I'm 34, and I live in Wyoming, I'm retired military and have 4 wonderful children, ages 4,3,2,and 1 month. I work at the state prison and enjoy writing.
that was a very good story. lol put some tears in my eyes.
Defininately getting more better. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I'm really hooked to this one.
Oh stop it, your making me blush! You did a great job.
Author's Response: Good, I am making you blush then!! we need to discuss chapter 8! IM me you nut!
thank you Thank you *take a bow, I had as much fun reading it as I did helping you write it.lol
Darn it, they deleted out my favorite part. "And Malfoys response would of pleased a twenty year Navy Veteran." Oh well can't win them all I guess. You did a great job!
Argh! They deleted my favorite line. gosh darn it! "and Malfoy's response would of please a 20-year Navy Veteran" Oh well can't win them all I guess.
I, probably more than anyone else, with the exception of sunchilde would love to see this story updated. However, please understand that real life comes before anything else. I'm working incredibly hard, to get my second book Courage in the Darkness ready for publishing. Plus I'm getting ready to move myself, back to Laramie to get ready to start school again in January of next year. (I was planning on going back this fall) however I'm getting deployed to Egypt on September 7, and I'll be gone anywhere from 45 to 120 days. I appericate all the enthusism for the update of this story. However, understandably Heather just can't do it at the moment, due to her real life problems. I would also like to politely ask for people to stop flooding my inbox, for the update of this story. The answer is no, I will not send you my portion of the chapter. Thank you. Best, Bob
your doing a really good job, it's a good start
Author's Response: thanx:)
This is a pretty good chapter. School's important, so take your time. on the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! I took quite a bit of time, I'm afraid. =D But I just submitted the tenth chapter, so no worries. =)
You did a really good job. Speaking of writers block, I found a wonderful way of getting through it. I personally don't believe in writers block. Instead I think of it as the story trying to reach out to me. When I dont know what to write next, I take it upon myself to go back through and edit. Usually what happens is an idea pops into my head. Maybe you should try it. You did a really good job, keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you. =) That's a good idea...I get through writer's block by reading back on my story and taking a break until I feel up to writing again.
I'll try your idea sometime, though. Thanks!
cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story. I don't know when I'll update next, as I am currently updating the next chapter and I'm trying to make it excellent. It won't take too long, I hope. Please bear with my slow writing skills, eh? Thank you for reading and telling me what you thought! It keeps me going. =)
keep em coming, I look forward to the next chapter
This just keeps getting better. I sure do hope you update soon, I'm really starting to like this story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm updating after I reply to the last two reviews...I really do hope you continue to read! =)