
\r\nI really like Emma, and I\'m so glad I wrote her a spin-off story. She\'s a fun character... I think she can best be described as the little voice in the back of my head that says nasty thoughts that I\'d never say out loud, the most honest and blunt person. It\'s very therapeutic to write about her. ^_^
\r\nI don\'t know if Harry\'s going to write in the diary-- I think he\'s grown up and he\'s the age now where he\'s accepted the fact that his parents died and moved on. I\'m not sure how healthy it would be for Harry, especially since it\'s not *really* his mother, just her personality, and she\'s only seventeen years old, and it\'s just odd. I don\'t know, I never really thought about this before. Thanks for bringin\' it up.
\r\nIt\'s so cool that you like Vladislav! I was worried people wouldn\'t like him, but I do... sadly, he\'s not in the third book (only a couple of brief mentions), but there is a character named Anatoly who\'s very eccentric and has a similar sense of humour to Vlad\'s. I\'m so glad you liked this!
\r\nDesiderius Erasmus came up on my SOL (standardized test) for history, and I kinda started laughing like an idiot...\r\n
In the words of Haley: SQUEEEE!!!!! YAY! The chapter's finally up! I'm so excited! It's been a while, and in the time it took for this to be validated, 3 of the Pride and Pre-Juiced Plums chapters have been validated! Yay! (Sorry, I've had no life over the last few days.)
“Nooo, I named the giant squid Vladislav,” replied Haley, rolling her eyes.
^^This is nice. So, does Haley end up marrying Vladislav in Pride and Pre-juiced Plums? Cause they make a nice couple... and she seems to like him, being sarcastic and all, so...
“Right, we’re now called Team Sparkle!” Haley proclaimed to the other members of her group. Vladislav raised an eyebrow disdainfully, and Haley whirled around and glared at him. “Be very glad that I’m not making you wear this pockety jacket and be the Team Sparkle mascot,” she hissed. “No more eyebrow antics, please-kay-thanks.”
^^OK, I picture Vladislav as Viktor Krum in the books (because I think the actor ruined him, no offense to Stan.) and I would looooove to see that guy in a pockety jacket as the Team Sparkle mascot.
Now it was Giorgi’s turn to look taken aback. “Uhh, hi, Haley, Ted, Emma, Ivy… uh, I’m sorry I forgot your name, the tall curly-haired one, er, Maria—is that right?, Arden, and Vladithingy,” she muttered disorientedly.
“Vladithingy?” repeated Vladislav.
^^Vladithingy? Kinda like how Vernon called Voldy Lord Voldythingy. You must be a witch!!! You have magical powers of humour!!! I dont know how I came up with that...
Emma’s eyes sparked menacingly. “You don’t get it. I need to put my hair in pigtails.”
A slow, slightly twisted smile meandered across Jordan’s face. “Take all the time you want,” he said.
^^Huh? Chapter 11 better get here soon so that I know what the Niflheim Emma's talking about! Does it have to do with Giorgi? Or Tyrone? Or Team Sparkle?
A zizzelion and THREE (highest rating ever)/10 {Becca}
P.S. I love Giorgi's outfit, by the way. I might actually have to do that sometime, as it wouldn't surprise anyone. (I'm sirius, people are used to me dressing weird, but not 70s weird.)
P.P.S. Wait! Your summary says 'In the end, the truth will have to come out.' Does that mean that this story is almost over????? Nooo! It happened so fast! Why must the good die young?!?!?! (And in the off-chance that it is not, actually, close to the end of the story and it actually has 12 more chapters to go, forget this entire P.P.S.)
Author's Response: II am sooo glad that you liked this! It\'s been in quue for so long, I was hoping that it didn\'t disappoint people. *Zips lips about Haley\'s love life* Okay, I picture Vladislav as (what am I saying, I invented him-- he looks like however I want him to) very pointy and angular-looking, not necessarily skinny, but with very sharp features. Like a very young Patrick Dempsey, only less happy.
\r\nThe pigtails thing... no one remembers this! When Emma\'s, like, getting into combat mode, feeling particularly tough, she ends up wearing pigtails.
\r\nI dress in a really, really odd way, and Giorgi\'s outfits are exaggerated parodies of what I actually wear. As for the chapters, there will be a total of thirteen, so three more to go.
“Yes, EMMMMMM-A’s the CHAMMMP-ION, my FRIEEE-ENDS!” she sang loudly.
^^You are inspirational. Literally. One of my best friends won the school spelling bee a few days ago, so in the middle of class I started loudly singing "CLAAAAAAAAIRE IS THE CHAMPION,MY FRIENDS!" I'm surprised I didnt get detention for it... 100000/10.
