It’s not just any 1st of September. The Philosopher Stone is hidden at Hogwarts, The Boy Who Lived is about to board the Express for the first time. It’s not the best September for something unexpected to happen, for something impossible. Or someone.
This story is not AU, but it focuses on the original character, her plot, her friends, her loves :)
Rating and Warning only for later chapters.
Great story. I've spent the better part of an hour just reading through this and really enjoying it. I'm wondering what exactly the deal is with Cybele. I love the interaction between her and Snape. Also everyone seems to be very in character. There are some grammatical erros. I think you said that English is not your first language. I can tell as some words are misused and causes some confusion. In particular I've noticed that you use the word "other" when it should be the word "over."
For example, in the sentence, "then I found myself down these mountains other there." The word "other" does not make sense in the context of this sentence. There are a few other things but they are all quite minor. The story is very readable and quite enjoyable. I'm impressed with your knowledge of vocabulary, English not being your native language.
I hope that is helpful. I would really love to read more of your story and I hope you publish another chapter soon. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comment and your feedback; I will pay attention to these tricky pairs in the future. My beta are really amazing and I'm improving my English a lot thanks to them :) yet another reason to read/write fanction
Updating soon!
Another wonderful chapter. Seems like their might be the beginning of a...em..."special relationship" between Draco and Cybele. Yeah! I like how you write about Cybele's struggles to fit in with her peers, despite her being wandless--it's quite interesting. I wonder how Mr. Malfoy will react when (and if) he finds out that Cybele is not quite human...if she isn't, that is. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I had not thought of Mr Malfoy; that could be a nice idea to include his reaction at some point, you're right :) (though, it's a bit of a Draco/whoever cliché, isn't it? :p)
Chapters 10 and 11 are up :) Thanks for reading on!
Author's Response: Thanks! I had not thought of Mr Malfoy; that could be a nice idea to include his reaction at some point, you're right :) (though, it's a bit of a Draco/whoever cliché, isn't it? :p)
Chapters 10 and 11 are up :) Thanks for reading on!