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03/17/09

Hello! I'm Alyssa. I joined this site just after I turned thirteen and I'm still here. Well, I'm here off and on.

Mugglenet is where I read my first fanfic, and it's where I tried submitting my first story. I met some of my best friends here.

This is just a great place.

I don't write very often, and when I do it's short. That'll never change, so never expect anything more than a one shot from me.

To anyone who has given me a review, thank you very much!

My first ever one-shot is Home, and my second is Talking in the Ministry. I don't think they are very good, so read at your own caution.

My stories:

Two is Better Than One - Harry/Hermione
Regret - Dark/Angsty (Molly's POV)
Home - Harry/Ginny
That One Detention - Other Pairing (Rosmerta/OC)
Your Time - Marauder Era (Lily's POV)
True Happiness - Dark/Angsty
Love Reign O're Me - Marauder Era (Remus's POV)
I Get By - Same-Sex Pairing (Crabbe/Goyle)
On my Own - Dark/Angsty (Sirius's POV)
Birthday Surprises - General
What Would You Do? - James/Lily ~ Won QSQ for best Canon Romance
Over and Over - Dark/Angsty (James's POV)
Talking in the Ministry - General

My poems:

Awaiting - A poem about the Final Battle.
Light My Fire - A Dolores/Fudge poem.
Character Haikus - Haikus about HP characters.
The One for Me - James's POV about Lily.
Father - A peom about Harry dying.
Madness - A poem about Azkaban.

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No One Will Be Home For Christmas by Soccer_rocks_likeHP

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Everything is going great for sixth year Ginny Weasley. She has new friends, a long awaited boyfriend, and classes are tolerable. Everything wonderful comes crashing down when she witnesses something that was never suppose to be seen. Now the wrong person is being blamed. Will Ginny confess what she knows and endanger her friends or will she let the wrong person go to blame?

Professors rating is strictly because of chapter 10.

Chapter fourteen is validated and waiting for you to read!

Categories: Mystery
Characters: None
Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 14 | Completed: No | Words: 20797 | Hits: 2833 | Published: 08/13/07 | Updated: 01/09/10
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Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 09/15/09 Title: Chapter 13: The Locked Door

I really like this chapter. I'm glad that they found Hermione. I think you are very good at ending chapters. You leave off at a spot that has readers wanting more, without giving too much away. This is a great chapter and i can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Why thank you, Alyssa. I love reading/writing cliffhangers that are amazing and make you angry because you want more but happy because it was a great ending. Thanks for the great reviews. ~Lexi~

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 07/17/09 Title: Chapter 11: Notes from the Unknown

I really like this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully you won't have to wait too long. ~Lexi~

To Move On by Elphin

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: After Voldemort’s destruction, Harry is left to deal with what he has lost after all those years of fighting, and more importantly, deal with what others have lost. Now that he and Ginny can finally be together, they must attempt to pick of the pieces and start over.

This is just a short look at the day after the Battle of Hogwarts.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/20/09 Title: Chapter 1: To Move On

This was extreemly cute but sad at the same time. I love it!

Stupid Parties by Hansolohpfrk

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Stupid parties. At least, that’s what Lily Evans thought. After being kicked out of her own dorm, and having to find a suitable place to sleep, she’s fed up. Now, to make her night worse, if she wants a place to stay the night, she has to share a bed with James Potter. Oh joy.

One-shot

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 05/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Stupid Parties

Loved this story!

Just Sand and Water by kbell

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Solid stone is just sand and water, baby...

Life is like solid stone...just bits and pieces mixed with time to create something stronger...

Life in the time of the First War is just bits and pieces, mixed with time to become stronger than us...stronger than anything we could ever imagine...

The story of the Marauders, their classmates, their 7th year, and those bits and pieces, and time going on...solid stone.

...sand and water, and a million years gone by.

Warnings apply mainly to later chapters

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 04/25/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Two Ships

I like this chapter but I thought it was funny because my sister eats soup for breakfast and i make fun of her for it.