{Becca}
P.S. I have a problem: I cant seem to leave one of your chapters with only 1 review!
Author's Response: Hahahaha, if you did get detention, you should\'ve appealed by showing my story to your teacher and explaining that this mysterious Schmergo child who you don\'t even know influenced you. Tell Claire I said congrats! ^)^
I finally submitted a story! *does the crazy-happy-story-dance. Its alot like my crazy-happy-pittsburgh-penguins-dance, but alot less painful. So, Potter's Pentagon The Truth... Giorgi. I do think you're gonna kill her! Jordan doesnt deserve any more pain! But anyway, my story The Next Generation is gonna have 4 books, and I really hope you read it! And in the mean time... How many stories will the Potter's Pentagon world have?
Author's Response: I\'d like to hear the story of the \"crazy happy pittsburgh penguins dance\" and how it got to be so painful... I REALLY want to read your stories. I love reading next-gen stories... and, quite obviously, writing them.
\r\nThis is a trilogy, so the main storyline (Jordan\'s journey) will have three books. Even though book 1 focuses on Ivy, book 2 focuses on Emma, and book 3 focuses on Ted, the entire span of the trilogy is really about Jordan\'s character arc and coming-of-age story. But there are side projects/spinoffs-- Pride and Pre-Juiced Plums is Emma\'s diary, and it\'s set five years after the characters have graduated and focuses on Emma\'s romantic life (as well as some of the other characters\' romantic lives). I may even do a NEXT-NEXT-GEN, set when these characters are grown up, or a prequel set in their first year, but not for some time, if I do in the end.
\r\nNo one dies in this story. But there are deaths in the next/final book of the trilogy.
Ok, I had the weirdest dream last night!I dreamt it from Emma's point of view: Ted, Arden, Ivy, Haley, Giorgi, Jordan, Tyrone, Emma, Marina, and VLAAAAAADISLAAAAV were going to stop Apple, but they ended up in the studio of Idol Gives Back. Apple turned out to be MICHAEL JOHNS, one of the nicest guys to ever be on American Idol! He kidnapped fellow contestant Brooke White and was making her interrogate Potter's Pentagon. Emma went to face him, and he made her give him the definition of advaco (upon waking up, I looked this up: There's no such thing) before running off, screaming about how people shouldnt feed chickens. Emma asked Brooke why Michael was trying to destroy humanity, she said it was to stop people from marrying pandas. Then Emma said that they were going to hide in the Canadien wilderness and fly to Englad tomorrow. Then Michael magically appeared again and captured Ted! And I woke up without knowing whether or not Ted was freed. (If this really happens, I will be shocked). Anyway, I can't remember if I reviewed, so a zizzelion and FOUR/10 for the whole story. {Becca}
Author's Response: This is the absolute BEST dream I have ever heard of. And dreaming it from Emma\'s point of view is pretty darn interesting, too. But the best part-- Tancred Apple as Michael Johns! And stopping people from marrying pandas! The horror! Strangely enough, Apple actually DOES look like a former Idol contestant-- he strongly resembles former Idol finalist Constantine Maroulis, but less creepy-looking.
Wow, that was a really good chapter! I loved it, and I hope you update soon!
{BeccA}
P.S. In your summary, it says 'The story of Moony, Wormtongue, Padfoot, and Prongs' NEWT year will be told.' Shouldn't that be Wormtail?
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for telling me. I'll fix that right away!
That was a really good chapter! Although, I'll admit I was a little disturbed at Remus when he was hiding from the moon, and his way of talking was a bit weird, but anyway, it was still good! {BeccA}
Author's Response: Trust me, I found him disturbing too. Thank you very much!
Hey Jessica! I wanted to thank you again for making that banner for me over on the forums, AnythingButOrdinary13. And I decided to drop over the second I got a chance to review here! (Quick question: how do you exactly get a banner to your author page? I'm hopelessly confused with banners and the forums in general. I do believe I'll draw myself a map).
Never before have I read a fanfic where Regulus was getting ready to leave, and where he wasn't afraid of dying. And I love how it mentions the trio like that in the end. All in all, excellent job capturing all of his emotions like that, and I just love the idea for the story. {BeccA}
Hey Jessica! I wanted to thank you again for making that banner for me over on the forums, AnythingButOrdinary13. And I decided to drop over the second I got a chance to review here! (Quick question: how do you exactly get a banner to your author page? I'm hopelessly confused with banners and the forums in general. I do believe I'll draw myself a map).
Never before have I read a fanfic where Regulus was getting ready to leave, and where he wasn't afraid of dying. And I love how it mentions the trio like that in the end. All in all, excellent job capturing all of his emotions like that, and I just love the idea for the story. {BeccA}
Ugh double post. Sorry about that. {BeccA}