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All's Well That Ends Well? by Shock
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: James and Lily-their seventh year. We all know what happens in the end, but what about the beginning? In their last year at Hogwarts, mysteries unravel, friends are betrayed, and, of course, couples destined to be fall in love.
Date: 06/23/09 Title: Chapter 2: Familiarity
very good so far (:
and sorry if i'm being annoying, but shouldn't htere only be one of the line things ( - ) here: But---”
not 3?...whatever...
Date: 06/23/09 Title: Chapter 3: Black
i don't know, this chappie seemed ind of cliche...i've read similar ones in other fics, although maybe they were also based on this one, like with the beginning...
i still love it, though!
-Andrea
Date: 06/23/09 Title: Chapter 4: Enter the Marauders
uhh, you portraided the marouders perfetly!!!! NICE!!!
A Little Past Logical; A Lot About Love by FannyPrice
Rated: Professors •Summary:
Mr. and Mrs. Potter- or, as they prefer to be called, Lily and James- are two well-respected and talented top field operatives for the Order of the Phoenix. But they have sacrificed having a home of their own and the careers of their choice to fight bravely against Lord Voldemort. Now, at barely twenty years of age, life has thrown them another curve . . . Lily is pregnant. How can you face starting a family when all you've ever known of adult life is war? In this tale, everybody's favorite couple is forced to grow up once again.
They were the couple that made single people jealous and older people shake their heads fondly, lost in thought.
Date: 08/22/09 Title: Chapter 1: Not Eating Dinner
oyoyoyoy great first chappie. My friend told me to read this fic, so I hope it lives up to my expectations! :P
Date: 08/22/09 Title: Chapter 2: Suspicions Revealed
uh, i love how james and lily are together. it's so... perfect (:
Date: 08/22/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: A Flower is a Delicate Thing
hehe. the eye thing is kinda like moody's :P i noticed that.
and good job on the research, haha
and ouch. this is a great story, i can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 08/22/09 Title: Chapter 4: London Calling
haha, funny chappie, although ... well james being responceable is also funny, although it makes sence; he IS married... and the mission... lily wont like this..... oh boy..... *scared*
Date: 08/22/09 Title: Chapter 5: Stuck in Surrey
at the very beginning, you dsaid two pregnant women in a house was one tooo many. this is not strictly true. And a few chapters back you had alsice an lily be in a house together and it was good, wasn't it? But it does have a ring to it, and of course w/ lily and petunia it's completly true.
And a nit-picky thing. wizards can't conjure food.
poor lily. i wonder what james is up to.... well, i'll read and find out!
Date: 08/22/09 Title: Chapter 6: The Brothers Black
uh, ouc. do you think tho, if reg hadnt been there that they couldn't have beeten the muggles?
Date: 08/22/09 Title: Chapter 7: Something Wrong
cliffie, you meany! good chappie tho. i'll be waiting for the next!
oh and to the earlier chapters, i also like how the marauder's bond.... and de je vou (is that how u spell it? with that accent thing?) w/ marge. haha....
Sirius: The Black Knight by Pussycat123
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Sirius was killed by Bellatrix. When he lands headlong at his dead best friend’s feet, he is a little perplexed. All is soon explained, however. He has reached Heaven, and James is here to welcome him. Before he can begin to get used to life in Heaven, he must first “watch his life” on the large screen in front of him, because it will help him understand things better. And so, that’s what he does. From the very beginning, to the very end. You too, can follow him through the ups and downs. Follow him through the highs and the lows. Follow him through the laughter, the pain, and the romance. Follow him through the story of his life. This fic is a tribute to Sirius Black. It is not all marauder-era, although a bulk of it is, and that is why it’s in this category.
Date: 07/14/09 Title: Chapter 1: The End
Ohh!! i just found this fic and the first chapter was hilariua! i loved it! Sirius; characterization was like perfect!
But i could make it the size of Scotland? No offence, but Scotland isn't that big. :P But you saud even bigger...oh, just ignore what I just wrote.
I love this story and it is great! :P (well the first chappie was) How long ago did you write this?
Author's Response: Ick. YEARS. It feels kind of cringy just thinking about it, but never mind, I'm still glad you like it anyway. And, yeah, I know there are bigger countries than Scotland, but if you think about it in comparison to other rooms, a Scotland-sized room would still be pretty mega. Anyway, thanks for reviewing, and if you read the rest, I will apologise in advance for any of the horribly written stuff you might find. =)
Date: 07/14/09 Title: Chapter 2: The First Eleven
Ouch. So cruel. ):
I though bellatrix was older than Andromenda....
Author's Response: =D Yeah, it's best not to think about all that. I was a little confused ...
Adventures in Courtship by SunDevil05
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: The war is over. Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley finally have the chance for the happiness they've been craving. But, with Harry recovering from the war and Ginny back in school, can they finally have the relationship they've always wanted?
******Higher rating just to be safe.
Date: 08/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - Starting Over
haha. i didn't have time to even finish this chappie, but i'm defianetly planning to. :p i just wanted to say it was funny how ginny complained 'bout her mother mothering them and then she was sorta mothering harry too, in a way. like w/ his medicine :P
Date: 08/30/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - Starting Over
haha, i lov ed it! I liked how mrs weasley is like , matchmaking, lol. at first i expected her to be angry or somet.... but she does love harry,....
And I think you accidentaly put two 'was' in here:
Ginny was just was happy to be kissing him again.
Great chapter!
-goes to read the next-
Date: 08/30/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two - Let's Talk
uh, akward!!!!
u didnthave teddy over at christmass..... and when is hermione gonna come?
i liked how ron 'approves' to a point :P poor hary, though. and the homework-growns- lol
The Things I Do For L.O.V.E by Pussycat123
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Hi, I’m Lily Evans. You know, there are a lot of fics about me out there. I’m flattered that you spend time thinking about me, but sometimes sickened. How could these fics not mention my
Well, this fic has all of these things. It also has L.O.V.E (I’m the ‘L’), the elite group of
Date: 09/10/09 Title: Chapter 4: How To Fish, If You Want To End Up Wet
Uh, I like Iola.
Author's Response: I'm glad. =)
Date: 09/10/09 Title: Chapter 5: Quidditch, And All The Mayhem It Entails
uh, i like it! but you portray the marauders as blunedering idiot, like, really shallow, you know? This isn't really a Lily/marauders fic, so I'm wondering what you'll do with that... and hwo is she gonna chooooooooooooose???
Author's Response: Who indeed ...? Yeah, the Marauders are a little blundering, but you find out later that they're not quite as shallow as they might seem (unfortunately the same can't be said for som of the other characters!)
Date: 09/11/09 Title: Chapter 9: Too Much Can Happen In One Short Day
uh, good. i'm only scared she will fall for them again....
Author's Response: =) We shall see ...
Date: 09/11/09 Title: Chapter 15: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E
Uh, I loved it! *squeels*
Author's Response: Yay!
Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: 2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance
Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)
*Completed*
“I’ll always protect you.”
Date: 11/24/09 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Conversations and An Invitation
hm, like it, but I would think she would like to have Emma with her.