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06/05/08

Reviews by minervassister

Molly and her Daughter by Northumbrian

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A story about Ginny's school days, and the relationship between a mother and her daughter.

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 01/24/13 Title: Chapter 2: Harry Who?

Good to hear more about Molly, Ginny and Arthur.
Characterisation spot on as usual.

Author's Response: Thank you.
The next chapter will add Professor Dumbledore to the mix.
-N-

Brown by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lavender Brown is not the easiest of people to get along with. Mark has managed to overcome the first hurdle, she has finally agreed that they are going out together. Now Mark faces another challenge.

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 06/07/12 Title: Chapter 1: York

How could any future parent-in-law not love Mark?
This is another great chapter.
The English Tourist board should sponsor you the way you describe Rye it sounds a lovely place to visit.
the dreich rain is spot on too!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
You'll find out how Mark survives his day in the third and final chapter.
Rye is a beautiful little town, and that's from someone who doesn't like the south coast much.
Dreich, I'm told, is probably a Scandinavian word, but a lot of northern slang is.
-N-

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 05/23/12 Title: Chapter 1: York

Love this!
Mark is so nice and Laveder is such a complex character, thay are great together.
Hope to hear more soon.
Well done on revealing another facet of the story.

Author's Response: Thanks.
I wanted to write a first-person Mark story (Lavender's already had one in Bare). It was supposed to be a one shot, like Bare. It grew to over 11,000 words so it will be three chapters of Mark doing what he's best at, worrying.
-N-

Conversations by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Ron and Hermione have some news.

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 07/18/12 Title: Chapter 1: Conversations

Lovely! You got it just right as always.

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

Yggdrasil by Northumbrian

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary:
Luna attends the International Symposium on Fantastic Beasts in Sweden. She is looking for proof of the existence of the Crumple-Horned Snorkack. What she finds is something else entirely.

This is Northumbrian of Ravenclaw writing for Round Two (Travel Prompt) of the 2012 Madam Pomfreyâ€™s One-Shot Character Triathlon.

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 07/31/12 Title: Chapter 1: Yggdrasil

My late father used to say, "For every Jock there's a Jeanie".
So good to see the saying come true with Luna and Rolf.
They were made for each other, lovely story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
A nice (and very Scottish) saying Iâ€™ve never heard before.
I tried to make them a good fit. Luna certainly recognised a kindred spirit.
-N-

Zygosis by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:
Zygosis: the biological process of conjugation; the union of cells or gametes.

Life exists to procreate, to recreating itself, being created by many different methods. Because of that urge to create new life, Auror Albus Potter finds himself in trouble.

This is Northumbrian of Ravenclaw writing for Round Two (Minor Characters: Harry Potterâ€™s birthday) of the 2012 Madam Pomfreyâ€™s One-Shot Character Triathlon.

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 07/31/12 Title: Chapter 1: Zygosis

Wonderful!
Would love to know what happened at the party.

Author's Response: Thanks.
Ine day, you may.
-N-

Killers by Northumbrian

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:
Tom and Camelia are two people in search of something unobtainable, and each is prepared to kill to achieve their goal. For both, murder is simply the means to an end. For both, their victims are unimportant; they are merely collateral damage in the quest to live forever. What happens when two very different killers meet?

This is Northumbrian of Ravenclaw House writing for Round Three of the 2012 Character Triathlon.

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 08/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: Killers

Very convincing story, we know that Tom went down some very strange roads trying to cheat death.
Like the idea of Camelia becoming less evil because of her contact with good and bad.

Author's Response: Thanks
The idea that Tom would consider becoming a vampire was one I really wanted to explore.
Camelia somehow managed to take control of the story. Can she mend her ways?
-N-

James and Me by Northumbrian

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:
Annabel is having a bad day. Her sudden and unexpected meeting with a face from her past is unlikely to improve matters.

This was Northumbrian of Ravenclaw House writing for Round Three of the 2012 Character Triathlon. This is now a longer chaptered story.

Nominated for: Best Original Character (Chaptered) story (for the narrator, Annabel) and Best Next Generation Story - Quicksilver Quills 2013

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 08/30/12 Title: Chapter 2: Persistence

Great story, love the way your stories all connect with one another.
When does Annie find out the truth about the Potters?

Author's Response: Thanks.
When? Fairly soon. At least she does, you might have to wait a while, sorry.
-N-

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 04/03/15 Title: Chapter 5: Tiger

Lovely! Great to hear more about Annie and James.
Happy Easter.

Author's Response: Thank you.
and Happy Easter.
-N-

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 07/29/14 Title: Chapter 4: Friendship

This is a great story. So good to see Annie getting over Simon and remembering her strange friends from the past.
Looking forward to seeing how she figures it all out or does James tell her?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
The next chapter will be entirely James/Annie, but after that you can expect appearances from some of the other gang members.
-N-

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 01/17/16 Title: Chapter 6: Peverell?

