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03/17/09




Hello! I'm Alyssa. I joined this site just after I turned thirteen and I'm still here. Well, I'm here off and on.

Mugglenet is where I read my first fanfic, and it's where I tried submitting my first story. I met some of my best friends here.

This is just a great place.

I don't write very often, and when I do it's short. That'll never change, so never expect anything more than a one shot from me.

To anyone who has given me a review, thank you very much!




My first ever one-shot is Home, and my second is Talking in the Ministry. I don't think they are very good, so read at your own caution.

My stories:

Two is Better Than One - Harry/Hermione
Regret - Dark/Angsty (Molly's POV)
Home - Harry/Ginny
That One Detention - Other Pairing (Rosmerta/OC)
Your Time - Marauder Era (Lily's POV)
True Happiness - Dark/Angsty
Love Reign O're Me - Marauder Era (Remus's POV)
I Get By - Same-Sex Pairing (Crabbe/Goyle)
On my Own - Dark/Angsty (Sirius's POV)
Birthday Surprises - General
What Would You Do? - James/Lily ~ Won QSQ for best Canon Romance
Over and Over - Dark/Angsty (James's POV)
Talking in the Ministry - General

My poems:

Awaiting - A poem about the Final Battle.
Light My Fire - A Dolores/Fudge poem.
Character Haikus - Haikus about HP characters.
The One for Me - James's POV about Lily.
Father - A peom about Harry dying.
Madness - A poem about Azkaban.



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My Deliverance by TwinSuns

Rated: Professors • Past Featured Story
Summary: Voldemort's rising reign of terror, NEWTs, death attempts, a Headship, a tangled affair with James Potter, hilarity, grief, love, secrecy, maddness... it's almost hard to believe that I've survived to graduate. I am Lily Evans, and this is my 7th year.
Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 19: Interlude VIII

i LOVE this fan fic!!



Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 11/02/09 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Nine: Bonded

YAY!!!! I can't even tell you how happy I am that the next chapter is here. This is a very great chapter. I liked in the first part I didn't have to read the previous chapters to remember what happened. It was self explanitory without going into detail what happened. I like that.

I like what happened between Petunia and Lily too. It was fun to read a good fight/talk thing between them. The only things is I don't think that Petunia would swear like that.

The next part is my favorite. I love what Lily is thinking about James. It's very good. What Lily says to James is also very good. It's good to see her messing with him like that.

The part with Frank and the other guy is good too. It was good seeing him in there in a good way. I liked reading Frank and Fabian together. Having Alice and Frank so close but seperated by glass is also very good. It's like the 'close but yet so far' thing. That's what I thought when I read that scene.

With the next part my favorite line is “Lily, you’re lying half-naked in my bed, and you’ve just asked me to shag you. Trust me, I won’t be any longer than basic hygiene permits.”. Honestly, I don't know why I like it. It's worded really well and it fits with the scene well. James seems like a teen with that line, which is good. Lot's of fics make James very mature and that line sounds like a teen.

I like the next part too. It's kind of slow but not really. I hope you know what I mean. I wasn't expecting what happened to Alice. I was very surprised with that. It's kind of good though that she isn't pregnant. It would change everything. I'm glad that she's not telling Frank.

I think the last part ending really well. It leaves off at a great place for the next chapter and it make the reader wonder what happens next. I wonder what he has to say. The part with Bertram was also good. It's was fun to read. It was also interesting. I like the whole scene with him it.

This chapter was really great. I love the way you wirte. Your characterization is really good too. It's really good to read a well written story with James, Lily, and the others with them. I'm excited to find out what happens next with them.



Friendship, Love, and Pranks: The Story of the Marauders by Padfoot is MINE

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Chapter Thirty-Eight in Queue!

They say someday your life will flash before your eyes...

The Marauders. The name alone strikes fear into the hearts of teachers and makes girls swoon. Watch as Sirius, who has always kept his emotions locked up in a box, finally finds the girl that has its key; as James masterminds everything, except how to win over the girl of his dreams; as Remus finds love, but learns it's just as hard to keep it going, and as Peter tries to prove he's just as good as the other four, no matter what he has to do. They're unstoppable, and it's safe to say that once they're gone, Hogwarts will never be the same again.

...let's make ours worth watching.
Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 04/26/09 Title: Chapter 20: Ixnay on the Oopidstay!

i really liked the line we're in the same boat mate. Yeah, well, i think we're sinking. its really cool.



Lily's Fancy by norarobertsfan

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Lily Evan's life is just the way she likes it. Nothing much happens unexpected, and she has all she needs: loving parents, loyal friends, a place to call home. So what if she and her older sister don't get along? So what if there are people who hate her for the blood that runs in her veins?



She's on her way to her seventh year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and there the rising danger that casts the Wizarding World in shadow, putting every Muggle, witch and wizard alike in mortal peril.



