07/05/05
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Review! If you review me I will (probably) review you, if you've written anything anyway.
News: Blaise 7 is up.
And a new story is in queue, a one-shot that was actually written a long time ago. Tell me what you think of it.
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Date: 11/28/05 Title: None
Kind of creepy- you didn't really explain how Ginny is evil- where does it come from? Very well written, though. It was very sad how Harry dies. Good job.
Abracadabra by DrTaylor
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Harry dreams about Dumbledore, and discovers something disturbing. My first fic. Be gentle, please.
I know everyone says it, but please review! I love to see them!
Sheeee's back! And she's better than ever because her story is already complete!
Date: 12/05/05 Title: Chapter 1: A New Dream
Nice! You show Harry's emotions just right and your writing style is great. I like harry's idea to go after Snape- but doesn't he remember how Snape defeated him last time? How will he get past that? Looking forward to the next chapters.
Author's Response: Oh, he's pretty planless. But, like always, the perfect opportunity is about to hit him on the head...
Date: 12/05/05 Title: None
Aaah! I was enjoying your story, wondering why it wasn't in humor, when I read the last line and my jaw dropped. No way! Tell me she's on Imperius. Not possible! How did you ever think of that happening? You had better update very soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, I love reviews. Hear that you people! (hint hint) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Can't tell you about Hermione though. I'm working on the 2nd chapter, lots more fun coming up (I hope). Just have to sort out a few kinks.
I thought the last line was humourous.
Where Laughter Dies by Noldo
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: In the beginning of the Christmas holidays, Sirius Black runs away from home and will not return for twenty years. A warning for mild language.
Date: 07/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: Where Laughter Dies
Really excellent, well done story. You have Regulus exactly like he should be, and Sirius' relationship with his moother is done just right. I like how he does have a few good memories, pre-hogwarts, and how he and Regulus are so alike and yet very different. Sirius' feelings about the portraits in his house are really funny, how he enjoys offendong them, tho I'm surprised he doesn't do that with Nigellus. Peter's house and family sound very funny, no clues as to if they are magical or not, though, or to how Peter went bad. Still, that wouldn't really be releveant here but it moght be interesting in another story. Excellent job.
Date: 01/12/06 Title: None
oh! I like the new chapter! That Madam Hooch thinks that they like each other...I was laughing! This is a really great story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you laughed!
Date: 12/26/05 Title: None
I didn't think I would, but I really enjoyed your story! Definetely one of the funniest I've read. Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens to all the free trial people. How will Fred and George choose for the people they know- randomly, or purposely picking people who hate each other. I am very curious! Rating you a nine, I think. Good job.
Author's Response: I'm glad you decided to give it a chance! I love Fred and George, it should get quite interesting with those two in charge.
Date: 12/19/05 Title: None
Good story! I really enjoyed reading it. I like how it's Harry and Cho, that's really cute! The characters were really well-done. You did have some typos.Why didn't Summer and Arielle know each other before, though? I would think Harry, Ron and Hermione would see each other pretty often even if they lived in different cities. Also, how would Draco's daughter ever get the idea that Muggleborns are okay? I doubt she was just born like that, did she have someone else who influenced her like that a little bit? I am very curious to see what happens next. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! The reason that Arielle and Summer never saw each other before is because they lived very very far away, and were really busy with their own lives. And Mariah thinks Muggleborns are okay because she saw where the hate got her father, and she also had a very down to Earth mother.
Poison by Lillian Potter
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary:
The Second War is about to begin, and the poison weaves through the air... Please review!!! It doesn't take that long, and you have no idea how grateful I am!!! I hope you enjoy this poem, it was originally on Luisse Lowry's novel, Children of the Dust :-)
Date: 01/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: Poison
creepy! Wait, you mean second war as in Voldemort returns, right? If this was an English assignment. Well written. 10!
Author's Response: Yes, the Second Wizarding War, in Harry's seventh year probably... I adapted it from a poem i had done before... Thanks for reviewing, it's very special,
Lily Potter
Remember Cedric Diggory by Roommate of the Quillster
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary:
You may have heard of a tall, dark and handsome Hufflepuff... Prefect of his house, favored to be the next Head Boy, and Hogwart's champion. I am that champion; I am Cedric Diggory...
And if you think I'm really like that, that's sad. I'm the nice guy. Not boring, nice. Sometimes I get a bit carried away. I think Ed is having a bad influence on me. He's a bit egotistical, but he's one of my best friends anyway. People in Hufflepuff aren't as lame as they're made out to be. My best friend Porter is muggleborn and says some of the craziest things--half of them I've never even heard of! Maybe I should just tell you everything. Then you'd understand.
Date: 02/06/06 Title: Chapter 2: Go Get Your Own Broom, This Elephant is Mine...
aww, I like the little girl. I was laughing so hard at that scene- I rarely do that. Very well written, and Cedric is an interesting character. You are doing a good job.
How Did It Happen? by Lilypudding
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Andromeda Black has haunted by the horrors of her past. Her daughter hates her, her one true friend is insane, and she has no family . All she has is the echoes of the half-life she once had, and the guilt of the horrors her sisters commited and how she was unable to change them when they were young. Tired of her horrible life, she takes up her pen and writes Narcissa and Bellatrix a letter about her life. A/n- This is purely a letter fic!
