10/07/08
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Hey, I'm Alexi, and I go to Scotts Valley Middle School. I would be what I call a "one shot wonder" because that's all I write. My style mostly revolves around the inspiration from true emotions and meaningful lyrics of songs. Most of my fics are inspired by songs from a band called The Fray, which is really all I listen to. I love to write dark, as you can see from my current fic. I tend to express the darker sides of love and life in a very powerful way. And really all I write in is second person POV because it's the easiest way to express the emotions and words I try to portray.
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Why Can't It Be Me? by Maraudersgirl-SD
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry and Ginny's relationship in Sixth year from the perspective of Dean Thomas.
Date: 02/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
You go girl!!! This is amazing and yeah, i have been wanting to read the Ginny/Harry pairing from another perspective for a really long time.
I spotted a few punctuation and grammar errors but I tried not to pay attention to those!! Good job!!!!!
Author's Response: ( : Thank you very much. Sorry for the big delay on responding and even more sorry for the grammatical errors. I don't have a beta....Thanks again for the review. Check my profile out soon...There are some updates happening. Including more stories if your interested.
With Roses in My Hand by annie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: When you're dreaming with a broken heart, the giving up is the hardest part.
Date: 04/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: With Roses in My Hand
To me this seems like a fic that should go under the "Dark/Angsty" section of the forum. I liked it, nonetheless. So apart from your other fics though, but still very, very well written.
A Black Rose by theworldonlyknows
Rated: Professors •Summary: In Bellatrix’s own world there was only one person she could ever truly love; but what made her marry another? What made her accept another? How could she betray her heart?
Date: 04/14/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow. Very well written. I like it even though I don't normally like these kinds of fics. I have now explored into the deep depths of MNFF. :p
Heartbeats by ninasphyxiated
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: One-shot. He's all that she can think about; he's utterly messing with her mind. She tries to avoid him as best she can, but on this one night, she just can't help it ... Something's sure to happen.
A/N: This is my version of Harry and Ginny's first kiss: i.e., HBP's been disregarded. The verses at the beginning and end of the fic are from the song 'Heartbeats' by Jose Gonzalez.
Date: 05/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I don't normally read canon fics but this one was awesome! You write a lot like I do (which is a compliment, don't worry) and maybe better.
Date: 05/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I don't normally read canon fics but this one was awesome! You write a lot like I do (which is a compliment, don't worry) and maybe better.
Date: 05/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I liked the last little bit...
Sirius by SexY_LydZ
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: James shivered; Sirius had a way of looking at him that made him feel bare, exposed under that intense grey gaze.
How can a boy protect his best friend from things he can’t even see?
Date: 05/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: Shiver
Wow. No words could describe how achingly beautiful that was. I loved how you showed the love that went both ways and I loved...everything.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. It was a very different writing experience for me, so I'm glad you thought it was beautiful.
Rebel Stars by Mistletoe
Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: In which Remus considers his feelings and hesitations as he once again steals away on a nightly rendezvous with Sirius.
Winner of the 2009 QSQ for Best Same-Sex Pairing! =]
Date: 04/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: The stars are blazing...
Cute.
I love the second person viewpoint and that really helped register how much the speaker was really feeling.
Everything We Could Have Been by redcastle
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: With Ron's constant snogging of his new girlfriend, Lavender, Hermione is never around. Yes, she was jealous of Lavender and upset with Ron, but what was she doing all this time? The rise of Voldemort, constant pressure in school, and her love for Ron are clear issues in her life, but what if Hermione was struggling with other problems—problems no one else, save one, knew about? What if, while in love with Ron, she found herself falling in love with someone else—someone none of her friends, nor herself, would ever have expected? This is the bittersweet tale of the love that blossomed between Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy during their 6th year at Hogwarts and beyond.
**UPDATE:** I am sorry for taking such a long break. I am now rewriting the story from a third person perspective because I just feel it is my stronger style and I feel I could not describe things the way I wanted to simply from Hermione's eyes, especially because she could not know Draco's thoughts, which I would like to include. I hope to finish the new Prologue in a few days and hopefully it will be validated quickly. I will probably just delete the current chapters as soon as the new version is accepted. Please continue to review and let me know what your opinion of the new version is. Again, I am so sorry. Future updates will be announced on my livejournal account so please follow there and comment. Thank you for any fans left out there who believe in my story. I am also looking for a beta to please look over my chapters before I submit them. Send me a message on the forum (username: redcastle) or on livejournal (username: cherryredcastle) if you are interested.
Date: 02/19/09 Title: Everything We Could Have Been
Okay. That's awesome and you just gave me an Idea for mine...
Author's Response: :) I look forward to reading it.
Date: 02/20/09 Title: Everything We Could Have Been
This part could have been a little better though it is still pretty good.
Author's Response: Do you have any suggestions? I really haven't written a whole story in first person before so this is sort of a trial run for me.
