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03/15/10




Name- Lill.
Age- Fourteen.
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Movie- Steel Magnolias.
Religion- Christian (Southern Baptist).
Song- She Will Be Loved (Maroon 5).
Singer- Taylor Swift.
Genre- Poetry.
House on the Forums- Gryffindor.
Username on the Forums- therightdirection316.
Drink- Iced tea.
Addiction- My cellphone.
Can't Live Without- My friends.



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The Dance We Do by Equinox Chick

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Amelia Bones is a diligent student. Head Girl, with a handsome and well-connected boyfriend, she has her whole future mapped out for her.

She does not expect to fall in love quite so hard, and quite so fast with someone totally unsuitable.

I am Equinox Chick from Hufflepuff and this is my entry fot the February Love Challenge - category Forbidden Love - in the Great Hall on the MNFF beta boards.

I am indebted to Natalie (hestiajones) for beta'ing this fic and for all her support whilst I was writing it.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. I doubt that surprises anyone.

The Dance We Do won the QSQ in 2010 for Best Same Sex Pairing. Thank you.


Reviewer: avagh Signed
Date: 12/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Dance We Do

I have never read anything so heartbreakingly beautiful.

Author's Response: Oh! Thank you very much. The end makes me cry a little bit, I must admit. ~Carole~



Xanthe, Interrupted by Equinox Chick

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Ten years after her mother's death, Luna Lovegood decides to ask her father what her mother was brewing. Unsatisfied with his reply, she turns to one of his employees, Lavender Brown, and asks for help to investigate the truth.

Lavender is unsure this is a wise course of action, but like Luna, she doesn't quite believe Xenophilius' version of events.

This is Equinox Chick of Hufflepuff and this is my entry in the Mysterious May Great Hall Challenge - prompt Extra Credit.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. That shouldn't surprise anyone.

Thank you so much, Gina (Gmariam) for beta'ing this tale and whipping Luna into shape. You are zechadly amazing!

Thank you, Natalie, for suggesting Xanthe's maiden name.
Reviewer: avagh Signed
Date: 07/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Buttercups

I just cannot explain to you how very talented you are.
I have yet to read anything of yours that just does not simply leave me speechless.

This story was beautifully, seamlessly written and it was very, very original.

I love how you balance the line between right and wrong here...
'suicide isn't a crime, but assisting one is.'
Or is it, when you're sparing a family pain?
Really made me think, right there..

I just don't think Xeno would ever tell Luna. For some reason, I just think that the lie is too deeply ingrained in him to ever admit the truth.

10/10

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review and the kind words about the story and my writing. I found this difficult to write because Luna is so hard to characterise without turning her into a caricature. I think Xeno will tell her the truth now, but only because Lavender's made him face up to it. If he doesn't, then Luna will lose all faith in him and that would be so sad. But then again, he might tell her a version of the truth. Thanks again ~Carole~