03/17/09
Hello! I'm Alyssa. I joined this site just after I turned thirteen and I'm still here. Well, I'm here off and on.
Mugglenet is where I read my first fanfic, and it's where I tried submitting my first story. I met some of my best friends here.
This is just a great place.
I don't write very often, and when I do it's short. That'll never change, so never expect anything more than a one shot from me.
To anyone who has given me a review, thank you very much!
My first ever one-shot is Home, and my second is Talking in the Ministry. I don't think they are very good, so read at your own caution.
My stories:
Two is Better Than One - Harry/Hermione
Regret - Dark/Angsty (Molly's POV)
Home - Harry/Ginny
That One Detention - Other Pairing (Rosmerta/OC)
Your Time - Marauder Era (Lily's POV)
True Happiness - Dark/Angsty
Love Reign O're Me - Marauder Era (Remus's POV)
I Get By - Same-Sex Pairing (Crabbe/Goyle)
On my Own - Dark/Angsty (Sirius's POV)
Birthday Surprises - General
What Would You Do? - James/Lily ~ Won QSQ for best Canon Romance
Over and Over - Dark/Angsty (James's POV)
Talking in the Ministry - General
My poems:
Awaiting - A poem about the Final Battle.
Light My Fire - A Dolores/Fudge poem.
Character Haikus - Haikus about HP characters.
The One for Me - James's POV about Lily.
Father - A peom about Harry dying.
Madness - A poem about Azkaban.
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A Legacy of Mischief by Razgriz Ace
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: "Well the first time I met your mum she told me the reason she was never a prefect at school was that she had a complete inability to stay out of trouble.... And as for your dad…well he was a Marauder wasn’t he?”
Date: 08/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really love this story. I love what Moony said on the map. It was so true and funny. You did an amaing job on this.
Phoenix Flames by Equinox Chick
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A poem about the first task of the Triwizard Cup, held at Beauxbatons Academie in 2017.
This is connected to my fic 'Chasing the Scoop'. The journalist is Lavender Brown and the three champions are Jeunefleur - for Beauxbatons, Grindelwald - for Durmstrang, and Victoire Weasley - for Hogwarts.
I am not JK Rowling; I doubt that has shocked anyone here.
Date: 08/15/09 Title: Chapter 1: Phoenix Flames
This is a really good poem. I like it.
Author's Response: Awww, cheers. I don't write mucxh poetry so it's lovely to get a review when I do.
More Lives Than One by dashdott
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: “For he who lives more lives than one: More deaths than one must die." - Oscar Wilde
Follow the Marauders in their 6th year--a tale of the complications of friendship, the crippling effects of fear, and the power of love. This is what JKR didn't tell you.
Date: 08/13/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
I really love this storyso far. It's really great. I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope it's up soon.
Author's Response: It'll be up very soon! We have the first two or three chapters done -- it's just a matter of getting them approved. We're really happy you're enjoying it, and thank you for your review!
It Wasn't You, It Was Me by MarauderWannabe
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Lily finally admits she was wrong. But now, it's too late.
I always told myself that I didn't want to be with him, that it was a terrible idea. Now that I'm changing my mind, he's not around.
Companion/Sequel to Confessions of a Boy in Love. Lily's POV
Date: 08/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: It Wasn't You, It Was Me
I really like this story. I'm glad you made it. I love Lilys character. She is really good. I just love this whole story.
What now? by LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: What made Vernon and Petunia Dursley take Harry in when they found him on their doorstep? Their conversation after they find him....
This is LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVeR of Griffindor writing for the 'Gift of Gab' challenge
Date: 08/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Surprise!
Andrea, you got it up!!! Great job on this story. It's really good and funny as well. I can't wait until you get another fic up. This one is amazing and your next ones will be too. You also got Gryffindor points, which is amazing. I like the converstions that they had. You wrote them really well. Again, great job on this!!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for your review, 'lyss. Especially because you had already read it :P and so did you, so good job! Aw, thanks. :)
The Very Last Option by Racing Co
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: In an act of sheer desperation, Albus Dumbledore attends a book signing and invites Gilderoy Lockhart, the heroic adventurer and celebrated author, to fill a final teaching position at Hogwarts.
This is Racing Co of Gryffindor submitting for the Gift of Gab challenge.
Date: 08/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Very Last Option
I really like this stroy. You do the characters perfectly. I really love Gilderoy in this story. He was so much fun to read. Dumbledor was great too. He was believeable. They both were. The ending was so funny. I could see him saying that. You did a great job on this and I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I had the ending picked out long before I finally got there. The hard part was filling the great chasm in between the beginning and the end.
