No. Saif will never beat me, cause I"M your number one fan. Period. End of story, good bye, the end. I love the new excerpt, haha! Bellatrix should get a few slaps from her husband? Please? Or they talk about their relationship, and Bellatrix confesses her love for Voldy. And then yes, I think you would definitley HAVE to put a Bellatriz-Keedie showdown to satisfy your readers (cackles again)! Again, I'm really nervous about how Keedie is going to turn out to feel after Tom dies... unless you're tricking us, because all you're saying is that 'We know how Mr. Riddle must end up' and that 'Keedie will accept him as he is'. Does the last quote apply to the epilogue or the next few chapters only? We are all waiting impatiently for the next chapter! We still don't have any idea about what Keedie's roll is in the Epilogue! OH, I just had a thought! Is Ginny going to be there? Also, nobody else is worried about Harry! What is he going to be doing? Answer me!

Oh, and so do you mean I can make my version of Tom smell like pine?

Love from
Hayden

Author's Response: *chuckles* You guys are gonna kill me when you read chapter twenty-six, let me tell you! I am tricking you all, you just don' know it! ;-)

NOOOOOOOOO! I'm back! And ready to review! But that was one of the most suspensful clips yet! What's going to happen next? What's coming next? Do they kiss? That would look terrible from the outside though, haha. And Keedie's going to be all old, yet still young... and what about the kid? I can't understand anything, my brain's not working this morning. And Saif's right, why does she just stand there staring at the ceiling while people are dying? Does Bellatrix kill Keedie in the hall afterwards if the clip happens after Voldy 'kills' Harry? She would see the affection. UNLESS! (Behold, my crazy suggestion) Voldy somehow finds about the resurruction stone, turns it over in his hand three times and Keedie appears! She was killed in some mass killing spree of the Death Eaters! And She can only stand there because she's not real! HAHAHA no. I know that was crazy, oh well, just live with it. I hope you can update soon!
Hayden

Author's Response: Oh ho, Lovemagic, you're onto something but I don't think you even realise it. Things just got interesting!

Saif you're evil. I have now just put up three reviews, to match what you did behind my back! *Evil Cackles* That reminds me that Belledeg said that everyone's going to kill her when she puts up the twenty-sixth chapter, so that can't be good. Also, what inspired your username? Is it something in a different language or something? I'm curious.
Hayden

Author's Response: My middle name's Belle. The deg is like de Gryffindor. Spur of the moment decision

YES! AMAZING! Thank you soooo much! I actually cried when I read this chapter! (And that's not something I do very often.) The twists were amazing! I was reminded of the Veil in Order of the Pheonix when you did the little mind conversations from the stone. And I remembered the Mirror that belonged to Sirius, too. Very poor poor Keedie. Those were Death's whispers! In her head! Brilliant!

Also, I like the line from Chapter Twenty in Half Blood that you twisted! Very good! I just don't know what do say. A lot of things fit together, and you did a brilliant job at that. Oh, and the memories being modified was really sad. They got Deja Vu and then all of those attacks on their descendants all of those years later. Also, the Foget Me Nots were beautiful! Great scene!

Hayden

Author's Response: Yay! You remembered the flowers meant true love. Thank Merlin. Glad you liked the chapter, despite that it's a wee bit sad. Epilogue soon, hopefully. Then it'll all be over. :(

Awesome excerpt! Sad, too. Did the muggles take Keedie? Or... His dad was a muggle, so they could have taken his purebloodiness from him. Otherwise, I can't think of how the muggles could have taken anything else from him. But if they took Keedie...? How? Tom has nothing else to live for, so is she dead? Is she a portrait now?

I thought you said that Keedie was going to be there. Tom's thinking as if she isn't there. Where do my theories come into this? I know you said I was close.

What do Tom and Keedie think of the ugly Voldemort look?

Also, in the next chapter, I think that Tom would win the chess game... unless you're going to make it like love versus evil or goodness versus whatever.

I would have liked you to show the murder of Hepzibah Smith... but that probably won't fit. Oh well. I have another theory coming on... let me think, I'll tell you all later.