When disaster and tragedy hit too close to home, and Lily starts to close off from her friends, one man takes a stand and pulls her back out. He's been in love with her since youth, and this year is his last chance to win her heart.
Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 04/13/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

i no that u havent updated in like a year or two and probably wont update it but r u gunna update it cuz its really good



When the Cat's Away by fawkes_07

Rated: Professors •
Summary: The young ladies of 5th-year Potions are called out for a 'special class,' leaving the boys without their genteel influence. That calls for a special lesson.



This is a Book 5, Harry/Draco short fic that is not meant for younger or saner readers.
Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

funny, kinda weird, but funny



L'Amour Commence by Pinkerton

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily Evans has always hated James Potter. That is, ever since first year when he turned her purple. But as she enters her seventh and final year at Hogwarts, things start changing...






5-31-07--Doing a major update to the first 5 chapters to make them fit with the rest of the story. You may want to actually reread them! Chaps 1-3 are done.
Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/25/09 Title: Chapter 8: All's Well That Ends Even Better

I really like this story. It was funny in some parts which was good.



Night Magic by FelicisQuill

Rated: Professors •
Summary: In Lily Evans’ seventh and final year at Hogwarts, she is made Head Girl. While this seems like a dream come true, the fates have dealt her a bittersweet hand. Lily quickly finds that she has met her match in the form of the mysterious Head Boy: James Potter. As he tries harder than ever before to befriend her, she pushes him away with equal ferocity, determined not to fall for everything that she has declared to hate so passionately.
Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: An Unwanted Knight

This is a really good story. I like it a lot.

Author's Response: Thanks very much for reviewing!



The Things I Do For L.O.V.E by Pussycat123

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hi, I’m Lily Evans. You know, there are a lot of fics about me out there. I’m flattered that you spend time thinking about me, but sometimes sickened. How could these fics not mention my bonkers beautiful cat, Missy? And what about my evil and malicious extremely helpful conscience? Or the fact that I make a fool out of myself at every opportunity am unique?

Well, this fic has all of these things. It also has L.O.V.E (I’m the ‘L’), the elite group of cliquey lovely girls that I am part of. And our rival, the sarcastic cynic also unique Iola Potter (cousin and partner in crime to James). But does it have an actual plot? Of course not Absolutely! And it starts with me getting a detention with Iola (through no fault of my own, of course). And we kind of ... almost ... well, we get on alright. A friendship sparks, shall we say. I have no idea how it happens It is meant to be. But it’s going to take some fighting for if we want to keep it. It would be a lot easier to just stick to what we know, really. We were perfectly happy hating each other. But ... well. I guess you’ll have to find out!

Read this or I’ll curse you Read this and I’ll love you!
Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 07/07/09 Title: Chapter 15: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

I love this whole story. It was cool and funny. I like the idea of L.O.V.E. My favourite character is Iola. I just loved her and her name. I like that name. I like her personality. I don't remember what my favourite quote is but I remember that it's really funny. My favourite chapter title is When people ring your doorbell, You have to let them in.

I like how Lily changed. I like new new Lily more. She's funny. I like how Lily and James got together. The whole scene was good. The story was good and now I'm going to go check out your other ones.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm really glad you liked it! I hope you have fun if you decide to read any of the others.



A Potter, an Evans, and a Longbottom by MarauderWannabe

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: “Thanks a million, umm… sorry I don’t know your name,” she said.



“It’s okay, because I don’t know yours either,” the boy said half-laughing, as Lily giggled.












James has done the one thing Lily was afraid of: James breaking her heart. Lily is now trying to convince herself that she doesn’t need James, but when her attempts fail, she decides to give him one last chance. Contains a notebook, a white lily, and some poems that you will never forget


Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 09/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really love this story. It's so cute. Your poetry is amazing. I really love the last one the most, but they are all great. The idea for this one-shot is really good. Now I'm going to read more of your storys because the ones that I've read are all great.



Just Another Love Story by HarrynHermione_06

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Love. Hate. Anger. Relief. Sadness. Join a teenage Lily Evans as she boards an emotional roller coaster, courtesy of our favorite raven-haired teen. Yes, I'm talking about James Potter.
Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/24/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Thinking Brings Lovers Together, but Tears Others Apart

I like this story. It's so cute and funny. I really liked the party and the dance scene. It's great. Does Sirius like Lily ??



Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: 2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)

*Completed*

“I’ll always protect you.”
Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29: This Is Really Happening

I really like this chapter. I don't know if I hate Ted or if I like him. It's a hard choice. I like how you described Sirius's face at the end. I feel really bad for him.

I can't wait to read the next chapter. I need to find out what happens next. I really hate when people leave it off where you did, but I understand why. But sometimes life isn't fiar like that and I just have to deal with it.

Author's Response: Thanks! Ted is certainly making it hard for everyone to feel one way or the other about him. And I feel bad for Sirius, too! I already submitted the next chapter to the queue, so hopefully you won't have to wait too long with a nasty cliffhanger like that.



Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/26/09 Title: Chapter 34: The Epilogue

I really loved the ending to this story. I like what happened between Ted and Emma. It was really great. I love how you added the flashbacks throughout the story. You always did them at the right time. Your characterization is amazing. I love all of your characters. I really like Ted too. I just love him in the story. His role in the story is great. It's probably my favorite. I love how he's like on their side but then he's with the DE the whole time. I like storys like that. I also like the very begining of the story. That was good too.