The Broom Cupboard by Cirelondiel
Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Summary:
Your relationship with Fred existed almost entirely within a broom cupboard.
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You and Fred: a Hufflepuff and a Gryffindor, two complementary souls. In a world where nothing is certain, you find comfort in a dusty third-floor storage room.
Date: 02/25/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Broom Cupboard
The ending actually made me cry!!! I don't normally like things in second person, but I love it!!!!
Author's Response: Aw - I'm glad you enjoyed this despite the unusual POV. It's my favourite way to write :) And, lol, sorry I made you cry!
Date: 02/25/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Broom Cupboard
You just gave me an awesome idea for a fanfic!!!
Author's Response: Haha. Glad I got the plot bunnies hatching >.>
Author's Response: Haha. Glad I got the plot bunnies hatching >.>
Date: 03/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Broom Cupboard
I've rally never read a fanfic as good as this one. I emailed it to a few of my friends and they all say it's "horribly depressing" but I don't agree!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOOOOOOOOVE IT!
Author's Response: I suppose it could be seen that way. I'm glad you liked it at least! Thanks for all your compliments!
A Night on the Town by Mistletoe, Rhi for HP
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Rosmerta finds that life is much more monotonous than she thought-- all until Sirius Black shows up in the middle of the night and shows her simplicity is what life's all about.
Other Pairing: Sirius/Rosmerta
Written for the Slytherin Co-Author Valentine's Day Challenge by Mistletoe and Rhi for HP.
Date: 02/23/09 Title: Chapter 1: Is All She Needed
Very, very unique. I love the pairing. The writing is good and It makes you think, "what's going to happen next?" I love it. Keep up the good work!!!
Last Chance to Lose Control by lily_evans34
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Hermione has lost everything – until she finds someone who understands, whose companionship transcends her faith in everything she has ever known. Songfic to ‘Hysteria’ by Muse.
Date: 05/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Hysteria
I loved it!! The ending actually made me cry a bit.
Author's Response: oh, wow! Thank you very much!
Underneath by Slytherin Tears
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary:
But what happens when she falls in love with someone she's sworn to eternally loathe?
Snape/Sinistra
Date: 03/20/09 Title: Chapter 1: Of Cigarettes and Sarcasm
Yeah, I agree. I can't wait to see what happens, whether it unfolds....
My Troubled Tyrant by Belledeg
Rated: Professors • Summary: Keedie Dante has experienced many amazing things during her time at Hogwarts, including the hushed up drama that was the Chamber of Secrets. However, with two overachieving friends and a headmaster who does not even know she exists, Keedie feels that perhaps her seventh year will not be too spectacular. However, Dumbeldore sees her potential as a writer and enrols her in a simple writing course. Here, she meets the mysterious and terrifying Tom Riddle and they instantly get under one another's skin. She is drawn to his dark determination towards some unknown goal and he is fascinated by her, in every way. However, Tom's friends do not approve of Keedie and her unconventional ways and Keedie has many people trying to keep her away from the dark young man as well. Something inside tells Keedie that she can make him better, but even he assures her that this is an impossible task. But she's not one to give up easily...
"He is a dark one, Keedie. Try not to let him consume you entirely."
This story has the characters Albus Dumbledore, Armando Dippet, Moaning Myrtle, Rubeus Hagrid, Aaron Dante, Harry Potter, Ebony Abbott, Minerva McGonagall, Melena Creevey, Ollivander, Gregor Holmwood, Horace Slughorn and, of course, Tom Riddle and Keedie Dante...enjoy!
Winner of "Best Romance Between Other Characters" and nominated for "Best Female OC" in the 2009 Quicksilver Quill Awards
Date: 05/25/09 Title: Chapter 11: Dark Blue
I absolutely love this chapter! I think its my favorite so far and I can't wait to see the rest of it! Keep on writing. (Please. I beg of you!)
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter thirteen's up, which means we're half way there. :-)
Date: 05/02/09 Title: Chapter 9: Right Here In My Arms
Why do you keep getting better? *smiles* Just kidding. That was awesome!!!! I like the song lyrics you chose. It fit the story all too perfectly.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. I am pretty proud of that song choice.
Date: 06/27/09 Title: Chapter 13: Cruel Man
Awwww!!!!! Probably my favorite chapter so far. Can't wait to read more!
I loved this chapter because you so strongly illustrated that Tom, for once, has a weakness and he is afraid of this because he does not want to lose her.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. Please keep reading and reviewing, I love response!
Date: 04/29/09 Title: Chapter 8: I Don't Know How To Love Him!
YAYZ!!!!! I love it! This is the first fanfic where I've kept very up-to-date on it. I hope you finish it soon! the plot is very, very well thought out and I love Tom's possessiveness of Keedie.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm sooo glad you like it. And yes, Tom is possesive and he gets worse. As for updating, the story is quite long but it's finished and there should be at least one or two chapters posted a week. Please keep reading and reviewing, it is so nice for me!!!