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06/12/05

Reviews by DiXoN

Too Sweet to Remember by Canadian Confessional

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Meet James Potter, a clever, somewhat mischievous, popular student at Hogwarts. He takes every situation in stride and has everything under control, except one: Lily Evans, an amazingly beautiful and intelligent individual. He loves her more than anything, but she despises him more than anything, and a not-so-impressive run-in late at night with her leaves James thinking that chasing after Lily might be hopeless. Then, a series of events happen in James' life, which is topped off by an unexpected visitor that makes his sixth year too sweet to remember.

Reviewer: DiXoN Signed
Date: 04/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Crumble to Ash

This story is truly one of the very best here ... I think it was a brilliant idea of yours to write it from James's POV ... that makes it more interesting ... You've just surpassed 'Secret Lily' (very good author here) on the James/Lily fics ... and now you're the top of my list on James/Lily fics .... Keep writing! ... And Update Soon! P.S: I find that most of the fics here have a 'fast-forwardish' and 'unreal' feel to them ... but you've just wiped that doubt from my mind.

Author's Response: OK, I must say that this review is very flattering. Upon reading this, I immediately felt a surge of inspiration and edited chapter 21 with utmost intensity and speed. So, thank you so much! I'm very happy that you like the story so far, and also how I wrote it from James's POV. I tried avoiding the "unreal" feel as much as I possibly could when writing this fan fiction. Thank-you once again, and I'll be sure to update as soon as the Queue re-opens.