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'~'Unaffected'~' by innocence_wasted

Rated: Professors •
Summary: The power of emotions is like no other. It makes us do crazy things and things we thought we weren't capable of. So it was for two young boys, so different and made to be enemies. But they've come to realize how much they care about one another. This is the beginning of a love that would never quite make sense. (Severus Snape/James Potter). *songfic* one-shot.
Reviewer: svaught Signed
Date: 05/08/10 Title: Chapter 1: Thoughts into Actions

This story works for so many reasons! The psychological stress that Severus endures at the end ties everything together! The pairing was unique, but it worked nicely! The scene in the gamekeeper's scene was particularly interesting. I don't usually enjoy those kind of scenes while reading a fic, but something about just clicked in my mind. (However, it is probably unlikely that the boys would go to sleep after the encounter between Severus's mouth and James's body. Don't you think James would have returned the favor? Just a note) A wonderful, wonderful fic! Keep up the great work!



Destruction Where You Stand by auberus

Rated: Professors •
Summary:
31 October 1981. Instead of going to Azkaban, Sirius Black goes on the run, determined to catch the traitorous Peter Pettigrew even as post-war violence tears through the wizarding world. Meanwhile, Remus Lupin and a handful of others work desparately to clear Sirius' name, and to find him.

After all, they are not the only ones seeking Sirius Black. The Ministry of Magic has set the Dementors on his trail, and they have been given permission to administer the Kiss the instant he is caught. The remnants of the Death Eaters are pursuing him as well, in hopes that he will lead them to Pettigrew, whom they blame for Voldemort's defeat. (SB/RL slash)
Reviewer: svaught Signed
Date: 05/09/10 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: After a Thousand Reversals

I was soo angry they got interrupted... will we get more of them again?



Reviewer: svaught Signed
Date: 05/09/10 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen: And Here Again He Lies

This chapter was great! So glad we got a little bit of S/L back.



When the Cat's Away by fawkes_07

Rated: Professors •
Summary: The young ladies of 5th-year Potions are called out for a 'special class,' leaving the boys without their genteel influence. That calls for a special lesson.



This is a Book 5, Harry/Draco short fic that is not meant for younger or saner readers.
Reviewer: svaught Signed
Date: 05/08/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

Haha! Loved the banter between the two boys! Although the scene might have been dificult to write, more decription might have brought out the true akwardness of the situation. Also, talking about the other boys might have also worked... just suggestions. Great story! Keep up the good work!



Vomica Domintor by AlwaysSS

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Hermione Granger and Severus Snape create a new potion together and discover some secrets about each other along the way.

This story is AU after book five.

Special thanks to my awesome beta, SometimeSelkie.


Reviewer: svaught Signed
Date: 07/30/10 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

NIce chapter!



'Tis the Night by Astrid Skywalker

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: He wanders aimlessly down the boulevard, allowing himself to be jostled by the rush-hour crowd. It is Christmas Eve, 1994: his first Christmas Eve away from England. He finds it utterly confusing.

A Sirius-centric one-shot. Written in Christmas 2008 for a dear friend. Hope you like it. =)

(It's been a while, I know, but I figured that if I added a couple of fics to MNFF, I'd be able to get my writing mojo back. We'll see. Fingers crossed. Lyrics are taken from Vienna Teng's "The Atheist Christmas Carol.")


Reviewer: svaught Signed
Date: 05/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: 'Tis the Night

I love the style of this piece. The broken prose echoes the mood I get from reading about Sirius and this women. I loved the symbol of the Church! Fantastic!



Jemzi by Belledeg

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Jemzi Zabini is the seventeen year old daughter of Blaise Zabini and his wife Harper, and is about to join her fellow witches and wizards at Hogwarts for their final school year. Jemzi is famous for being the once best friend of Albus Potter. However, a mysterious argument last year that only the two of them were witness to has ruined their friendship and they are now practically enemies. No one knows the reason for their fall out, only that it has caused a great divide in their friendship group.