You did an amazing job on this story. It was so much fun to read and you always want to know what happenss next. And, you ended it in a way that finishes everything and doesn't make you want to read more, which is great. Pretty much this whole story was great in my opinion.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I really like revealing plot with memories, and this was my first real experiment in that. I'm glad you like it, and also that you liked the ending! I wanted it to be a good, solid ending that had an appropriate sense of finality about it. :)



Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 03/29/09 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: I'll Hold Your Hand

this is the best chapter so far

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 07/25/09 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

I really love this story. It was great. This chapter was good too. I was expecting to read about Lily and James going to fight Voldemort but I didn't. It was a good suprise. I can't wait for the epologue.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! Hopefully you'll like the epilogue, too! :)



The Art of Lion Taming by The Queen Marauder

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:

James Potter and Lily Evans have become a legendary couple in wizarding history, an extremely talented pair that later became parents of the Boy Who Lived. However, it is not as widely known amongst magical folk that they did not start off, in their early days at Hogwarts, as being very fond of one another. Here is the story of the eventful education of two of the most intelligent, witty, stubborn, and fiery tempered witches and wizards in Hogwarts history as they learn that it takes a lion to tame a lion.



Disclaimer: Please pay attention because this is the only time I will say this. I AM JK ROWLING. Also please note that that was a complete and utter lie. Thank you for your time.
--The Management



Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 05/24/09 Title: Chapter 1: When the cubs board the train...

Sweet story. I like all of it. It fits perfectally with the characters. i love it. are you going to update it???



When Darkness Did Surround Us by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: 2007 QSQ Awards Runner-up for Best Post-Hogwarts

Petunia Dursley is enjoying dinner with her family when someone starts pounding on the door. Ready to tell them off for being so rude and refusing to leave when they didn't answer at first, Petunia opens the door to have a baby shoved into her arms and told she is his only family. Years after the great Harry Potter defeated Voldemort, Death Eaters have risen to power and taken over Hogsmeade, Hogwarts, and even the Ministry of Magic. Their marriages announced invalid, their children in danger and their lives hanging by a thread, the heroes of the war with Voldemort must once again take a stand against evil.

H/G and R/Hr

(pre-Deathly Hallows)

*Completed*

*Quote from The Epilogue*

Suddenly Harry was kissing her as if he couldn’t resist the temptation. There was a kind of frenzy to the kiss at first, a kind of desperate need, but it melted into something soft and sweet and gentle, a promise of a future when kisses would never be limited. When they broke apart he rested his forehead on hers, sprinkling a few affectionate butterfly kisses across her face. “I love you,” he murmured.
Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/10/09 Title: Chapter 23: The Epilogue

I absolutly LOVE this whole story. It has the perfact ending. I really like how they went back in time. I like how Draco was actually Snape for part of the time. That was really cool. I also like when they were in the mudblood camp how Hermione wrote on Ron's foot. My sisters and I do that too.

You did an amazing job on this. You couldn't have done it any better.

Author's Response: Thank you! I've been working on it for YEARS now, and its good to know that you think it had a worthy ending. Having Snape pretend to be Draco was an idea of which I'm rather proud, and as for Hermione writing on Ron's foot -- I used to do that with my older sister, too! ;) Thanks again; I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much.



The Auction by KASK

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Every Christmas Eve there is a dinner for the most prominent wizards, where dancing partners are auctioned off. Not only is Lily Evans forced into going to this auction, but because of a practical joke, she’s up for auction! But, thanks to a black-haired boy, the night may not be so bad…

This will be three chapters
Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 05/24/09 Title: Chapter 1: Favor for Melody

i love this story. it was funny and cute. i love all of your storys.



Reciprocated Feelings by Niamara

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "Well, if it was me, I wouldn’t mind it if a girl just came up and snogged the life out of me." Through dreams, laughter and, strangely, homework, Lily comes to realize that James isn't all that bad after all. Lily-James oneshot.
Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/23/09 Title: Chapter 1: Reciprocated Feelings

This is such a cute story. I love it.



Not a Maybe Thing by HoneydukesAddict

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily knew that James was nothing but trouble. He was rude, conceited, and indifferent to anyone that wasn't in his group of friends. She had known him to be that way for six long years.

But their seventh year comes, and Lily slowly begins to see that he is no longer the boy he was. Now Lily sees herself more clearly, and she isn't sure she likes what she sees.

This is the almost-forgotten story of Lily and James's romance, and what they went through to become the heroes that were Harry Potter's parents.
Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 05/30/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

its a good story. r u gunna update it???



The Perfect Cliché by MagEd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Here's the story of awkward situations. The story of a stubborn girl and a determined boy. The story of broom closets, bra straps and declarations of affection. Here's the fairy-tale story of how Lily Evans finally fell for the bullying toerag James Potter. *one-shot*

Edited 10/26/08.
Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story. It's so cute. I like the line Sirius said at the end. It's so Sirius.