Hayden

Author's Response: Keedie is in the epilogue, like I promised. The chess game should be fun. :-)

What am I on to? The resurruction bit? Tell us! You're making me feel all jumpy, stop it! It's too suspensful, I can't wait for the end! But now that I'm thinking, I have a feeling that I will be sad when this story ends. AND it's going to have a bad ending. *sigh* This is a great journey through Keedie and Tom's love life (Mystical wiggly fingers again) and you're definitley tricking us, so that might be a shock at the end, who knows? I'm so very excited! And am I even half right with my crazy predictions? The resurructions stone possibility was one of my strokes of genius, is that what I'm on to? Or that she could just be a part of Voldy's imagination... or the Keedie coming back to life from the resurruction stone... there, I've said it enough times, so you're going to have to say something about that or else... Oh, and I like your idea for your username, very creative.
Hayden!

Author's Response: Thank you. I wouldn't necesseseraly (I can't spell that word) say the ending is bad...

You people. *shakes head* How can you not like Tom Riddle in the first place? Don't you love evil, handsome people? Oh well, everyone has their own opinions, I guess. My favorite character was Tom Riddle from the start, and one day I was looking through the lists and I saw one about Tom Riddle, so I got a membership and then read all of it. It was amazing, and it still is. I'm STILL at a loss to understand how the epilogue will turn out, all I (and Saif, probably) can think of is that Keedie dies somewhere in there. They might be stuck in the limbo area if they all die... but Keedie's soul is complete- UNLESS- (this is not so genius) Keedie sacrifices her soul or something... I really don't know, all I can say is that you need to update soon, and we'll find out later in time!
Hayden

Author's Response: Hehehe. I'm always happy to listen to conspiracy theories. Keeds won't die in the epilogue, though, I couldn't do that to her. Tom, well, that's canon! :-)

I don't know if I said this before... no I didn't. The part where Keedie got mad at Tom is another one of her mood swings, right?

In one of the chapters, if Keedie's not dead and she sees Voldemort, what will she be thinking about his appearance? Repulsed, sad, or completely ignorant of it? Tell us! Oh, and I asked you what the last sentence of the last chapter is. PLEASE tell us!

By the way, I love the new excerpt. He understood on some level.... hehehe.

Hayden

Author's Response: Yes, it was one of her moodswings. I can't give away the last line or anything else. :( Good news is, we're nearly at the 250 review barrier!

I agree with Saif and apologize for posting too many comments and doing a bunch of guesswork, but this fanfic is the best!!! But you haven't posted yet. : ( Oh well, I'm really excited to read the next chappie!
And Saif, I guessed you were a guy by your name, but the way you wrote that other comment made me wonder if you weren't just using a guy's name to hide your real identity for some reason... so much drama...
Belledeg, I hope you post real soon! Can't wait! *smile*

Author's Response: You guys are so funny. The guesswork reminds me that I have to keep you all amused. Hopefully the next chapter will do just that. Like I said, never apologise. I love when people react to the story! :-)

Why must every ball end with something bad happening to Keedie? But I love when Tom reacts. And you're not so evil to me anymore because we know Keeds won't die- she's in the epilogue, and you said we'll find out what the voice is later, and she knows that Voldy is Tom so she won't lose any memory of him. You're making us panic blindly on purpose. Well, it's NOT working! Haha.
Anyway, I saw the clip from Ch. 24- I cannot wait to see Gregor GET IT! He is so dead, and please make Keed react to this after she is cured. Make Gregor die. He seriously needs to stuff his face down a toilet. Maybe Keeds' friends will see to that.
I can't think of any seductive voice even from the future except for Tom/Voldy. And if the voice likes Tom, then it might be Voldy.
Did you get the head colliding with pillar thing from the Twilight movie? Because it reminds me a lot of the movie. Answer this question, you question-avoider!
Gregor might get Crucio-ed, or Imperio could be interesting, when they fight in the 24th chappie. I wonder if they are still in school at the time, though probably not.
You're still evil for the cliffhangers. :p
Keep writing, the story's great! *Hugs & Kisses*

Author's Response: I do not avoid questions, madam! Anyway, bad stuff happens to Keedie because she's tempting fate. I've never seen Twilight, but my friends are trying to convert me. There! I answered all questions. And because I love your reviews so much, I'll leave you a clue: They will be leaving school in the next chapter and Tom will be chasing his dasterdly dreams while Keeds starts feeling a little sick....in the mornings.