Date: 01/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: Dear Narcissa and Bellatrix...
oh, brilliant! well written, good grammar, nice plot and great characters! The way they all act and Andromeda's feelings are all so perfect! one thing- the paragraph when she gets sorted, you say Sirius was sorted 11 years later and then you say he was the only Black she knew in Gryffindor. I really, really liked this- very well done.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Leahr! Great catch with the Sirius thing! I originally planned for Sirius, the Marauders, and Lily to be in Andromeda's year, but the moderator rejected it... I've gotta fix that! I'm glad you liked it, I worked really hard it. I really appreciate your review! Thank you so much!
A Different Man by lmageous
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: What would have happened if Tom Riddle Sr. had stayed with Merope, and fallen in love with her himself? What would have happened if Merope and Tom Sr. raised Tom Jr. together? What would have happened if Voldemort had chosen to go down a different path, be a different man, and not the cruel Dark Lord? A one-shot.
Date: 02/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Different Man
Wow. That's all I can say. What an interesting idea for a story! I like the parallel to Harry during the sorting, when he asks not to be in slytherin and how he is not afraid of death like he is as Voldemort. His friendship with Albus and Minerva is very ironic too. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks
Tragedies, Tears and Black Velvet Boxes by Oppungo
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: It's nearly six months after the war, and when Molly Weasley reads the days' newspaper, in it is an article that forces her to reminisce over the events of the war, the effects of it on her life and the lives of those close to her. Meanwhile, Ron has news of his own…
Date: 05/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: News
No! No! No! When I got to the last line I gasped out loud. You do like to scare people, don't you? Aaaaaah! Evil! Noooo! By the way, I don't think I've ever reacted to a fic like this before, so feel honored. Nooooo! It's not true! It's a lie! Ron, it's okay! NOOOOO! I think I should stop now.
Author's Response: Thank you! I do feel honoured to have had that effect on you - thanks! To be honest - yes, I do quite like to scare people like that! I\'m really sorry, but it\'s not a lie. It\'s true. Well, it is in this story anyway! Sorry, Ron, it\'s not really okay at all. Sorry! Lol, thanks for reviewing!!
A Sirius Dilemma by ElspethBates
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
At sixteen, Sirius looked forward to summer holiday until he was banished to Scotland. Unable to use magic, he’s faced with a dilemma. How to impress a pretty villager? With a little help from his friends. . . SBOC
Date: 04/09/06 Title: Chapter 12: A Walk In The Wood
this is another really good one! how do you do it? I like Regulus, and Morag is a lot nicer than she seemed at first. I wonder what Lucius is up to.
Author's Response: Without Kerichi, I wouldn't be able to do it! She knows just what sort of questions to ask to make my mind start whirling around plotting out the next chapter! I can't really tell what Lucius is up to... I haven't written it yet! LOL
Date: 03/15/06 Title: Chapter 8: Formal Dress Robes
another fast update. this was very short though, and I didn't like the joke. still, good job.
Author's Response: Thanks for coming back and reviewing again! Sorry you didn't like the joke but sometimes these chapters write themselves...
Date: 01/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Banished
Nice story- definetely much better than most typical Sirius stories I've read. I am very curious to see what happens next. This is very well written. I am enjoying it- what mischief can a wandless Sirius get into? Please update very soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. It's always great to get reviews wanting to know what happens next. Chapter 2 is in Queue!
Date: 01/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Banished
Sorry, before I forget- isn't it Dilemma, not Delimma? Or is that on purpose? Thanks! I added you to my favorites by the way, and I don't do that very often.
Author's Response: hmmm My spell checker says it's dilemma not delimma... So I just trusted that. I'm really pleased to hear you put me on your fav!!! Thank you!!!
Date: 03/29/06 Title: Chapter 10: Plots and Plans
Nice chapter again, also too short. I really love you writing style, it's so much fun. Is it normal for wizards to have spare wands? Wand chooses the wizard and all that. Also, fix your comma use in this chapter in a few places. Good work!
Author's Response: I know the chapters have been pretty short lately, but I do believe that when I get to the betrothal ceremony chapter, it should be long enough for you!
Date: 02/20/06 Title: Chapter 5: The Library
This one was really funny. good job! The line about how the library is the reason he likes the town now... You have an interesting sense of humor. Please keep updating! How do you do it so fast?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I do try to be funny... As for how I keep updating so fast, you can thank my beta Kerichi... she keeps me motivated and helps me to keep a bit ahead of what's posted so I can update weekly!
Date: 02/06/06 Title: Chapter 3: Unexpected Help
oh, this is cute! I don't like how the Black sisters use nicknames constantly. Who is Rudy anyway? Is harder to tell who's who, and if they are enemies I'd expect full names at least occasionally. I like how you portray Andromeda, and her relationship with Sirius and the other Blacks. It's really fun, her reaction to his doggy form. I like this chapter, nicely done. 10!
Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear that you don't like the nicknames... Rudy is Rudophus LeStrange. I expect they will use full names when anyone but family is around... they'll have to keep up appearences won't they? Thanks for coming back and reviewing again!
Date: 07/19/06 Title: None
Beautifully written- be nice if JKR had had that happen, but I'm firmly and unshakably in the "Snape, whether he is good or evil, is not a nice guy" category- aka, I can't decide what side he's on but either way he isn't polite. This is an excellent possibility, though. I've been meaning to review this for a while but kept not getting around to it, sorry, but at least I am now. Good reason for why being called a coward bothered him. I wonder if he did do that Legilimency, then....
Well written.