Silent Peace by End_of_an_Era
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A short poem from the perspective of a nameless prisoner in Azkaban. Character death is implied, but not actually shown.
Date: 08/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: Silent Peace
I really like this peom. It's really good.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's one of my first Harry Potter theme poems, so I'm glad you like it.
The Raven Within by TheCursedQuill
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
Helena Ravenclaw has a secret.
Besides that, her mother does not understand her and she is to be wed to a man she doesn’t like. In a desperate act to get away, Helena flees to Albania with her mother’s most prized possession. We all know the ending, but what about the beginning? Journey through Helena’s last few days with her mother, and her life.
Date: 09/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
I really like this story so far. The characterization is great. I especially love the guy. I think you did him perfectally. Personally, I think that it's hard to write in this time period, but you did a great job ion it. Everything seems like its back then. I also like Helena's characterization through out the chapter. It was god. My favorite paragraph is:
Her body thrashed and rolled as he continually drew his arm into the air and then let it fall onto her body. Her shrieks were deafening, even when her face was in the ground. He kept the repetition going until he noticed the whimpering stop.
I love it because it is worded really well (and not because I like reading about people being stabbed). Something about it makes me like it more than any other paragraph. I also like the last paragraph to. It's a great way to end the chapter. It was also fun to read.
I just really like this story and I think you are doing a great time with the time period. But wouldn't she hae to hide the diadem before she was killed? Or did the guy hide it after? I don't have a book to check, so I'm not sure. I'm probably just coming up with things in my mind, but oh well. I hope the next chapter is up soon because I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Burning Bridges by TheCursedQuill
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Godric Gryffindor and Salazar Slytherin have always tried to mend their friendship. But will this be the end? An all dialogue one-shot of the possible conversation between these two eternal enemies.
A Gryffindor Challenge Entry For The Summer Challenge
Date: 09/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really really like this story. I'm sad that It didn't win. :( I love the conversation between them. I really lke everything about it and you did a great job on this!
Gravity by afterglow745
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
Date: 08/22/09 Title: Chapter 1: Gravity
I really like this story and I really like the ending. It's very good.
Memories by A H
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Harry takes Ginny on a trip down memory lane. Some memories should be cherished forever, and sometimes we have to put the past behind us so that we can make new memories.
Date: 08/17/09 Title: Chapter 1: Memories
Oh my gosh I know that comercial! You did an amazing job on this this story and I really love it. It's all fluffy and cute. Some of it was really funny and I loved that.
The Last Evans by lily meet ginny
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Imagine how it would feel being the last one to bear your last name. No particular family, few relative, no one to count on. Imagine being the last in line, the only one who could hold your head up high and say “yes, thank you very much, I am an Evans.” I’m only eighteen. I ccan barely imagine my life ahead, much less without my family.
Date: 08/13/09 Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings of a Bad Summer
I like this story so far. I hope the next chapter is up soon.
Author's Response: Don't worry, I have it written. I just need my beta to check it over
Most Women Love Roses, but She Loves the Thorn by Soccer_rocks_likeHP
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Things just started looking up for Severus Snape. It seems like he's finally going to get the girl of his dreams. All that goes down the drain the day he calls her "Mudblood." Severus is learning to deeply regret what he said and tries everything to get her back. But will he succeed or will another man sweep her off her feet?
Date: 09/01/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Hogsmeade
I think I forgot to tell you this in the last review, but I can't remember. I love the title of the story. It's so cool. It's the kind of title that it's so great that you wish you came up wiith and not someone else. The title is what got me to read this story.
I really like how this chapter starts. I really like what he did to James. I may support James, but once in a while someone needs to do something to him. But wouldn't Sirius do something to Snape for messing with James? I also like how he comes up with the idea to ask her out. It's like an amazing idea but then it backfires. It probably would have been better if he just asked her out on a date than doing it the round about way so then there would be no confusion, but it's Snape. :D My favorite part is the ending. Just someone saying that Lily was all over someone else got him to do the stupidest thing ever. I could really see that happening. I just really love your characterization of Snape. He is very believable. I hope the next chapter is up soon because I really love this story and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: Awe, Alyssa, thanks! I agree with you about the title thing, that's what it's like a lot to me. Thanks for all the compliments. I really worry sometimes whether or not I'm characterizing the characters correctly. It's nice to know I don't have too much to worry about in that department. :) The next chapter was just sent back to me from Mary-ann, so hopefully you won't have to wait too long.