Jemzi's best friend and Albus' cousin, Rose, suspects that their friendship expired because of strange and unwanted feelings between them. Feelings which, despite their fall out, have not gone away. Feelings that are similar to those she has for a certain Slytherin...

So can the next generation of Hogwarts students learn to forget past actions and forgive?

Nominated for "Best Next Generation Story" and "Best Other Character" in the 2010 Quicksilver Quill Awards

This story features Harry Potter, Ginny Potter, Lily Potter, Luka Krum, Blaise Zabini, Harper Zabini, Zacharias Smith, Leon Holmwood, Tristan Wells, Rose Weasley, Scorpius Malfoy, Jemzi and Albus plus many more.
Reviewer: svaught Signed
Date: 05/08/10 Title: Chapter 1: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi

I really really like this story! The family contrasting is really powerful! Can't wait!

Author's Response: Next chapter soon, so glad you're enjoying it :)



Reluctant Promises by Penny1200

Rated: Professors •
Summary:

As a part of his punishment for his part in the war, Draco was sentenced to a year living as a Muggle in the Muggle world. Harry ropes Hermione into serving as Draco's liaison with the Ministry and guide to the Muggle world. Can she open his eyes to the joys of Muggle living or will she Avada him first? Set post-DH, ignores epilogue.


Reviewer: svaught Signed
Date: 07/25/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

At first, I was SHOCKED to see the name Luna Potter appear as Harry's wife... where's Ginny :( Then, the pairing made COMPLETE SENSE to me!!! Brilliant, just brilliant!!!!! I love the way you use the characters to achieve your purpose while staying faithful to their personalities. I also ADORE your style! It is so clean and fresh. This is one of the best stories I have read in a LONG TIME!!!!

Author's Response: That is such wonderful praise! Thank you so much! I try to stay in character as much as possible, taking into account that it's been a couple of years since the war, so they've all had a chance to grow up a bit. I'm glad that you enjoy my writing style; I actually write how I speak for the most part. I hope you'll keep reading and reviewing the story, even if the updates are slow in coming.



Reviewer: svaught Signed
Date: 07/25/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was another great chapter! Why haven't known about you before now??? My favorite part of these chapters (I know it's not main plot) is when Harry and Luna are together. Thanks for bringing in another scene with them. The dialogue at the beginning of the chapter was STUNNING!!! I actually felt as though I were there in person! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I love the word stunning! When I write, I like to help the reader feel like they are with the characters, but that's not always easy to do, so I'm glad that I was successful in this chapter. You haven't known about me because, unless you read Glee fic, you won't have seen anything else that I've ever written. If you do read Glee fic, then I don't know. All of my stories are posted on my Livejournal (under the same name of penny1200) and on fanfiction.net.



Reviewer: svaught Signed
Date: 07/25/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yet again, marvelous! I really love how you are developing on Malfoy's thoughts and the relationships Hermione has with Ron and Harry! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I spend most of my writing delving into the relationships of the characters. Also, I've never written anyone like Malfoy before, so it's a new experience.



OLYMPUS by Indigo Cygnus

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Dread is the only thing that goes through Ariel Sachs’ mind as he embarks on his last year at Hogwarts. A place he’s grown to hate. He has no plans and no hopes for the future. The only constants in his life are his loneliness and his crush on Christian Ackerman, the Ravenclaw stud. Ariel soon realizes that his plans to quietly survive his last year won’t work, when he gets caught up in the preparations of the first wedding to be held at Hogwarts. On the way, he will find support from a couple of unexpected characters and maybe, even, meet that someone he has been longing for his entire life.
Reviewer: svaught Signed
Date: 10/10/12 Title: Chapter 6: POSEIDON

Ahh! What a cliff hanger! Can't wait for the next installment. I like how Hendrik ends this chapter in more of an Ariel type of mood.

Author's Response: I don't know what's going on with me. I'm usually not a cliffhanger writer lol. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak, it hopefully won't take long. As for Hendrik, well I guess Ariel isn't the only one with inner turmoil ;) Thanks for the review!