Author's Response: all right, the response for the above review was meant for this one. I accidentally clicked on the wrong button.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/15/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: One for the Road

This is a good chapter. It wasn't too boring to stop reading it. I really like this story and you're a great job!

Author's Response: oh, wow, really?? that's pretty funny. soup seems a bit odd to have for breakfast; I'm more of an ice cream person myself. ;]

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 07/23/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Alone in a Crowd

I really like this chapter. I like Mary. I like her personality. I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I Don't Want To Cry by MarauderWannabe

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Crying in the Great Hall was the last thing Ginny wanted to do.

Especially in front of the guy she loves.

Rated 3rd-5th Years for Mild Language

DH Spoilers for obvious reasons.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 09/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Want To Cry

I really like this one. I like what Harry says to her. It's very good. I also like the use of the song in that one-shot. I like the lyrics. It goes very well with the story.

OAF: Operation April Fools by The REAL Weasley Twins

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: For the past six years, Lily Evans has put up with James Potter's pranking. But as her seventh year commences, she decides it's time to give James a taste of his own medicine.

Chapter 7 has finally been submitted!

A tiny sneek peek:

"Oh, come on now! Lily thought. “Just kiss me already,” she said audibly. James froze at her words and she, embarrassed beyond belief that her thoughts had spilled from her mouth, sat entirely still."

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/21/09 Title: Chapter 6: Wonderland

I really like this chapter. I like that he didn't kiss her.

Kickin' It at the Top by Soap

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: A Marauder-era fic - this story takes a look at all the characters we've come to love (and hate), as well as an OC or two thrown in for good measure. Follow the Marauders through seven years at Hogwart's, with appearances from the infamous Black sisters, Lucius Malfoy, Regulus Black, and of course the one and only Severus Snape.

There are a bunch of pairings in this story (although romance is not necessarily the central theme) to include James/Lily, Lucius/Narcissa, a splash of Lucius/Bella and unrequited Snape/Lily, and finally, plenty of Sirius/OC. Enjoy!

Over 120,000 reads! Wow! Thanks everyone!

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 04/27/09 Title: Chapter 55: Epilogue

OMG!!!! I love this story so freaking much! Its my favorite one out of all the ones i've read!

Night by Elphin

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: "He may well be the chosen one, but he is still my baby."

Lily and James Potter live every day fearing that the greatest dark wizard in the world will discover their secret. Knowing the threat that lies upon them, Lily reflects on how much it has affected their family.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/23/09 Title: Chapter 1: Night

This story is so cute and so totally true. I love it.

The Horridly Cheerful Valentine's Day by Gin_Drinka

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily Evans never had any intention to spend a day at Hogsmeade with James Potter...of course, things don't always turn out as planned.

A short, sweet story about James and Lily's first unofficial date.

Winner of the Hufflepuff Valentine's Day Challenge

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 07/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a cute story. I would hate to be in Lilys position in the begining.

Dursleys, Meet The Wizarding World by Ghoul In Pajamas

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The Dursleys have left Privet Drive and are in hiding with Hestia Jones and Dedalus Diggle. Hestia and Mr. Dursley are constantly fighting, Petunia is avoiding the wizards at all costs, and Dedalus is trying to make them all the best of friends. Meanwhile, Dudley discovers he has an interest in Harry's world, but his parents are less than pleased when they find out.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 08/02/09 Title: Chapter 9: The Wall of Questions

I really love this story. It's amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you like it!

Life Begins by wiggly

Rated: Professors •
Summary: What happens now that Harry can actually live a life for himself and not just for everyone else. Join Harry & Ginny as they begin their life together after the final battle at Hogwarts. As they work for their future together, new dangers arise in the wizarding world and Harry along with Ginny must stop this new problem. Some of the warnings are in place to cover future ideas for the story.

Categories: Harry/Ginny
Characters: None
Warnings: Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Words: 6260 | Hits: 3435 | Published: 10/06/07 | Updated: 10/23/07
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Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/19/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

They are so cute togther!