*major hugs*
~Lexi~
Date: 08/22/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Summer Before Disaster
I really like this story so far. It's really good. It was soo much fun to read. I hope the next chapter is up soon.
Author's Response: Oh so do I! Thanks for the review! I'm very proud of this. Thanks!
~Lexi~
Date: 01/03/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Stagnant Arguments
Wow, I wasn't expecting that ending. It was very good, though.
I like Lily in this chapter. I like when she says:
“But don’t think I’m going to take “I’ll think about it” for much longer. Sooner or later you’ll have to decide.”
I like that part because I think that it is something that Lily will say. It also set up them not becoming friends, which is good.
I love this chapter and I am very excited for the next one. : )
Author's Response: Hey, Alyssa! I'm glad I can keep you on your toes. :D Thank you so much for your lovely comments. I always worry about whether I keep my characters (Severus, Lily, & James especially) in character; it's nice to hear that I'm doing a good job. Thanks so much!
*hugs*
~Lexi~
Date: 09/12/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Disappointing News
Yay! Another chapter! I reallly like this one too. I adore the begining. This line here
His eyes took in her whole appearance, savoring it as if it was for his eyes only.
Is my favorite. I love when people think/do that. It doesn't matter who does it. I just love it. And having Snape do it is even better. I think your characterization is amazing. Everyone can do atleast one character right, and I think Snape is yours. I love the thoughts that go through his head. You capture him when he is young and not old. I love the reason why he is joining the DE. I could see him thinking like that. Lily is also good too. Her answers at the end were great.
With that, Lily turned and headed to the castle, leaving Severus under the tree torn and confused.
That line was great too. It's a really good ending. I can't wait for the next chapter. They are all amazing! I'm sorry if none of this is making sense. Damn cold.
Author's Response: Alyssa,
Thanks so much! I do like that line as well; I totally understand what you said. I never thought I'd be that great at writing Severus but I'm glad I'm impressing you. I guess my reason for writing his character so well is simply because I love me some Severus Snape :D :P. Again, thanks so much for the review!
*hugs*
~Lexi~
Just Hugo by inspirations
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary:
‘Maybe Hufflepuff? Your loyalty is overpowering....’
‘No, I’m a Gryffindor. I have to be a Gryffindor!’
This is a story about Hugo Weasley. He's overshadowed by his vast family, but that doesn't stop him from being his own person. He's a Gryffindor just like the rest, but he doesn't understand the how or why. This is a story about Hugo Weasley, and how he discovered that he was a true Gryffindor.
Date: 08/21/09 Title: Chapter 1: Just Hugo
I really like this story. It was a lot of fun to read.
Author's Response: Thank you! -hugs-
Love in an Elevator by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary:
Ron knows Hermione said they'd take the lift to allow Scorpius and Rose to walk downstairs without him dogging their heels, but he still kinda hopes to get stuck.
Date: 08/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Lifts
I really like this story. It's really good.
Author's Response: Thank you! I liked the idea of Ron using his expertise at chess in other areas. :)
Thank you for your time, Professor by Equinox Chick
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It is April 1976, and Minerva McGonagall sits in her office, arranging biscuits on a plate. She knows she faces a stormy afternoon because today is the day she has to advise her four most troublesome students on their future. They call themselves the Marauders; they think they want the same thing, but Minerva knows that the differences between them will not work in everyone's favour. And so, she steels herself for a very difficult day.
This is Equinox Chick submitting her final for the MWPP class.
Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling, but I doubt that shocks you.
This story is very much a prequel to The Lions of Gryffindor, but either can be read without knowledge of the other.
In shock at the nomination for a 2009 QSQ award.
Date: 08/14/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really love this story. It's great. It was so much fun to read. I didn't want it to end.
Author's Response: Hmmm, well I could have done Lily I suppose, but I didn't want to disrupt the Marauders too much. Anyway ... as I said ... it's kinda a prequel to The Lions of Gryffindor ... so ... (hint hint) Thanks for the review. I enjoyed writing the story. Carole xxx
I Solemnly Swear by ringobeatlesfan4
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary:
This is the story of the Hogwarts Marauders.
Date: 08/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: I Solemnly Swear
I really LOVE this poem. It's so amazing.
Author's Response: Oh! Well, thank you! I don't know if it's necessarily 'amazing', but it could be! Thanks for reading and reviewing and liking it as much as you seem to. I didn't expect for people to necessarily like this, but I guess they do! Thanks again! {BeccA}