Loved this chapter, was singing along with them!
Hope Annie finds out about magic soon.
Thanks for finding the time to update.

Author's Response: Thanks. I wondered if youâ€™d know the song. As a Washingtonian, the sites (Lambton, Penshaw, and the River Wear) were all on my doorstep when I was growing up. I didnâ€™t move North of the Tyne until I was in my early twenties.
As for updates, itâ€™s beginning to look like Iâ€™ll have a lot of time on my hands in the near future.

Xmas Daze by Northumbrian

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Christmas is coming and there is a lot to be done. When the Potters offer to look after the Charlton kids, Annie and her mum meet Harryâ€™s biggest friend.

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 12/18/12 Title: Chapter 1: Annie Charlton and the World's Most Ginormous Santa

Lovely!! Hagrid makes a perfect Santa.
You got Annie's speech spot on.
Well done!
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:
Thank you, he does, doesn't he?
It took a while, and a lot of listening.
Thanks again, more soon, I hope.
-N-

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 12/18/12 Title: Chapter 1: Annie Charlton and the World's Most Ginormous Santa

Lovely!! Hagrid makes a perfect Santa.
You got Annie's speech spot on.
Well done!
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: :-D

Disharmony by Northumbrian

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:
A good restaurant, a fine meal and an excellent wine, all in the company of friends, what could possibly go wrong? Harry, Ginny, Ron and Hermione are about to find out.

This is Northumbrian of Ravenclaw writing for the 2013 Great Hall Valentine's Day Cotillion.

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 02/02/13 Title: Chapter 1: Disharmony

Well done! Harry and Ron were bound to try it out one day, it's a bit like identical twins,difficult to resist trying to confuse your partners.
Only Luna can see through it naturally though.

Author's Response: Thank you. It took a surfeit of wine and an ill-considered bet, but yes. And Ginny is, in my opinion, very competitive. She would not want to lose. -N-

Concerns by Northumbrian

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Hermione is pregnant, Ron is an idiot...

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 03/18/13 Title: Chapter 1: Concerns

Poor Ron he cares so much and always says the wrong thing.
I was worried about Hermione, so glad it turned out well.
Thanks for another addition to the story.

Author's Response:
Thanks.
He does, doesnâ€™t he?
I intended to worry you, Iâ€™m glad I succeeded. ;-)
More of something soon.
-N-

Hogsmeade by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Students in their third year and above can visit Hogsmeade. Only one second year student ever managed to get there. How did he do it?

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 04/13/13 Title: Chapter 1: Hogsmeade

So nice to hear more about Colin and Dennis.
Fenella is another favourite, would like to hear more about her.

Author's Response: Thank you.
You'll be seeing a lot more of Fenella soon, in several different stories.
-N-

Troth by Northumbrian

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Fame and infamy are closely related. Reputations are not always what they seem. Lavender Brown has a lot of explaining to do.

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 04/13/13 Title: Chapter 1: Troth

The path of true love etc. etc.!
Lavvy indeed, you couldn't resist it.
Always good to hear more about Lavender and Mark.

Author's Response: Thanks. It's certainly a fitted and potholes path. Who can resist a toilet joke? More Mark and Lavender soon. -N-

Vault by Northumbrian

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry and Ginny visit Gringotts, and find a priceless treasure.

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 04/21/13 Title: Chapter 1: Vault

That was great!
Being even older than Harry's parents, I particularly enjoyed the inclusion of Steeleye Span one of my favourite bands.

Author's Response:
Thank you.
Thatâ€™s not old! I was researching 70â€™s punk for a much darker story, and suddenly realised that Lily was a folk-rock fan, and this story arrived.
Any idea where I can get my hands on the reggae version of Spotted Cow?
-N-
ps Saw the Richard Thompson gig for the closure of Television Centre. Swarbrick looked really old and frail, but he can still play that fiddle.

Little Victory by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: In which William Arthur Weasley meets, and eventually loses, a beautiful girl. It is something that happens to all fathers.

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 04/29/13 Title: Chapter 1: Une Petite Victoire

Delightful!
Fluff but very well written fluff about characters we know and love.
Thanks for brightening my morning.
ps can only find the usual version of Spotted cow.

Author's Response: Thanks.
My first attempt at a Victoire/Teddy story, glad you liked it.
Perhaps I simply dreamt hearing Span doing a reggae version.
-N-

Chaser by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: As Angelina Johnson takes the Hogwarts Express back to school for her seventh year, she has a problem.

Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 05/06/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chaser

Good to hear more of Angelina and the twins back story.
(The reggae "Spotted cow" does exist I just can't find a copy.)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and the confirmation that my memory isnâ€™t as bad as I feared. -N-

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