Channeling Phlegm at the moment, please bear with me as I try to avoid turning into Bridezilla.
CHAPTER 14 IS UP! CHAPTER 15 IS IN QUEUE!
Oooh, a Chastity Charm! I wonder if Molly put it on the ring, or on Ron and Hermione? Great chapter, especially the thongs! He he he!
Author's Response: Ha....yes...it's on the ring (as you read in chapter 12). Glad you liked the thong incident :)
You have a decent start to your story so far. You might want to put a pre-hbp canon warning up though.
*hands out a cookie* good job on the first chapter. don't you just hate it when the mods send your story back? I had to submit my last chapter four times! I like that Ron messes with his hair. Classic teenage guy flirting move!
Author's Response: haha, thanks a lot. Yeah it just got rejected again, because of punctuation. Apparently I suck at punctuation :) (btw, cute name)
Brilliant! All the confessions were great, especially the teachers! Too bad Gred and Forge couldn't have found a way to eavesdrop on Hogwarts until the truth serum wore off. Mischief Managed
Happy! Thanks for adding the last part with Hagrid, you did a great job! I read it at work, and I needed a TISSUE! You get extra credit!
Author's Response: Yes! Extra credit! Check me out! Thanks for coming back, i appreciate it immensely!
I just realized I never left you any reviews for this story. It was cute that Ellie calls him Uncle Abby, and that she told him he smells. I might be wrong, but I though Voldemort had red eyes, but that could be after he tries to kill Harry, I'm not really sure. But they could be described as cold as well.
Author's Response: When the story went through my beta she wasn't convinced that Voldemort had red eyes before his most recent incarnation so i changed it to cold.
No tissues yet! I like that Dumbledore had suspicions about a traitor. And that you used the scene when Sirius takes Ellie from the rubble in Unspeakable Power (yes I've been reading your stories on FF too!)
Author's Response: Be reading ahead have you? Very clever! *does a little dance of glee because Gen likes the story*
Awww, now I need a tissue! (I am going to put the word tissue into each review I leave for you from now on!) If I didn't know that this was the prequel and that Ellie would be back, I would be so mad at you for ending this story with a cliffie! You had a good explanation of what happened, but I wish you had put the part about Ellie blasting Hagrid in!
Author's Response: I couldn't let you go a whole fic without a tissue, now could i? I'm sorry you were disappointed with the way it ended. I might edit the chapter and put that little part in for you. Would that make you happy?
you described the pic very well, especially Hermione's expression. Yay if Ron is the daddy (hope you make the right choice!) have a peanutbutter cookie (#)
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment. I must say though to everyone...yes Harry being the father would be predictable, but so would making Ron the father because everyone wants him to be. Now I don't know what to do. My husband even told me to make Draco the father to throw everyone off, but I can't fit that in. =)
*first review dance*
Yowza. And still the suspense! I can't wait for your next chapter!
Author's Response: The next chapter is my favorite, so I if you enjoyed this one, I know you'll enjoy the next.
Now here's a story I like! Write S'more please (I'm very punny, ahem, funny)
Yay! I'm your first review *first review dance* Are more details of how everyone got together going to be included? This is a good start, it leaves enough of a cliffhanger to make me want to come back for more.
OK, you have a few typos to fix (see below), but it's a good start. Didn't Harry see Sirius as a father figure too? Also, you said that Harry was replaying the events of last week in his head, which would be the end of June, and he doesn't turn 17 til the end of July.
Typos:
the neon green light emmitting, not permitting
Dumbledore had faith in me, not my
i hope you don't mind me editing even though it's already posted.
Author's Response: Very good, you noticed that. Truth is, about the birthday, the question is answered in a later chapter. I don't mind you editing, it means you're paying attention. The second chapter should be up soon.
-Dom
The love Lily had for Harry protected him in SS when he confronted Quirrdemort, and she was dead for ten years. Again, we have to wait and see what JKR says to know for sure, but everybody can interpret it differently until then
Author's Response: That was the protection of his blood, The protection on the house endured even after Voldemort returned using Harry's blood.
I like this chapter, but I think Harry would still have to stay at #4. Your guess is as good as mine until JKR says differently. I am soooo happy you put H/G back together! yay!
Author's Response: Ahh, in some cases you are right, but do you remember Dumbledore mentioning that he invoked an ancient piece of magic, on number 4 privet drive, that ensure's Harry's saftey while he is there? well, all the spells that Dumbledore cast, dissapeared after he died, like the full body bind curse he put on harry when Malfy burst through the door at the top of the stairs.
Well, it looks like the twins got some of their prankiness (yes I've created a new word) from Molly. Very Clever. The teacup was interesting.
OMG, I loved the wedding pranks! The twins might be including the whole family in their business soon! This was a great chapter, especially the ceremony! 10/10!
Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it Submitting Chapter Three today! Yay! Please keep reviewing!
A surprise wedding! Yay! Familiar looking blondes, eh? Post your next chapter soon! 10
Author's Response: Thank you so much Accio for all your wonderful reviews! Love them and you! Chapter 5 is to the betas and should be back today so that means it could be submitted tomorrow! Chapter 6 and maybe 7 will be finished over the weekend! Keep reviewing!
Hmm, so "Penny" has a secret. Well I will be back to see what it is. I'm also interested to see what the indicator is.
Author's Response: Just you wait and see. The indicator is a rather engaging ornament.
To my fans I would like to say that I am back to writing, and I have now updated many of the chapters! Some changes are just grammer edits, but there are many adds and changes to chapters. Some based on your reviews or small things I felt needed to be added. Please take a look at the changes and let me know what you think. I am looking forward to hearing what you have to say about the changes and up comeing chapters.
You've got me hooked. I can't wait to see where you go with this. I love that Ginny isn't going to give up. Great start! 10/10!
Author's Response: Thank you, I am hope you like where the story goes. Thanks for the big 10!