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/19/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is a good story so far. I can't believe he left her again!

At Friendship's End by SilverLily_13

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Just a poem about Lily's thoughts as she thinks about Snape. Takes place even before the scene at the lake in their fifth year--more like a week or two before, as she realizes he's changed for the worse.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 10/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hello!

I have to say I love your poem! Although, without reading the summary (I liked the title!) I thought it was about Snape. The last line is what made me make this face: :O. So I read it again. On the second read I thought more about the poem, and things seemed more girlish and nothing that Snape would write.

There is silence where
We used to talk.
Feet are still
Where we used to walk.

This is my favorite stanza. It is very well written. The last part doesn't make sense at all, but I still get it. I love lines like that. And what I understand from it is amazing. Its a great way to show how they're not together anymore.

Now it's all over,
Our friendship died.
It was nice while it lasted,
The ending aside.

I like that stanza, but I was thinking that the comma between the first and second line could be changed to a semi colon. If you did that I think adding 'has' before died would make it better. But that's just me because I like the fuller stop there. But I think both work. Just a suggestion. :)

I've read all of your poetry, and I have to say that I loved every one! I think you have a great skill with Lily/Severus! Please write more? :)

Alyssa

Lost Souls by A Cappella

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Those sent to Azkaban are condemned to a place that is worse than death.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 07/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Lost Souls

Very true.

The Twinge by MagEd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Some say to follow your heart, others think it best to follow your head. And what does Ginny Weasley believe? A short history of Ginny Weasley and how she learned to follow the twinge, from her first kiss to the day when Harry almost died. *one-shot*

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 06/22/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this story. I could see Ginny thinking that when everybody thought Harry was dead. I also like what was going through Ginnys mind before she was with Harry. I really see Ginny dateing Michael for no reason.

I really love how Harry and Ginny got back together. It was so cute! I love how he fallowed he there and how he was nervously just standing there looking at her.

I just love the whole consept of the story. It's so cool.

I really like this story a heck of a lot.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! My first relationship was similar to what I think Ginny's relationship with Michael was; I'm glad you agree that it seemed Ginny dated Michael for no reason. As for how Harry and Ginny got back together straight away -- I've read a lot of fanficitons where they have a bunch of issues to work through and they wait months and months to get back together, and while some of those can be very realistic and very good, I personally think they got back together soon after the final battle (at least within the summer after) and then worked through their issues together. It's good to know you liked how I had them simply get together again -- I loved writing that scene :) Thanks again for the great review!

Learning To Live by MarauderWannabe

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Learning to live, just might cost them their lives.

Lily Evans needs to learn how to really live. Not her imitation of living. Real living doesn't involve homework, school, following the rules, or playing it safe. Real living is taking risks, breaking the rules, being spontaneous, and going to fast. And there is one person that is going to show her how. One summer and James Potter later and Miss Lily Evans might not recognise herself. Too bad, all good things must come to an end.....

"Lily, we're friends. I would never betray any of my friends. Plus, you honestly think I would let old Moldy-shorts get to me?" he joked.

Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Well, Hagrid Had to Get the Idea Somewhere

that is the sweetest prank ever

Changing the Future by PEMDAS

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: This is the sequel to “Changing the Past”, so I advise that you read that first.

Harry tries so hard to do the right thing, but only ends up making things worse. His addiction to changing the past has only changed the future...for the worst. He has seen the error of his ways, and must find a way to set things right. There are no more second chances.

Harry is determined not to be dependent on his friends any longer. Leaving Ron and Hermione in the future, he travels back to try to fix everything he’s done. Join him as he attempts to do the impossible: change the future.

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Words: 3976 | Hits: 5568 | Published: 11/25/07 | Updated: 05/23/08
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Reviewer: ron lover Signed
Date: 05/18/09 Title: Chapter 1: Hit List

I know it been a long time since you updated it but are you going to??? It's an amazing story and I love it!!!!!!

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